Reviews For The Empty Children
Name: CindyLu reviewed Chapter 1 on Jan 22, 2012 01:38 pm
It was absolutely perfect. I love how they connected because of Tom, and especially how much she understands him. I would love it if you would expand it further.
One of my favorite parts:
There was something wrong in the way he looked around, like someone who wants to hide what they know, who doesn’t want to admit what happened, or what exactly he’s doing.
She knew that feeling way too well. She could feel her skin shivering just watching his sly glances, the way he tried to pretend that everything was still perfectly well.
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