Name: lilactree reviewed
Malfoy Manor & the Meeting of Kora on Mar 06, 2011 06:04 am
Narcissa gets my vote for character of the year! She plays 'fierce' very well in this chapter - can't wait to see more of her :)
Author's Response: Thanks! Narcissa is... different. Keep in mind, she will do what a mother must do. Including act. ;)
Name: lilactree reviewed
A Proposition on Mar 05, 2011 09:51 pm
Malfoys only take virgins as wives? LMAO Right 'cause they are plebeian like that :P I do find it a tad weird how this evil society values virginity.. They seem to equate it with purity which really doesn't make sense.. Doesn't purity come from character and not physical attributes? If the DEs were really sadistic you'd think they'd pay top dollar for the slaves with angelic spirits of steel.. Wouldn't that be the ideal victim to 'break'?
Anyways, interesting first chapter -onto the next.
Author's Response: This chapter was based on the 18th and 19th century when men would do just that. At that time, the most horrible, rich men would do whatever they had to in order to make themselves look good. Since Purebloods have been around since, oh, forever, I thought they might easily follow that same way of thinking.
Name: darkness_faerie88 reviewed
Chapter 6 on Oct 11, 2010 12:07 pm
Thank you for the great chapter!
Author's Response: Thank YOU for the review! That always makes me smile!
Name: Nutmeg44 reviewed
Chapter 6 on Oct 11, 2010 09:57 am
Interesting. I'm liking this a lot. I'm so glad Luna is there. What's the relationship between Luna and Blaise? Is she a P.O.W. as well or are they romantic? Is it both? Nice plot and I look forward to the updates.
Author's Response: In a few chapters you will be finding out more about Luna and Blaise. I'm glad you like it!
Name: Akt5us reviewed
The First Ball on Sep 09, 2010 12:03 am
I like how Narcissa has meddled in getting Draco and Ginny together. I can't wait to read more! :)
Author's Response: There is so much more to Narcissa than you know. But you will see it all later. Also, sorry it took so long to update! But I have up to chapter 10 betaed now, so it won't be that long again, promise!
Name: Nickii reviewed
The First Ball on Sep 06, 2010 05:08 pm
I love your style of writing, and although I extremely disliked the first chapter (sorry, but I just hate it when the books are mentioned in a story), you made it up completely with the last few chapters. I would really like to see more of this story. I also really like the role Narcissa is playing, I always have thought of her as a very intresting character. Please update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you! It's hard right now to find time to write while in school, but luckily I wrote ahead so there wouldn't be a problem. Narcissa will be appearing as a more prominent figure very soon. That's all I can say for now.
Name: Tamashii reviewed
The First Ball on Sep 05, 2010 07:11 pm
Interesting
Author's Response: Thank you!
Name: openskys reviewed
The First Ball on Sep 05, 2010 08:29 am
I love it :D
Author's Response: Yay!
Name: Madmoose reviewed
The First Ball on Sep 05, 2010 03:02 am
Fabulous, this story just keeps getting better and better! looking forward to seeing how you intend to progress it
Author's Response: It's going to take a real turn later, let's just leave it at that. ;) With Anise as your beta reader, you learn a bit about suprises.
Name: Jack Tamara reviewed
Crawling in My Skin on Aug 24, 2010 11:00 pm
This is really good! I'm glad that the plot seems to be building and I can't wait to see what else you have in store for us. I just read a story where Ginny gets turned to the dark side (LG, though, not DG). So, right now, I'm interested to see if maybe Draco will escape with her or if she'll change...Anyways, keep up the good work!
XOXO, JT
Author's Response: Thank you! I hope you enjoy future chapters as well!
Name: Prolific Wonder reviewed
Crawling in My Skin on Aug 23, 2010 09:28 pm
I liked the way this has transitioned and fleshed out, but you lost me on this one "the memory of her lips on his chest playing through his mind." Who is he talking about... Ginny?
Author's Response: Wow, that is actually a mistake, that, that got in there. I will fix it in a bit. Thank you for the review! I should update again on the the first of nrxt month.
Name: Akt5us reviewed
Crawling in My Skin on Aug 23, 2010 04:05 pm
This is a really interesting story! I would have thought that Draco would have been more cruel in the story. I can't wait to read more! :)
Name: darkness_faerie88 reviewed
Runnin' Up That Hill on Aug 17, 2010 08:55 am
This is a great story....I laughed so hard at the part where Draco is reading HP and the Deathly Hallows. I really like your style of writing, it flows nicely and keeps you interested. Good work!
