Reviews For Slytherin Squad
Name: b1elliot reviewed Chapter 2: Aurors on Oct 11, 2014 06:20 am
Oh Blaise. The forever lovable one...great chapter!
Name: b1elliot reviewed Chapter 1: Prologue on Oct 11, 2014 05:58 am
Whew...good last line.
Name: Silvryn reviewed Chapter 9: Irish Incident on Oct 09, 2014 10:00 am
Oh nice :-) it continues to be fun, funny, and exciting all in one! Liking the slow development between Draco and Ginny - so subtle they won't even notice until it's too late! :-D
Name: CrimsonQuill reviewed Chapter 9: Irish Incident on Oct 08, 2014 11:34 pm
Another fast update? Oh, you're spoiling us! Haha. SLIIIIIIIIIME!! I did NOT see that coming! Very original and not at all clichéd. Brownie points for that. :) So good to see the Squad working as a team, people should start putting a little more faith on them. Maybe someday, when they stop thinking and feeling that their past defines them, they'll be able to cast a real Patronus. That would be nice, and I'd love to see Draco's Patronus! :) Wishing Blaise a speedy recovery. The Squad obviously needs him back, asap! :D
Name: Rummy reviewed Chapter 9: Irish Incident on Oct 08, 2014 12:48 pm
Death by slime!! Oh my gosh, this is such an imaginative story. Keep updating quickly! I can't get enough.
Name: vintagepearls reviewed Chapter 9: Irish Incident on Oct 07, 2014 08:00 pm
That slime scene. Perfection. Your imagery was spot on! Loved the scene between Draco and Ginny at the end as well. Hehehe I like that he's becoming more and more comfortable with her :) Also, yay for a speedy update this week!
Name: Nutmeg44 reviewed Chapter 9: Irish Incident on Oct 07, 2014 06:16 pm
I can't believe you updated here! It's like you're keeping secrets.

I'm getting terribly annoyed with Harry and Hermione. Nothing ever pleases them. I really like the idea of that slime defense. Very cool.
Name: Marinka reviewed Chapter 9: Irish Incident on Oct 07, 2014 05:16 pm
Very creative:) Death by slime, i am yet to see anybody using that one before!
Name: msm_2011simonebb reviewed Chapter 8: Weekly Weasley Welcome on Oct 06, 2014 07:16 pm
love the dinner chapie.. just love draco & his squad's personality, so much.. glad draco told ron off!!
Name: CrimsonQuill reviewed Chapter 8: Weekly Weasley Welcome on Oct 06, 2014 12:57 am
I dread and am usually skeptical when it comes to Draco interacting with the Weasleys in any way. Sometimes even Ginny's time with her own family is so difficult to read; I've read one too many fanfics where everything is such a mess and greatly disappoints. But then you give us this chapter, with two additional Slytherins to squeeze in the dinner table, and I am stunned with how wonderfully written it is! How you've managed such a feat, I do not know, but your work so far is astounding. I applaud you. x
Name: vintagepearls reviewed Chapter 8: Weekly Weasley Welcome on Oct 05, 2014 06:01 pm
I loved how the Slytherins were able to win over Mrs. Weasley from the start with their gifts (I thought it was humorous when each of them whipped out an item) and especially the back and forth tension and ease at the dinner table. Very well executed :D Also, yay more progress for the squad! Glad to see that they're taken a little more seriously now.
Name: idreamofdraco reviewed Chapter 8: Weekly Weasley Welcome on Oct 05, 2014 04:27 pm
I really need to read this story from the beginning, and I'll be sure to review when I do! The two chapters I've validated for you so far were wonderful. I love the interactions between the characters, especially Ginny and the Slytherins. The dynamic between them, as reluctant and unwanted teammates, is so nice, and seeing Ginny become accepted by the Slytherin Squad and vice versa is so much fun. It's all just lovely. I love what I've seen of Blaise and Daphne, and this line in particular made me laugh out loud - literally:

"And Blaise and Daphne!" Blaise added, legitimately put-out. "Everyone keeps forgetting!"

