Reviews For Christmas in Hell
Name: RiddleNoelMalfoy reviewed Malfoy Manor & the Meeting of Kora on Jul 20, 2011 04:21 pm
Lolzzz draco got pwned:))
Name: Paranoid_Schemer reviewed Chapter 11 on Jul 05, 2011 01:31 am
IT WAS WORTH THE WAIT!!! lol

If waiting for a new chapter is going to be this awesome everytime, then I can be patient lol. The excitement of this chapter was enough to distract me from the cliff hanger it ended with >.< I can only hope that Ginny has no feelings of attraction about the man she was dreaming with, it'd be kind of wrong to be dreaming about another man she wants to be with while in the bed of another :( I also love the way that Ginny doesn't lose character in that she's still trying to forget the pain, in respect to the scene where she first starts drinking. I like the way that you wrote her inebriated state (lol I too have felt my mind go fuzzy on various occasions) and the smut was written tastefully in my opinion. I was a bit shocked when Draco came to the conclusion that he loved her and that he'd said it first, it makes him vulnerable which is quite different from the admission of love seen in other stories between Ginny and Draco. I really liked this chapter because it consolidates the feelings that Draco has developed for Ginny thus far. Really great chapter, keep up the good work :)

Author's Response: Firstly, let me say how great your review is. It made me feel terrific! 12 will be up whenever Anise finishes beta-ing it. She has a lot on her plate, so I've no idea when that will be. But it will be worth the wait again. The cliff hanger is a MUST. As soon as 12 is up, you'll see who the man is... well not WHO... but... you'll get it. Draco admitting his feelings first is a big deal. I mean, he IS a Malfoy, and if you love someone and they love you, said person will be yours. You've seen what he's willing to do to protect his family. ALSO, there is a reason why he said it first. A big reason. A reason that might have been hinted at in two chapters. *whistles innocently* I appreciate your love for this story. It won't be abandoned. It may take awhile at times, but it is going on and on. I'm actually hoping it doesn't become too long, like Anise's work. But I think it shouldn't be more than 30 chapters. The drunk scene is also importantttt. Or well... part of it. It won't be mentioned until later. Much later. But something in 11 effects 12. Done with the hints! You'll see more soon!
Name: GoldenFawkes reviewed Of Death Eater Meetings on Jun 30, 2011 01:02 am
I just can't reconcile the different facets of Draco's personality. He's proud and strong sometimes, then he's a Death Eater who enjoys killing and torturing, then he's scared of Voldemort, then he's suddenly incredibly attracted to Ginny... He kind of sounds like he has multiple personalities.

Author's Response: A few personalities in one body... actually... he does. But we find out more about that later on. Also, Voldemort is intimidating. Bellatrix loves him, but when he casts the Killing Curse in Gringotts, she runs for her life, out of fear. This is one scary dude. Just like Lucius loved him, and then was scared shitless to have him in his house. You get taken to an empty field, with a well known murderer, you'd be scared. I tried to pull from the books the Malfoys experience. But I appreciate all of your feedback. It lets me know that I should insert a few bigger clues about what exactly is going on with Draco's personality change. I hope it doesn't turn you off from the story. If it does, I hope another one that I write in the future will live up to your standards. =)
Name: GoldenFawkes reviewed Crawling in My Skin on Jun 30, 2011 12:42 am
Draco and Ginny's characters aren't very steady. Flying from one extreme mood to the next without much explanation for why it's happening. It's a bit difficult to follow.

I don't mean this as an insult; I'm trying to give you feedback. I'm still reading on, so obviously you're still doing a good job!

Author's Response: To explain Ginny's character, it is all related to her having PTSD. She WILL fly from one extreme to another. Also, it is hinted at in another chapter WHY their characters are changing. Narcissa has a conversation with one of the Fates/Destiny. If you read it carefully, and then continue on, it will all come together.
Name: GoldenFawkes reviewed Runnin' Up That Hill on Jun 30, 2011 12:32 am
I'm very confused about why Draco would feel loyalty to Voldemort when he clearly doesn't give a shit about Draco.

Author's Response: I'd like to point out that Voldemort cares about no one, yet all his Death Eaters love him. Lucius Malfoy loved him until his family fell from his good grace. In this story, that never happened. Therefore, Draco still feels like he's the best.
Name: icthestrals reviewed Chapter 11 on Jun 28, 2011 10:06 pm
Wowsa! That was hot. Oh, to be alone on a private beach with Draco. And I love the cliffie!

