Name: b1elliot reviewed
Chapter 10: Illnesses and Ice Cream on Nov 11, 2014 10:43 pm
Yay mutual attraction is ramping up!
Name: idreamofdraco reviewed
Chapter 10: Illnesses and Ice Cream on Nov 03, 2014 04:14 pm
//“Don’t worry, Hermione!” Ginny answered with false brightness. “I’m still a Weasley, and that’ll keep him further from me than anything you could conjure up.”//
Bahahaha. Little does she know...
I wonder why the Death Eaters wouldn't attack Draco. I'm guessing he's being saved for someone a little higher up the totem pole. Or maybe they want to pin Ginny's death on Draco?
Name: Anise reviewed
Chapter 10: Illnesses and Ice Cream on Oct 21, 2014 07:15 pm
Another great chapter! It's so much fun to see Draco and Ginny *having* fun and enjoying banter, although we feel all along that the darker side of their situation is never far away. A good example is when they begin talking about the diary incident and Draco's knowledge of it, and their conversation is... it's hard to put my finger on it... it's as if they way they talk is both strained and natural, as I think it would have to be if they did have that discussion. We don't actually know from canon, of course, whether or not Draco knew about the diary, but it's believable that he would have found out fairly soon after it happened. I think that he surprises even himself by being honest in telling her that he didn't get very upset about it then. They're both very straightforward about it, and then they move on. (Although I could certainly see them discussing the topic in more detail later.)
And then there's the sudden, out of the blue disaster-- which is just how it would happen. Great scene with Snape.. and beautifully handled scene with Hermione. Looking forward to more soon!
Name: Nutmeg44 reviewed
Chapter 10: Illnesses and Ice Cream on Oct 15, 2014 11:24 am
Draco liking errands makes me happy. I love that they both like each other but don't quite know it yet. Lovely. I can't wait for the kiss that will change their relationship.
Name: CrimsonQuill reviewed
Chapter 10: Illnesses and Ice Cream on Oct 14, 2014 09:07 pm
YES!! Their feelings are starting to surface and confuse them, which in turn is amusing to witness. *giggles* Aaahh, love, what a wonderful and frustrating state to be in. Two thumbs up for the steady D/G build up and foundation.
I wonder where those Death Eaters came from and why they only targeted Ginny when technically, they should also be angry with Draco since he's on the good side. Hmph. Darn them for spoiling Draco and Ginny's lovely time together. The ice cream scene was delicious, pun intended. See you again next week! :)
Name: vintagepearls reviewed
Chapter 10: Illnesses and Ice Cream on Oct 14, 2014 04:31 pm
Another early update -- love it! Can I tell you how incredibly excited I am about the build-up of Draco and Ginny's relationship? Hehehe. So glad that they're starting to slowly develop feelings for each other ;)
Great action scene, although brief! And happy to see Snape featured in this chapter as well :) You wrote his personality pretty spot on. Another good job on another great chapter!
Name: Marinka reviewed
Chapter 10: Illnesses and Ice Cream on Oct 14, 2014 03:43 pm
We are getting warmer! I am surprised about DE attacking in the public space and nobody coming to help, but there you go Cute shopping banter, i only wish we see them in the manor more, i wonder how they manage with Narcissa around.
Name: msm_2011simonebb reviewed
Chapter 10: Illnesses and Ice Cream on Oct 14, 2014 02:05 pm
what a fun time, they had in diagon alley!! except the fight with 3 dead eaters!! great chapie as usual!!