Reviews For Slytherin Squad
Name: Anise reviewed Chapter 16: Intrusions on Sep 25, 2015 10:31 pm
YES!! I'm r and r ing again, yay! :)
The thing I admire the most about this fic is that it reads like something that really could have been an actual continuation of canon (well, if this part of it including D/G had ever actually been explored, of course. Which it wasn't. :P) So many aspects of the original canon world are just so beautifully integrated. I can't write that way at all... and actually, I never could. So I admire it a LOT. And lots more reviews coming very very soon!! :)
Name: vintagepearls reviewed Chapter 16: Intrusions on Dec 03, 2014 01:26 am
Hahaha Narcissa cracked me up in this chapter :D Another well-written chapter :)
Name: msm_2011simonebb reviewed Chapter 16: Intrusions on Nov 28, 2014 03:38 pm
great chapie! happy that narcissa went to another location.. hope blasie & greg are okay.. i know ginny will be okay soon..
Name: CrimsonQuill reviewed Chapter 16: Intrusions on Nov 28, 2014 09:16 am
Draco and Ginny work so well together! When he woke her up and she didn't even ask mundane questions and just went into "Auror mode". When Draco was peeking outside the closet and Ginny was sending her Patronus. Ginny placing a Disillusionment spell on Draco and his tapping her leg as a message. Then there's all that Apparating! Ooohh, it's just so intoxicating to read.

Narcissa's message to Draco got me laughing like mad! Panicked and frightened yet still so poised and elegant. She even reprimaded Draco. What a very "mom" move. Haha!

Poor, darling Blaise is not injured (at least I hope so) this time but captured. And Goyle is just doing so well but then he was captured, too. Why, oh why are they going to such lengths to kill Ginny? *sigh*
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