Author's Response: It IS hot, isn't it! The cliffer is the first of many to come. ;o)
Name: Anise reviewed Chapter 11 on Jun 27, 2011 07:11 pm
WQO-HOO! She finally published the chapter! Yay.:) Oh, I do love this chapter. Why? Um... It's so... sweet and nice. (bats eyelashes innocently.) Seriously, though, we can really see how Draco can actually feel tender emotions, how he can truly love Ginny and want desperately to please her, and yet not actually lay aside any of his ruthlessness. Because in truth, he hasn't; it's all still there, just not where Ginny is concerned. And I haven't read the next chapter yet, so even *I* don't know what happens when we fall off the cliff (runs after dykeadellic)

Author's Response: You're always right. How can you be always right?!?! But the next chapter is crazy, doll. You'll be wicked proud! Draco might lose a bit of his ruthfulness-yness for a few chapters. But it WILL come back. In full force. Yay! Plus the number seven. You'll have to help me reign this fic in. Otherwise, this might be longer than yours, dearest. *attempts to run faster than Anise and starts failing*
Name: o_ginny_o reviewed Chapter 10 on May 13, 2011 07:21 am
Write more!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: As you wish. It has been updated. When they will post the chapter I don't know. Don't worry, I've written two chapters today. We'll see a LOT more of this soon!
Name: DracoxXxGinny reviewed Chapter 10 on May 10, 2011 05:36 pm
Aww too cute :), ;) I'm excited for the french villa part, I absolutely loved the part where Draco wanted to kiss her :D, keep up the good work, as usual you write really well.

- DracoxXxGinny
Name: darkness_faerie88 reviewed Chapter 10 on Apr 17, 2011 08:10 pm
I like how this story is developing :) great job...update soon :)
Name: lele129 reviewed Crawling in My Skin on Apr 14, 2011 07:07 pm
Personally, I would be so embarassed if I were punching and kicking on a guy when I was stark naked. That sounded absolutely dreadful! It was interesting all the Same, though. Great job with this chapter. =•)

Author's Response: She would have, but she snapped. When a person snaps, they tend to not realize WHAT is going on. However, do you think that too much? If so, please let me know. I want to improve my writing throught this story.
Name: lele129 reviewed Runnin' Up That Hill on Apr 14, 2011 06:56 pm
Hey! This story is really good, you know. I really like your description and choice of words. They really bring axstory to life. ^,^ I'm going to read the next chapter now. Ciao for now. (ur writing is as amazing as ever!)

Author's Response: Why thank you so much, doll!
Name: lele129 reviewed Malfoy Manor & the Meeting of Kora on Apr 14, 2011 06:47 pm
Aww, this chapter was sort of adorable ^,^ I dunno why I'm saying that exactly, but I read it yesterday and am only just now getting a chance to review it. Either way, I' m definitely going to keep reading. =•)
Name: Paranoid_Schemer reviewed Chapter 10 on Apr 13, 2011 09:27 pm
So I wanted to delay the reading of this chapter just in case there would be another update before I was caught up, but I have failed miserably. I couldn't help it, I had to read and then it ended on a cliff hanger >.< I am anxiously awaiting the very next chapter :) I really like the way Draco and Ginny's relationship is developing. Ginny's PTSD is described very accurate, to me at least, and the soothing relationship Draco provides to help her cope is perfect. It's not like other stories where Draco steps in immediately to save her and she falls in love with him. I like that her feelings are developing and the attraction grows, as do her feelings, with every chapter that we come across. If you can't tell I'm in love with your story lol. I know you must get tired of this but; please update soon! ;)

Author's Response: I NEVER get tired of being told that my story is good and you want more! Chapter 11 will be up when this chapter is bumped off, and chapter 12 is getting a bit of a makeover, but there will be more! And thanks so much! Ginny's PTSD is based off my own experiences with it. Obviously I had no Draco. Sad. =(
Name: lele129 reviewed A Proposition on Apr 12, 2011 07:21 pm
For your first story in a really long time, I've got to say... You have definitely got some natural born writing talent. This is a very unique plot line, one I never once would have even guessed at (lol, J.K. Rowling as a squib). I can't wait to read the next chapter. =)

Author's Response: That comment is very much appreciated and loved. I want nothing more than to write, actually! The plot will continue to take twists and turns, and everything will come together. This i going to be longer than anticipated originally, but I hope you stick with it!
Name: icthestrals reviewed Chapter 10 on Apr 12, 2011 06:19 pm
Yay! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: It is already written, and after one more look through it will be ready to go up! Afer 10 days, of course. =)
Name: Boogum reviewed Chapter 6 on Mar 24, 2011 07:38 pm
The mysterious Lia makes her appearance again. I do wonder what is going on and why Kora killed this woman.

