Name: Anise reviewed
Chapter 14: A Party of Aurors on Nov 29, 2014 04:35 pm
Great chapter! You've done a really good job of shifting between different moods and content here, all the way from light-hearted to situations that could have been horrible but were defused (Draco and Harry's meeting) to serious and heart-stopping. Everyone found a way of balancing the past and the present, the negative feelings they'd once had about each other with the way that present realities made different kinds of relationships possible. I really like your Harry... I think you capture a lot of his canon qualities very well.
Ginny chuckled next to him. "I think fate and time itself might literally revolve around him. It's fairly annoying."
Yep, that's pretty much it. IMHO, Harry ended up being a passive main character with all of the events happening around him and to him. It was annoying, in a way. And I think it's part of the reason all by itself why Ginny and Draco are much more interesting characters to explore.
Anyway... I'm trying to catch up on some reviews, so time to move on... but I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
Name: CrimsonQuill reviewed
Chapter 14: A Party of Aurors on Nov 25, 2014 06:56 pm
Oh no!! The Dark Mark!! Where in Merlin's beard did that come from?! I was so excited to see the outcome of the Quidditch match but then another one of your surprises happened! Could Lucius be behind this? Hmmmmm. On to the next chapter!
Name: msm_2011simonebb reviewed
Chapter 14: A Party of Aurors on Nov 18, 2014 04:01 pm
hope severus & draco find out why old dark marking is bleeding & their in pain!!!great party scene..
Name: vintagepearls reviewed
Chapter 14: A Party of Aurors on Nov 14, 2014 05:22 am
Wow, I gotta say, this has been one of my favorites. It was great adding those little bits of canon material throughout this chapter! I liked how you kept Draco true to his character and hasn't magically started getting along with everyone at once. Loved the whole party scene and also good balance between the interaction of characters. Of course, I should have expected that something amiss would happen by the end of the chapter -- was not disappointed.