Name: idreamofdraco reviewed
Chapter 2: Aurors on Oct 18, 2014 04:18 pm
I love Blaise so much! I like to think of him as a neutral party, even though he's a Slytherin, and he displayed some of that neutrality here. Of course he sides with his friends and classmates, but he's also fair and open to other possibilities and allies. I love seeing him working with Ginny, or befriending her, or just treating her like she's not the scum of the earth, and by doing so, forcing Draco to warm up to her and her to Draco. That warming up doesn't appear in this chapter, but it's sure to come. ;)
I also love all the different personalities of the squad members, and how they still act just like Slytherins because they never received the proper training to be Aurors. Hopefully Ginny (hopefully with Draco's help and not his antagonism, but from the chapter(s) I've read while validating this story for the Cabal, I know he and Ginny will be allies in no time!) will be able to win their respect and whip them all into shape.
Looking forward to more!
Name: b1elliot reviewed
Chapter 2: Aurors on Oct 11, 2014 06:20 am
Oh Blaise. The forever lovable one...great chapter!
Name: msm_2011simonebb reviewed
Chapter 2: Aurors on Sep 21, 2014 04:21 pm
love ginny's personality!! she won't earned brownie points with this team!!
Name: Anise reviewed
Chapter 2: Aurors on Sep 20, 2014 05:22 pm
HA! I love this chapter. They're a bunch of losers, and Ginny is insufferable. This should be good... on to the next chapter...
Name: SilverAura09 reviewed
Chapter 2: Aurors on Sep 14, 2014 03:19 pm
What a wonderful chapter!! I thought you couldn't pull off writing a "battle scene" but, Merlin, that was incredible. All the characters are on point. I love your Ginny, Draco, and Blaise!
One thing though, Astoria is the one with long hair who doesn't speak much, right? And Daphne's the one who's shorter? I had to go back and read their introductions since Astoria's so silent I almost forget she's there. Haha!
Author's Response: Battle scenes are terrifyingly hard to write. I posted this thinking the action was tolerably boring, so that's fantastic to hear. XD I'm so glad you like Ginny, Draco, and Blaise! ...Blaise is just too fun to keep out of any story. Yeah, you got it right. I made the...um...lovely decision to give squads 10 members, and then gave myself endless headaches trying to introduce them in a non-overwhelming way. Tried to solve that by introducing Daphne and Astoria as "Daphne" and "the other girl". Haha oh well. I tried. XD
Name: Anise reviewed
Chapter 2: Aurors on Sep 11, 2014 07:47 pm
(pops head in)
I'll review this very soon!!! I'm working on a 20,000 word submission for my F2F writers' group. Because I am insane. :) But I have a list of fics that I'll be getting to right after that. Yours is #1! :)
Author's Response: I'm honored! Can't wait to hear what you think! :)
Name: Kyasarin reviewed
Chapter 2: Aurors on Sep 11, 2014 03:25 pm
I'm generally nervous about reading WIPs, but I was thrilled to see that you'd already completed writing this. It reminds me of when I first started reading fanfiction and followed stories for months (years), treasuring each new update. I'm certainly looking forward to seeing where this one will go.
Author's Response: That makes me so happy! I'm excited to have you on board, and hope you enjoy the journey! :D
Name: dykeadellic reviewed
Chapter 2: Aurors on Sep 11, 2014 01:06 pm
The comma problems were in just a few spots, so I was able to chalk it up to a stylistic approach rather than deny it.
I am excited to see chapter two is up, and I will read it as soon as I can!
Name: Marinka reviewed
Chapter 2: Aurors on Sep 11, 2014 01:20 am
Great start! I am curious to find more why girls are there? Not very useful, are they? Certainly usless when compared to Ginny :)
Name: Silvryn reviewed
Chapter 2: Aurors on Sep 09, 2014 08:18 am
Ooh! It's definitely captured my interest! I like the characterization and character interactions so far - believable motivations and behavior sells a story so well :) looking forward to the next installment!
Name: dykeadellic reviewed
Chapter 2: Aurors on Sep 08, 2014 05:53 pm
Usually I don't enjoy reading our submissions. I have to try and find every error I can to see if it meets the criteria. This story? You have blown my mind so far. I am adoring it, and I truly am excited to see where this goes!
This takes me back to when I first started shipping Draco and Ginny. All those stories were waiting to be found and told. I think that you'll join the ranks of our classic authors in no time!
The one thing I would advise: Be a little more careful with comas! There were a few errors, but nothing major.
Hope to see the next chapter very soon!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Hearing that means the world to me :D
Where were the comma problems? I know I'm a comma abuser, but I'll fix problems wherever you spot them.