Name: Mars reviewed Chapter 13 on Apr 24, 2010 02:00 am

For some reason, the first thing to pop into my mind when I finished the chapter was that the crate had something to do with Crystal Palace... Terrible, I know - BUT I'll be thinking about this all day now so hopefully the next time I review I'll actually have a theory.

On that note: can't wait for the next chapter!! I love your writing style, especially how you've expanded Ginny's character.

Author's Response: Very VERY good guess... ;) Somebody has been picking up on clues. And thanks for the good words about Ginny's character development.

Name: Nutmeg44 reviewed Chapter 13 on Apr 23, 2010 04:33 pm

Interesting... Is Lucius really dead? Because I'm getting the impression that he isn't completely dead and that's the problem the DoM is having. Old Lucius is following her I just haven't figured out why and the box opened for it's mistress which means that it's either full of stuff she will will acquire in her future life with Draco or it has stuff that will let her understand what's happening now. I think :. That's all I can think of right now. School is seriously cutting into my D/G time. Oh yeah, awesome chapter. :]

Author's Response: I love the theories-- all I'll say is that some are a lot closer than others. ;) Thanks!

Name: openskys reviewed Chapter 12 on Apr 22, 2010 01:42 am

Was papa Malfoy on the cart with Ginny? That's the only explanation I can think of. Anyways amazing chapter I laughed a couple times and shook my head a couple times. It's going to get more confusing the farther it gets isn't it?

Author's Response: Well, HOPEFULLY it won't get more confusing!! There actually is a plan to tie everything together, and we're getting to the part that was really already written before anything was posted at all.

Name: darkseeker116 reviewed Chapter 12 on Apr 21, 2010 06:49 pm

So far this is my favorite chapter. And still the plot thickens :-)

Name: MK Richie reviewed Chapter 12 on Apr 20, 2010 07:12 pm

I like where this story is going. Draco always seems so surprising and multi-layered, and Ginny continues to impress me with her blind faith in Draco and her bravery. I'm pretty sure Draco has something do with paying for her studio, and I think Lucius may have been the "undercover auror". Like I've mentioned before, I like Blaise and Luna, and I think Harry and Hermione are dating now. However, the one element that I did not like was the use of the cell phone; it feels terribly convienient that all of them have cell phones when ( i dont think) they were introduced earlier. But maybe they were and I just didn't pay attention. My point is that I understand their usage, but I was just surprised that they would all carry them. Can't wait for the next update! =)

Name: Nutmeg44 reviewed Chapter 12 on Apr 20, 2010 01:54 pm

I can never get those to straight either. SoI'm guessing Lucius was the mysterious blond in the cart next to Ginny. That's all I have so far. I only have bursts of genius when I'm stressing about exams, I'm afraid. Fun chapter though. Next one please.

Author's Response: Very very GOOD guess. That's all I'm going to say. ;)

Name: maximumtrouble10 reviewed Chapter 12 on Apr 20, 2010 01:19 pm

Haha--Stalactites and stalagmites :) I think I'll know the difference between them too. Hopefully, Ginny will see a certain stalagmite soon :)

And I love Ginny's "Steering. Give me." She is certifiably crazy! But the fact that you make her that way through her actions and the words of other characters not just "Ginny was crazy" is absolutely fantastic. Also, the fact that goblins can text? and the name Crumblygrotts? And the mixed up way of speaking? Pretty darn awesome :)

Now, question/theory/observations time--you mention (or rather Draco says) Loki. Is that just a curse or is there some other significant meaning? Also, Ginny says "it's like seeing the devil's smile". Is that a hint that Draco is somehow related to the devil? (like in your 19 years later story)? And who is the blonde person under the illusion in the cart that Ginny sees? Is this a Nick-ish character aka an omniscient totally cool being that munches on snacks while musing on how to manipulate other people to provide entertainment? And, therefore, are Draco's threatening words to Ginny before he realizes that it's Ginny actually directed at this figure, not specifically the Aurors, but the fact that the Aurors are somehow being "guided" into capturing Draco? Or are the Aurors *cough Harry and Hermione* just jerks?

