Name: Akt5us reviewed
Chapter 2 on May 08, 2010 04:51 pm
This is an interesting story! I can't wait to read more! :)
Name: avdreader reviewed
Chapter 2 on Apr 19, 2010 11:27 am
Another good chapter.
Name: HumbugGirl reviewed
Chapter 2 on Apr 18, 2010 01:41 pm
Really liked them going after Mundungus together, and I liked the fact that Draco reacted to the way he mucked up. Very Draco like.
Name: HumbugGirl reviewed
Chapter 1 on Apr 18, 2010 12:24 pm
"He was charming the beer mats to fight."
I want to be able to do that. Seriously, how much fun would that be?
There was some great dialogue in this - loads of witty one-liners. My favourite bit was the mention of their history - the post-battle drinking. Draco's speech about changing and yet not changing was really well written.
Author's Response: I think it's the little things that would make magic such a great thing to have!
Thank you very much for reading, my dear :)
Name: pitzi reviewed
Chapter 2 on Apr 18, 2010 12:01 am
I really like it. Are we to expect Draco to pull some dirty trick on Ginny?
Name: CenizaAzul reviewed
Chapter 1 on Apr 17, 2010 02:43 pm
I'm really enjoying this story! The dialogue is so believable, and I like that D/G already have a history. I look forward to seeing how that plays out as they try to catch the thief!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, I'm glad you like it.
Name: MargretKelley reviewed
Chapter 1 on Apr 16, 2010 02:19 pm
I love it so far! I do have to ask though, is that thick orange liquid Savage was drinking polyjuice potion? If it is, just who sent Ginny on this case?!
Author's Response: Interesting questions :) I'm glad you're enjoying it!
Name: jingsquared reviewed
Chapter 1 on Apr 15, 2010 08:19 am
I found this to be a very enjoyable starting chapter for what sounds like a very interesting ride for our two intrepid heroes.
I like the hints about their past and very curious to see how it all develops. I'm especially excited about the mystery plot - I like my stories to have more than just romance!
I look forward to reading more from you soon (I hope!)
Author's Response: Thank you for reading, I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Name: jingsquared reviewed
Chapter 1 on Apr 15, 2010 08:18 am
I found this to be a very enjoyable starting chapter for what sounds like a very interesting ride for our two intrepid heroes.
I like the hints about their past and very curious to see how it all develops. I'm especially excited about the mystery plot - I like my stories to have more than just romance!
I look forward to reading more from you soon (I hope!)
Name: Jack Tamara reviewed
Chapter 1 on Apr 14, 2010 07:41 pm
'This is sort of dirty,' she said, 'letting you touch me in a dark alley.'
Haha, best line ever. Let's hope D and G get a lot dirtier. Good job and please update soon!
XOXO, JT
Author's Response: I'm sure they will indeed get dirtier :) Thank you for reading!
Name: slitherhither reviewed
Chapter 1 on Apr 13, 2010 10:38 pm
Ooh, the tension! What a fabulous beginning. Great use of obscure HP factoids — makes it feel truly in the non-Muggle world. I adore your work and am thrilled to see something new by you.
Author's Response: How kind of you to say! Thank you so much for reading.
Name: avdreader reviewed
Chapter 1 on Apr 13, 2010 02:12 pm
Enjoyed the first chapter. Looking forward to the next.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it :)
Name: hummie reviewed
Chapter 1 on Apr 13, 2010 12:24 pm
oh, very nice! i really enjoyed how you opened up the chapters. i cannot wait for the next chapter! please update regularly! thank you :)
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I hope to have the next chapter complete within a week or so, assuming real life doesn't interfere too much!
Name: like a falling star reviewed
Chapter 1 on Apr 13, 2010 10:10 am
What a promising start! I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. :)
Author's Response: Thanks for reading! I'm working on the next chapter and hope to have it complete within the next week or so.
Name: pitzi reviewed
Chapter 1 on Apr 13, 2010 09:16 am
looks like an interesting story. Good luck!
Author's Response: Thank you!