Name: DwellingInDreams reviewed
Chapter 11: Surprises on Jul 29, 2015 10:05 pm
I've just read these first 11 chapters tonight. It's now 1 AM, and I have to wake up at 6 and be a responsible adult. Haha! But I'm LOVING this story, and I'm so happy they finally kissed!!! I guess that's as good a place as any to stop for the night. :) Looking forward to reading more.
Name: b1elliot reviewed
Chapter 11: Surprises on Nov 11, 2014 10:53 pm
This moment was well worth the wait...thanks again!!
Name: idreamofdraco reviewed
Chapter 11: Surprises on Nov 03, 2014 05:27 pm
Awwwwwwwww. ;______; This was such a good chapter. I felt so bad for Draco in the beginning, pining away while Ginny acted as if their date was nothing serious. But the headline in the paper was hilarious! And yay! Blaise is back!
Some of my favorite parts:
//He pulled his arm back, using the other to push up its sleeve. The faint, raised scar of the Dark Mark stood ghostly white against his pale skin. "My entire life consists of two halves: wanting this, and hating it. Its taint rests on everything I've ever done." Even now, this was the first time he'd shown it willingly since Voldemort's defeat.//
Ginny touching the Dark Mark (I just find something so nice about it. ;_; Intimate in a vulnerable way.)
//Ginny didn’t let go of his arm. The sleeve caught on her hands. He waited, unsure what she was up to. “I always knew it was there,” Ginny offered lightly. “I didn’t expect it to be so faint.”
Draco blinked hard, and she could see as the emotions caught in his throat. “It’s all I can see,” he finally managed.
“It’s not all I see,” Ginny replied. She slid one hand down his arm, lacing her fingers through his.//
And, of course, their kiss and this exchange:
//“What, you think I let just anyone share my chocolate ice cream?”
“You think I put up with just anyone spoon-feeding me?” he growled in response.//
Great chapter!
Name: msm_2011simonebb reviewed
Chapter 11: Surprises on Oct 29, 2014 04:41 pm
so happy that draco produce expecto patronum!!! happy that they finally kiss!!
Name: Abatemarca reviewed
Chapter 11: Surprises on Oct 29, 2014 02:50 am
The kiss was absolutely worth waiting for. I'm so happy that Ginny and Draco gave themselves a chance. And the scene when Draco showed Ginny his Dark Mark was breathtaking and heartbreaking.
Thank you for this chapter.
Name: vintagepearls reviewed
Chapter 11: Surprises on Oct 27, 2014 03:35 am
Oh my god. Love this chapter! Thanks for the anticipated scene hehe.
Name: Marinka reviewed
Chapter 11: Surprises on Oct 26, 2014 10:43 pm
Ahhh, sweet love.... Wait till family gets there, Lol!
Name: CrimsonQuill reviewed
Chapter 11: Surprises on Oct 26, 2014 09:43 am
The long-awaited update is finally here! As much as I like how they're practically together now, I would have enjoyed more confusion and struggling in their courtship just because it's always soooo amusing to read. But, oh, your Draco and Ginny are just too adorable and perfect, and you write so well anyway so whatever you do to them, I'll be there to continue reading. Just a heads up: I'm an absolute sucker for happy endings. ;)
Expecto Patronum!! Oooh, I just knew they'll be learning that spell as the story progressed! Wonder how the Weasleys and Harry will react once they come face to face with Ginny. That Howler is one thing but what will happen when Ginny tells them the articles are not true! ...but also true in some parts. Like the part of her liking Draco. Haha!
Loved that D/G moment at the end. Draco opening up to her about his past and even letting her not only see his Dark Mark, but also letting her touch it, just warmed my heart and made me go "aaaaww!". Splendid work once again!