Name: whatisfake reviewed
Part I on Jul 29, 2011 03:59 pm
I always want to read some long story like this setting of this one. Let Ginny leave Harry after three kids generally is a very big challenge and I think it is the hardest storyline to write. These two chapters are good hint of Ginny's future fair. I guess you still need more to describe Draco's heart change in the future chapter since now I don't get any clue how he will fall for her
Great job and Good luck.
Name: Nutmeg44 reviewed
Part I on Jul 28, 2011 06:33 pm
I could understand how that life would drive anyone around the bend. Lovely story.
Name: Nutmeg44 reviewed
Part II on Jul 28, 2011 09:58 am
I like the interaction between Draco and Ginny. It's clear that there is sexual tension between them. I can't wait for the relationship to progress between them.
Name: GoldenFawkes reviewed
Part II on Jul 27, 2011 06:06 pm
Oooo, more! I like it very much!
Name: GoldenFawkes reviewed
Part I on Jul 27, 2011 05:58 pm
A good first chapter. I felt Ginny's frustration and loneliness.
Name: Akt5us reviewed
Part II on Jul 27, 2011 04:15 pm
I like this story and I can't wait to read more! :)
Name: siri reviewed
Part I on Jul 26, 2011 12:56 pm
Very promising start! Harry is boring, good to see that in print. Seriously, I think you have hit on a very likely route for their marriage to take. Looking forward to see what you can tell us about Draco.
Name: TheTimeMachine reviewed
Part II on Jul 26, 2011 07:52 am
Ok I'm liking it so far. I've been toying with the idea myself of writing a peice like this. After reading a article about JK Rowlings comments on Draco's character my thoughts are beginning to change. Rowling stated quite frankly Draco is not a very nice man. So that leaves me with a great big "what do I do now?" Your fiction thus far has given me a little insight though. I like the way you wrote out Ginny and Harry's relationship and how supportive he is despite Ginny's distancing and lack of interest. Harry would still be behind her one hundred percent because that is so in Harry's nature to do so. He has a few character flaws though, everything seems to be black and white to him. That is until he discovered the truth about Snape. I liked that part of the book however unfortunate and unwanting was the event of Snape's untimely death. It gave Harry an insight to the reality of the world around him. In your story I see that part of Harry shining through and it made me smile. I wondered after finishing the seventh book if Ginny would ever get bored with him, because she's full of so much fire and energy they just didnt seem to be a great match. I look forward to more of your story. I excited for the next chapter.