Author's Response: Thank you! The next chapter should be up in a week or two.
Name: openskys reviewed
Runnin' Up That Hill on Aug 12, 2010 10:12 am
I really love the way you write it let's me see right into the character! I can't wait for more!!
Author's Response: Thank you! Chapter 4 is ready and will be posted whenever I feel like it. I'm in the process of writing chapter 7. Very tricky chapter! You'll see more soon, promise!
Name: ssk2011 reviewed
A Proposition on Aug 11, 2010 04:56 pm
Well, I'm really enjoying this! I read the entire fic last night and I like the way you have everything set out in the AU. Keep up the good work :)
Author's Response: Awww, thank you! I read fanfics at night too. The next chapter should be up soon. It takes quite a turn. ;) Glad to see that you're enjoying it.
Name: TwistedPixie reviewed
Runnin' Up That Hill on Aug 11, 2010 12:52 pm
It's very interesting so far. I like it! Haha. But no, good work and keep it up! xx
Author's Response: Thank you! Chapter 4 shouldn't be too long.
Name: Dark__Angel reviewed
Runnin' Up That Hill on Aug 11, 2010 11:14 am
very nice
Author's Response: Thank you!
Name: Shwadi reviewed
Runnin' Up That Hill on Aug 11, 2010 02:52 am
what a great chapter. your depiction of voldemort is absolutely terrifying and spot on. well done.
Author's Response: Thank you! I take extra time with him so I don't screw up. He really can be hard to write. Thank you for your review!
Name: pitzi reviewed
Runnin' Up That Hill on Aug 10, 2010 11:39 pm
I'm reading your story from the beginning but I don't think I left a review. I just want to say I really like it and am waiting to see how the story unfolds. Ginny's guilt might make her more subdued now and It is going to be interesting to know all about Kora. Keep up your great work!
Author's Response: We will find a tiny bit about Kora soon. Thank you for your review!
Name: Prolific Wonder reviewed
Malfoy Manor & the Meeting of Kora on Jul 31, 2010 07:33 pm
There is the strong possibility I'm asking a question that has alredy been answered, but in case it hasn't... Is Kora Draco's old love? Or is my perception way off.
Author's Response: Way off. lol. She is only his bestfriend.
Name: lily_malfoy reviewed
A Proposition on Jul 31, 2010 12:28 am
I'm sooo happy that Draco is reading an HP book! I always wanted to read what the hp caracters thought of the books! Very good start! Keep it up :)
Author's Response: Thank you! Hope ou enjoy chapter two as well.
Name: Boogum reviewed
Malfoy Manor & the Meeting of Kora on Jul 30, 2010 11:46 pm
Interesting. Very interesting. So we already see that Draco has a soft side. Was Lia an old love of his? And Kora, I assume, was her sister? I'll be curious to see how this plays out.
Author's Response: Nooo, Lia was NOT Draco's love in any way. Neither was/is Kora. I will say about Lia is, she was a Muggle. *hint hint hint*
Name: Anise reviewed
Malfoy Manor & the Meeting of Kora on Jul 30, 2010 11:49 am
This second chapter works very well, particularly when it comes to the new OC's. Don't worry about how fast the action is going-- I think it's better to show how Ginny is beginning to adapt to her new environment. (Of course, this can get out of hand and turn into 345,876.76 chapter fics... ;)
Non-canon characters are hard to handle a lot of the time, but Kora is really fitting in so far. I'm a little nervous about heading over to your LJ because I'd rather be surprised by what shows up in this fic I think... but IMHO you're smart to keep things on LJ. Facebook has *serious* security and privacy issues. Anyway... looking forward to seeing more soon! :)
Author's Response: Besides Kora, there will only be one other OC character...but she isn't original. More of a Hindu goddess. But thank you! I have yet to put up Kora's picture on my LJ. But I will sometime later today. Glad to have your approval!
Name: shezachica85 reviewed
Malfoy Manor & the Meeting of Kora on Jul 30, 2010 11:12 am
very good story!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Name: wiccawitch reviewed
Malfoy Manor & the Meeting of Kora on Jul 30, 2010 05:07 am
Delightful! Can't wait to see where all the characters go. It seems Draco might not be so gung ho on the dark side and that Ginny might not be so against joining it! So much to learn.
Author's Response: Hmmmm. Nothing is ever what it seems. ;)