on Apr 13, 2017 12:15 am
This was great. I loved it. Your characterizations were lovely, their interactions sweet. I would've loved to see where they go from here. One-shots are just never enough... I seriously loved the D & G thing, btw. So corny and cute and even though Ginny's the one who came up with it, the fact that Draco keeps referencing it is so adorable.
on Jan 12, 2016 01:35 pm
I love reading this story. So sweet, funny and thought provoking. Kudos to you! Thanks for writing it.
on Oct 10, 2013 07:46 pm
Super cute, mostly believable, and very happy-making! :)
on Sep 28, 2013 03:30 pm
This was an amazing piece! I truly loved how it featured a lot of Muggle technology, yet explained it in a good way, and took how magic affects it into account. Not all stories do that!
I also love that Draco has grown up. No one stays the same, especially not after the war. Too many stories make him out to still be a jerk. But this could almost be canon (because the epilogue never happened!).
Your writing style is as amazing as ever, and this was a great piece to read on a horribly sad night (best friend just moved hundreds of miles away. =/ ). I thank you for the distraction!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm happy you enjoyed it and that it cheered you up a bit on a sad night. I know all about best friends moving far away, and it's like losing a little piece of your heart. :/
on Sep 23, 2013 06:21 pm
Great, as always! :) You really have a gift for writing this unique Draco, instantly identifiable and memorable, privileged, admired, yet inwardly vulnerable. I really can't write anything in this variety of Draco, and when I've tried, the results are NOT pretty. :P So I leave him to you! :) (Does this mean you keep him around the house? ;)
on Sep 23, 2013 05:19 am
I loved this story! I loved the way D and G gradually became attached to each other throughout the story, how even though they began the night as... not friends... they still grew as characters and realized who the other person actually was. The fact that you wrote such development in these characters over the course of one night together is just that much more impressive. The way they got together in the story made it seem so natural. Great job as always! :)
Author's Response: Hi there! Thanks so much for your review! I'm happy that you liked this story, and that what I perceived as a weakness (the fact that their relationship progressed so quickly -- literally overnight) was one of the things you loved the most. Thanks again! ^^
on Sep 21, 2013 07:05 am
This is awesome. Truly.
I love the emotion running through the whole thing. It builds so gradually you feel attached to it.
Author's Response: Thank you! I was worried that it would come across as rushed or something, since they've only been together one night. I'm glad it struck you as genuine and attachable (soooo not a word, lol). Thanks for reviewing!
on Sep 21, 2013 06:04 am
i totally thought i wrote a review for this. anyway, wonderfully written!!! youve strung the story beautifully. it's so original. i love this sentence too: Up until that moment if anyone had asked her what she thought it would be like to kiss Draco Malfoy, formerly known as the sex god of Slytherin, the last thing she would have answered was innocent, chaste or pure. But that's exactly what it'd been, at least in the beginning. soo original. congrats.
Author's Response: Hey humaira, thanks so much for taking the time to leave me such an awesome review. I'm glad that you enjoyed it! And to me it's a huge compliment to hear that something is original in DG, lol, so I really appreciate it. :)
on Sep 20, 2013 04:40 pm
I already reviewed this on FFN, so anything I say here will just be repetitive. But I do know people read reviews to see if the fic is 'worthy' of reading, so this review is for those people who are peeking and not reading...
READ THIS FIC, NAO! This one-shot has everything you want in a DG fic: romance, UST, humour, fluff and great dialogue. You shan't be disappointed. :D
Author's Response: Lia, thanks so much! I really appreciate it. XD
I read your awesome review at FFN and will reply shortly. You made my day!