Nice to see Draco and Ginny warming to each other, even if it is only because of that spell.

Author's Response: Lia and Kora are key characters in this story. That is all I will say. ;o)
Name: Akt5us reviewed Chapter 9 on Mar 24, 2011 12:58 pm
I really like this and I am curious to see how Ginny takes Draco proposal. I like how he wants to marry ginny! I can't wait to read more! :)

Author's Response: IF he proposes. *coughs*
Name: DracoxXxGinny reviewed A Proposition on Mar 23, 2011 03:40 pm
I love that i made you night, and twists are welcome, they'll just make me want to read the story more! :)

Author's Response: Then be sure to hold tight because there will be a few in chapter 11 and 12.
Name: DracoxXxGinny reviewed Chapter 9 on Mar 21, 2011 06:36 pm
wow, this has to be one the best AU Draco and Ginny stories i have read in a long time, also i love the whole part where Draco wants to bring Ginny to France (AWWW :))))) and i think he's gonna be surprised when Ginny returns his slight forming feelings now; he is so harsh on himself but thats to be expected with the whole complicated statement murders, but at least Ginny would know he kills for reason only (justified in this story's society only) and best line:"Yes, he thought, he could get used to hearing that every day." awwwwwwww :))))))) anyway excited for the next chapter and i know its gonna be great :D -DracoxXxGinny

Author's Response: Your review made me extremely happy. I've been working on English homework for hours already, and I get to see this lovely review!! I have to warn you though, the upcoming chapters will take some unexpected twists. Not even my beta has seen this one coming. Or these two *cough*. It really is unexpected, and it may have BRIEFLY been hinted at... maybe;). Again, thank you so much! Your review has made my night!
Name: icthestrals reviewed Chapter 9 on Mar 20, 2011 11:29 am
Really enjoying this story. I always look forward to reading the next chapter.

Author's Response: So glad you like it! The next chapter will be up in about 11 days, when this chapter has been bumped off. Thanks again!
Name: Mungihead reviewed Chapter 9 on Mar 20, 2011 09:24 am
So, I found this story, and decided to give it a go. Read it all in one setting- fantastic job! I love it!!!! :) Thanks a million for this fantastic chapter- I can't wait for more, especially the Halloween Ball!!! And I wonder what the Fates will have to do about it? And when Draco will propose?...awww :)

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M :)

Author's Response: I'm SO glad you've enjoyed it! I have to admit that Anise has helped keep me on track and has helped me a great deal with this story! I can't give too much away, but there is a LOT more that will happen. The story will take a huge turn soon. ;) xoxo
Name: Boogum reviewed The First Ball on Mar 15, 2011 05:32 pm
Ahh, interesting. So now the fates are part of it. I do wonder what Narcissa is up to, and how Draco and Ginny's falling in love really will stop the war.
Name: Boogum reviewed Crawling in My Skin on Mar 11, 2011 06:43 pm
Poor Ginny doesn't even realise what she's getting herself into. Knowledge, after all, is power, but it can be so easily warped. Voldemort and Draco are being very crafty giving her those particular books.
Name: Boogum reviewed Runnin' Up That Hill on Mar 11, 2011 06:36 pm
I found this chapter a bit confusing in terms of how it flowed together, but that could be because I have some idiot kid playing with a ball right outside my window, distracting me with urges to strangle the little runt.

Anger issues aside, I like how you're writing Voldemort. He's sadistic and controlled, which is the only way to write him, I think. I'm still finding it difficult to understand Draco, but then I am trying to pick up this story again after months of not reading it.

Author's Response: We see more into Draco's mind as time passes. I'm glad that you are trying to read it again! But if anything confuses you, don't hesitate to tell me. I want to be able to do better in the future.
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