Reviews For Slytherin Squad
Name: FlorenceBD reviewed Chapter 8: Weekly Weasley Welcome on Mar 09, 2016 06:06 pm
I loved this chapter! You deserve every review you get!!,
Name: Anise reviewed Chapter 8: Weekly Weasley Welcome on Oct 21, 2014 07:04 pm
Finally, a chance to actually REVIEW!! :)

This chapter was so interesting, and the way you handled the visit was so subtle. Everyone's reactions to Draco showed a lot about who they are-- Molly Weasley fell for the charm, Arthur was more reserved but willing to give him a chance, Fred and George clearly didn't like him but the moment was saved by Blaise and Daphne; Ron was nuts but calmed down pretty fast.... and Harry triggered what was almost an awful moment. You definitely write a more sympathetic Harry that I'm able to do. ;) His feelings do make sense here, and so does Draco's reaction. And on to the next chapter!
Name: b1elliot reviewed Chapter 8: Weekly Weasley Welcome on Oct 11, 2014 04:05 pm
Love love love this chapter! Can't wait for more...Fred & Hermione kind of surprised me with their relationship
Name: msm_2011simonebb reviewed Chapter 8: Weekly Weasley Welcome on Oct 06, 2014 07:16 pm
love the dinner chapie.. just love draco & his squad's personality, so much.. glad draco told ron off!!
Name: CrimsonQuill reviewed Chapter 8: Weekly Weasley Welcome on Oct 06, 2014 12:57 am
I dread and am usually skeptical when it comes to Draco interacting with the Weasleys in any way. Sometimes even Ginny's time with her own family is so difficult to read; I've read one too many fanfics where everything is such a mess and greatly disappoints. But then you give us this chapter, with two additional Slytherins to squeeze in the dinner table, and I am stunned with how wonderfully written it is! How you've managed such a feat, I do not know, but your work so far is astounding. I applaud you. x
Name: vintagepearls reviewed Chapter 8: Weekly Weasley Welcome on Oct 05, 2014 06:01 pm
I loved how the Slytherins were able to win over Mrs. Weasley from the start with their gifts (I thought it was humorous when each of them whipped out an item) and especially the back and forth tension and ease at the dinner table. Very well executed :D Also, yay more progress for the squad! Glad to see that they're taken a little more seriously now.
Name: idreamofdraco reviewed Chapter 8: Weekly Weasley Welcome on Oct 05, 2014 04:27 pm
I really need to read this story from the beginning, and I'll be sure to review when I do! The two chapters I've validated for you so far were wonderful. I love the interactions between the characters, especially Ginny and the Slytherins. The dynamic between them, as reluctant and unwanted teammates, is so nice, and seeing Ginny become accepted by the Slytherin Squad and vice versa is so much fun. It's all just lovely. I love what I've seen of Blaise and Daphne, and this line in particular made me laugh out loud - literally:

"And Blaise and Daphne!" Blaise added, legitimately put-out. "Everyone keeps forgetting!"

Mr. And Mrs. Weasley's acceptance of the Slytherins was heart-warming. I thoroughly enjoyed when Ginny and Draco were telling everyone about how Draco saved Ginny and Ron had to eat his words while everyone else was shocked and grateful. Hopefully I can catch up on the rest of the story soon. From what I've read so far, you're writing such a delightful story!
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