Also, I wasn't as irritated with Harry and Hermione in this chapter, but that is probably because they didn't speak much. :)

Please update soon! (and let me know how insanely unrelated my theories are :) )

Author's Response: Somebody has made a very very good guess as to the ID of the blond who fell off the cart, and he's not Nick. But yes, Draco thought at first that he was actually talking to him rather than to Ginny. Harry and Hermione are behaving like jerks, but as always, Harry does it because he thinks he's right. And I love that you love Ginny's craziness! Yes, she is a tad bit crazy right now...

Name: The Ordinary Princess reviewed Chapter 12 on Apr 20, 2010 04:54 am

I really like this story so keep updating :) What does Loki mean?

Author's Response: See above... ;)

Name: MK Richie reviewed Chapter 11 on Apr 18, 2010 09:19 am

Wowza! So many things are happen, so many questions, no answers in sight... !! I really am enjoying this story. I do think Lucius Malfoy is alive. I do not think there are "two" Dracos, but I do think something very fishy is going on. I dislike Harry and Hermione immensely, and I be they're dating right now. They deserve each other. Hmm, what else. I like Luna and Blaise ;). I do hope Ginny trusts Draco, I am almost sure that she has already decided in her deepest part that she does trust him, so I hope he doesn't go and screw it up! You have a great knack for introducing plot ideas and then covering them up with distracting elements that make them almost go unnoticed. The department of mysteries is probably talking about the weird "dream" where Lucius almost kidnaps Ginny....oh, well. Can't wait for an update! =] Oh, and I did love how Dean was loyal to Ginny in there. PS I really hope Harry and Hermione get it in the end! Thanks for writing!

Name: crazinessishappiness reviewed Chapter 11 on Apr 16, 2010 09:41 pm

Oh you're leaving me in such a dreadful suspense! Delciously written chapter..can't wait to see more. Have fun with studying though! =]

Name: erinem reviewed Chapter 11 on Apr 16, 2010 01:10 am

“Just Stun me and leave me lying on the floor, if you wouldn’t mind,” said Luna. “Otherwise, it’ll cause ever so much bother, because they’ll say I let you escape.”
“All right,” said Ginny. “But it’s only because of our deep friendship, understand.”
“Thanks awfully,” said Luna, arranging herself neatly on the floor in preparation.

--I adore your Luna :)

Author's Response: I just love this Luna too.

Name: harrypottersucks reviewed Chapter 11 on Apr 15, 2010 08:18 pm

Oooh, I just love photoDracoGinny! they're just too adorable...though I do hope real Draco makes a reappearance soon. Wow, Hermione and Harry really are complete twits though, making poor Gin go through those tests just so they could get Draco, gah I really want to bash Harry's head in... Hmmm, I suppose the fact that there was Malfoy activity according to Hermione in Lyme Regis is evidence that Lucius is alive and concocting some evil death eater plot? I love the fact that this fic is your supposed "tame" plot bunny, and yet no one can guess it and that only eleven chaps in there's already so many questions, like the crates! and Marie! which is why I love your fics so much, they're completely unpredictable and epically awesome!

Will Loki be popping in anytime soon? I really do miss his craziness and the rest of the immortals, even though their eventual appearance usually causes even more trouble for Draco and Gin and leads to the crazy plot bunnies multiplying exponentially....

Another amazing chap as usual, can't wait to see what happens next!

Author's Response: You just may get your wish very soon. ;) Some very good guesses too! Yes, believe it or not, this is the tame plot bunny. I think all that means is that it's not a completely rabid Plot Bunny of Death and Doom that hops away with the entire plot, laughing maniacally.Everything is planned out (believe it or not), but that doesn't mean it isn't complicated, as readers are starting to figure out. I love the "only eleven chaps in" part, because I think you've figured something out about my fics... "only" is right. ;) I'm not even going to SAY how many chapters I ALREADY have written. But it all keeps evolving in response to reviews!

Name: Bebe reviewed Chapter 11 on Apr 15, 2010 04:57 pm

First of all, I have no idea what you're talking about when you said that you're going to reveal a plot point. You lost me with your explanation. Lol! I love reading your stories because they're not fluffy and because they challenge my work weary mind. I'm horrible at reviews, but I shall keep trying because of my deep and abiding love for your writing. Thanks for updating so quickly!

Author's Response: I"ll try to explain it a little better in the next chapter. It probably was confusing. Thank you so much!