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wish there were more written... great job!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! That's it for now, but you never know. :)
Ugh, lovely
Author's Response: Yes it is a rather angsty piece. I'm guessing that's what the 'Ugh' referred to? Thanks for reading and commenting!
This was really well-written. Ginny's emotion is so ragged and raw and it gives just a hint of why she's reached some sort of breaking point. It's quite a gripping scene. Well done.
Author's Response: I'm so glad to hear I managed to get the emotions across. Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts on it with me.
You know how I feel about this story, as I wrote almost an entire page about it, but I'll write something here, also. I love how open-ended it is and how you COULD write more if you choose to. I also love love love that it's angsty without being obnoxious, which is a fine line to walk. You set the mood in this stoory so well, and I love the characterizations.
Overall, I just love it, and you have a true talent for writing. :)))
Author's Response: Thanks so much Pam! I wasn't too sure about it, but your comments were very encouraging!
I agree! Prequel! Sequel! Sequel with flash backs! I want to know more!
Author's Response: Yay! I'm really happy to hear it intrigued you enough to want to learn more. I don't want to make promises I can't keep, but I do feel there's a good chance I'll do a follow-up someday. Might be a while though if it happens. Thanks for reading and commenting!
Wow... Just wow... It was indeed angsty... But just enough that it wasn't overused and the story wasn't ruined. Usually, I'd steer clear of angst... But, I needed a nice shock back to reality, I usually fall into this crazy stupor after reading way too much fluff... A sequel would be nice... I love it when they end up together. So my favorites are usually flangst where they end up together... Just thought you'd like to know what your readers like if you write a sequel. It's a wonderful ending without a need for a sequel though... Maybe a prequel?
Author's Response: I'm so glad to hear that. I know sometimes a story can be so angsty it ends up irking the reader. I'm concentrating on other plot bunnies right now, but sometime in the future, this is likely to get a follow-up as a prequel or sequel with flashbacks, no promises though. ;) Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts on the story with me.
Awww this makes me want to burst into tears. What the hell happened!?! I'm so intrigued even though this is a one shot, maybe the bunny will attack you and you'll decide otherwise.
Author's Response: I did draft out the back story in my mind in order to write this piece, though I kept the focus largely on the present. Should inspiration and time permit, I will probably write a follow-up someday, but no guarantees though. Thanks for reading and commenting!
aww . thats just so sad :((( great story though. wish they got together when it ended but kudos to the writing
Author's Response: It surprised me too when I finished writing it, how angsty it was. Stories just sometimes naturally head in that direction. Thanks so much for reading and commenting!