Name: Lady Mischief reviewed
Two Faced Monsters on Jun 22, 2013 03:49 am
This story shows promise. I was not expecting them to be married before, only to have dated. I wonder what more would have been said if they had not been interrupted by Blaise and Astoria...I cannot wait for your next update.
Author's Response: I'm writing this for Kim and her prompt was essentially a divorce fic, but I didn't want to just throw it out there but rather have it come up somehow during their interaction. I'm glad it caught you unawares.:D
As for their being interrupted, I'm sure they'll pick up where they left off, probably sooner rather than later. ;)
Name: coneveronica reviewed
Two Faced Monsters on Jun 21, 2013 06:34 pm
This story gripped me right away. I love the character development and how you slowly revealed their history then their true feelings. I can't wait to see how this story progresses. Update soon!
Author's Response: I'm happy to hear that! One thing I love about DG is that their relationship will have to be complex at baseline no matter what, because of their huge differences. I really enjoyed adding that extra layer of complexity here, and I'm glad you liked the development of it. Thank you for reviewing! :)
Name: tenna reviewed
Two Faced Monsters on Jun 21, 2013 05:15 pm
Can I just say that I loved how you let their history sort of unfold? I mean I didn't initially know their relation-if they had one so I kept guessing ohhh who's the groom that G has to just come? And Draco to Then Oh my, Astoria has a ring, so DG do have history so they were involved, oh gods! they were married! and it hurts and hurts and I sort of cried a little bit because the DG you have here have so so so much between them. Live things too. I really liked Blaise and Astoria. So looking forward to the rest of it. :)I liked the lyrics too.
Author's Response: tenna, I'm very happy to hear that! That's exactly what I was aiming for, and at one point I worried that it was overdone and people would lose interest halfway through reading this opening chapter, so I'm glad it wasn't the case with you. You said "Live things too", and you're absolutely right. No one is over anyone here! I'm also very happy that you liked Astoria, as that is also something I was hoping would happen! It's easy to just make into some uber biatch that we can all love to hate, but it adds an extra layer to the whole thing if she's actually someone who's perfectly nice but who happens to be completely wrong for Draco just because Ginny exists! Happy you liked it, thanks so much for reviewing!
Name: Shwadi reviewed
Two Faced Monsters on Jun 21, 2013 08:32 am
I loved this. The emotions were true and raw. Would love to read more!
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you liked it!
Chapter two will be up soon. :)