Name: lilactree reviewed Chapter 7: A Devil's Choice on Aug 10, 2012 08:15 am
I have to know what happens!! She's been through so much in just a few hours :O

Author's Response: Sorry for the delay, but updates will resumed shortly! Her crazy night isn't over just yet...Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Name: Paranoid_Schemer reviewed Chapter 7: A Devil's Choice on Jul 02, 2012 09:46 pm
I think the pace that you're going at is just fine. You're keeping the audience at the edge of our seats which is a good thing. I don't really like a predictable story, and I really like that their initial disposition has developed but is still the main focus of this story. I think the plot has been developing nicely and I love the banter between the two, very believable :) keep up the good work and I'll be around for the next chapter :)

Author's Response: Thank you for reading and commenting! I hope to keep your interest going forward.
Name: bigreader reviewed Chapter 7: A Devil's Choice on Jun 23, 2012 07:22 am
ACK! I'm gonna have a heart attack! I was all excited that there wasn't a cliffie and then. cliffie! I'm sooo glad that she as able to break that mans finger and her little burst of magic. It is believable! I would have been disappointed by any thing further from her part. She has always been rescued and now her character is growing in believable ways. This is a very exciting story for me. I don't really care if they are shorter chapters or longer chapters I just want you to be able to write without hurry so you can make it be the best that it can be. What ever works best for you is GREAT. Keep up the awesomeness!

Author's Response: Thank you for your encouraging words! I'm with you. I dislike that Ginny was always being rescued all the time in the books and the only thing she was known for was a single spell. Her growth is definitely something I hope to address with this story.
Name: eaudetoilettex reviewed Chapter 7: A Devil's Choice on Jun 18, 2012 02:35 pm
I usually check on updates and I was waiting patiently for your story , but the problem was that I couldn’t remember the name. I’m sorry I get quite clueless sometimes. Anyways ...

Your updates are worth the while! I prefer long chapters so It doesn’t matter if you take time for writing. I understant that life outside fanfiction is hard. -smiles- I also don’t have idea of how you are leading this , but the action is so cool and quite stressful but I love how Ginny even when she was truly exhausted , she kept going. And Ginny’s first signs of trouble when Malfoy was near her , they were great!

See ya!!

Author's Response: lol I'm glad you were able to find it again. Thanks for your review! I hope you'll enjoy the next chapter too.
Name: angeldraco reviewed Chapter 7: A Devil's Choice on Jun 17, 2012 02:54 pm
Oh wow this is gripping! Another update soon please! :-). I like the fact that it is Malfoy who is the knight in shining armour. Great story! x

Author's Response: Sorry that the next update will be quite late. Extensive traveling leaves very little time for writing, but I hope you'll find the next chapter just as gripping. Thanks for reviewing!
Name: pitzi reviewed Chapter 7: A Devil's Choice on Jun 16, 2012 10:44 pm
It's a rear thing to find a really good suspence story that keps you at the end of your seat, so kudos to you for a great success!!!

I can't wait to see them finally really free (hopefully) and what will happen when Draco realises whom he had gone through the whole ordeal with.

Author's Response: Glad to hear I'm keeping you in suspense. ;)There's more to come, but sorry that you'll have to wait a little longer though. Thanks for taking the time to comment. I really appreciate being able to hear back from readers.
Name: bee245 reviewed Chapter 7: A Devil's Choice on Jun 16, 2012 10:43 am
Argh so good!! I'm super impressed by the suspense! Love how you handle and write action, and love the amount of it. Also, fantastic characterization! They're actually real people.

More, please please please! So exciting!! (Also, I think longer chapters are better as well. Gives you a chance to build up the tension!)



bee245

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing! Sorry that the next update is going to take a while. There's very little time to write with all the traveling I'm doing, but I'm eager to get back to it as well. Can't wait for you to read the next chapter. :)
Name: cherryredxx reviewed Chapter 7: A Devil's Choice on Jun 16, 2012 04:37 am
You and your damned cliffhangers! I have this feeling that it's Draco coming back with help, and for some reason I have this inkling that he's gone to Harry for help. Of course I'm probably wrong, but that is my guess. Can't wait for more. :)

As for your last question, I would prefer longer chapters, I think.

Author's Response: Of course you'll have to wait and see. :D Sorry about the cliffhangers :P, but they will probably be a frequent thing in this story as they make perfect chapter cut off points with the way I've plotted out the story.
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