Great story! I actually cried. You can feel the struggle and love. Thanks for writing it!
I decided to spend an hour re-reading this! I still love this story with all my heart. It still devastates me. Great job!
I couldn't stop reading this from start to finish. Absolutely loved it! Extremely well written, very creative, and so sweet. I cried at the end when they both died. So sad. Lovely fic!
i wasnt expecting them to die, but this is PERFECT. amazing job (:
Just read this again, and just cried again. You are amazing.
Oh, my gods. I thought I was going to die crying. That was utterly devastating and amazing and fantastic and brilliant at the same time. You, Jessica Malfoy, have got to be my favourtie DG writer of all time. And that place has been held by only a few good writers. I love you for writing this. It was so good.
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Alex.
God, that was not the ending I was expecting. Heartbreaking and beautiful.
OMG..You made me cry..Again..It was beautiful and perfectly written..Thank you for this..Made my day..
p.s.You have amazing writing skills..keep it up:)
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! so sad, and perfectly bittersweet. absolutely mving.. fantastic! loved it :)
Wow, that was beautiful :) Thank you for writing such an amazing story. Does it come with a free box of tissues?
I almost cried reading this! Normally I stay away from stories with the 'Character Death' warning but this was done amazingly and they still ended up together. I want to reread it already! Wonderful job!
Fantastic, bittersweet and wonderfully written!!
This was a perfect ending to this story and so beautiful! Thank you :D
Well, now I can FINALLY leave a review. I like to read other people's reviews, you see, and there have been some unfortunate incidents of endings being revealed early IN reviews when these multichapter fic-exchange fics are published here.
Anyway... a beautifully heartbreaking fic, of course, and it became apparent at some indefinable point that Draco and
Ginny just weren't going to escape in a traditional sense. But I still think that they *did* escape, because they learned to love each other. All I can say is that this particular afterlife had better follow the Nicene Creed (or is it the Apostle's Creed?), which includes a resurrection of the body, so that they can have heavenly sex. :) After that kiss, though, I think it's likely.
Author's Response: yeah, i was a little bummed by the early spoilers, but i didn't know what to say about them. :(i feel kinda fan-girlish that you are reviewing btw! lol
i haven't heard of heavenly sex, but i am all for it! woo! and yes, it did become really clear when i was doing a 2nd draft that they were not going to reasonable "escape" so my betas convinced me to scrap the ending i had a write a new one. thank you for reviewing!
Well, now I feel like I can say something more meaningful than "OMG".
The story was amazing, your writing very talented and able to make us "feel" too deeply (you even make me cry!).
The plot was very interesting and the best end I could imagine.
Awesome.
Well, now I feel like I can say something more meaningful than "OMG".
The story was amazing, your writing very talented and able to make us "feel" too deeply (you even make me cry!).
The plot was very interesting and the best end I could imagine.
Awesome.
This story was so beautiful and sad. It made me cry the first time and it's making me teary now. Love it, Jess!
OMG... I'm actually speechless, don't know what to say. I think I'll review later. OMG
Author's Response: I'm just going to assume that's good & say thank you ;-D
That was so much better than any ending I could have come up with. Thanks for that.
Author's Response: Thank you! I tried to make it happier (the person who requested it wanted a "happy" ending) but that was as good as I could get. I kept trying to do an Oh Yay They Escaped ending, but it just didn't work.
Ohhh, I loved this. I want to cry. I knew they were going to do, I just knew it. But I never imagined it would be so painfully beautiful. *dabs eyes* The story still says it's a work in progress. You might want to change it.
You did a great job, and you deserved the award you got.
Author's Response: Oh thank you very much! I did change it last night, but I will change it again :) and I was over the moon thrilled to get that award. Its my 1st d/g award!
I hope we get to read about their escape. Oh and you can tell Ginny and Draco that Guam is always sweltering hot if they are interested.
Author's Response: well, the final chapter is up, so you get to read about...whatever happens! and I think they'd prefer the heat, at least for a while! LOL
Oh my god! I was really worried they were going to die in this chapter but I'm so happy they didn't. Yay queens is dead she was awful! I hope they find a spell to let them out, I recommend touture for the next DE that comes by so they can out the spell.
Author's Response: *giggles* thanks for your review. I can't really answer any of these suggestions, but I can tell you the final chapter is up now :)
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!! How bittersweet :'( Can't wait for the next one!
Author's Response: thank you :D
I really love this story! I'm so glad to see an update.
Author's Response: thank you! and thanks for leaving a comment!