Mr. And Mrs. Weasley's acceptance of the Slytherins was heart-warming. I thoroughly enjoyed when Ginny and Draco were telling everyone about how Draco saved Ginny and Ron had to eat his words while everyone else was shocked and grateful. Hopefully I can catch up on the rest of the story soon. From what I've read so far, you're writing such a delightful story!
Name: Abatemarca reviewed Chapter 7: Maladies & Maneuverings on Oct 03, 2014 10:02 am
I love how Ginny and Draco, slowly, begin forming a friendship. If I was in Ginny's place, I'd never move out of Malfoy Manor. Huge rooms,
beautiful views from the windows, breathtaking grounds with a forest (!) and a lake.
And of course how could I forget about Quidditch pitch. No, I would never leave the place. And I think Ginny will want to stay too.
Narcissa was amazing. A real lady in every way. The moment when she reprimanded Gregory (when Ginny entered the room), and his response to it, was hilarious.
Thank you so much for an extra chapter.
I'm waiting for the next chapter. The Weasley weekly dinner is going to be so much fun.
Name: CrimsonQuill reviewed Chapter 7: Maladies & Maneuverings on Oct 01, 2014 12:56 am
Darling Blaise is okay, yay! Aaaawww, Daphne's so sweet to stay with him in the hospital. Looks like this story won't have a love triangle. PHEW! That's a relief. Now, Blaise, listen to me, you have to continue teasing Draco and Ginny. I know we are all in agreement here that they need the push. ;)

Your little note at the end made me even more excited for the next chapter! That cliffhanger was perfect!! Oh, Draco and Blaise in the Burrow will be so much fun! Daphne would also be a great addition to their little Slytherin Team for this mission. I need chapter 8 now! ...please. :)

Oooohhh, and I see my new name on chapter 6. I'm so flattered and happy, thank you! *blushes*
Name: Anise reviewed Chapter 7: Maladies & Maneuverings on Sep 30, 2014 06:04 pm
Yes! The promised review! :)

I think I missed reviewing the last chapter, so that'll be here too.

I loved seeing Ginny at MM. )And I think I want to move there... ;) Yep, that's what I'll do... in some alternate universe, I'm SURE it will work.) Narcissa's reactions were just right... not unwelcoming, exactly, but it makes sense that she'd be cautious with Ginny, and very alert to whatever might be going on between Ginny and her son. There's something about all of the forces tugging at Draco in the past years of his life that is summed up just by the existence of the Manor, and the way it's described. He still has all of these possessions, and yet they couldn't begin to make up for everything he had lost, and, at the start of this fic, for everything that he now understands that he had never been.

I also see more of Ginny's character, and her need to make up for how ineffectual she felt she was during that last year at Hogwarts before the end of the war-- not just the last battle, I think.

I never really know if it actually IS a good idea for the Slytherin Squad to fight or not, and I think that's part of what makes these dilemmas so interesting. How many people on it can really be trusted? OTOH, who could do a better job of understanding what's going on now, and of maybe solving it? And the Weasley dinner!! Oh, this should be good...
Name: Marinka reviewed Chapter 7: Maladies & Maneuverings on Sep 29, 2014 11:41 pm
Lol, great peril indeed!
Name: vintagepearls reviewed Chapter 7: Maladies & Maneuverings on Sep 29, 2014 07:28 pm
Glad to know Blaise is okay! Also, gahhh, your cliffhangers. Good to know another chapter will be posted this week ;)

Author's Response: I do love fun cliffhangers. And don't worry, this won't be the last of them ;) *maniacal laughter*
Name: msm_2011simonebb reviewed Chapter 7: Maladies & Maneuverings on Sep 29, 2014 06:31 pm
love when Ginny blow up at Hermione! Ginny's statement, is that Mission Impossible.. Update soon, so we can find out more drama..

Author's Response: That is absolutely Mission Impossible! I figured a pure-blood wizard exposed to Muggle telly wouldn't take long before becoming a pop-culture addict :) The next chapter will arrive as close to Thurs as I can time it. Thanks for the review! :)
Name: CrimsonQuill reviewed Chapter 6: Malfoy Manor on Sep 26, 2014 05:50 pm
Hiiiii! This is SilverAura09. I just got a brand new shiny name with the help of the magical admin powers of the wonderful Anise! Just wanted to give you the heads up since my reviews will now be "Signed: CrimsonQuill". It's still me! And your story's still awesome. Teehee. See you again on the next update! :)

Oh, and one more thing... could you possibly do an avid fan a favor? Could you kindly change your Author's Note to my new name, please? I plan to get this on my Kindle when the story is finished, and I will forever squee in delight whenever I read my name on Chapter 6's Author's Note. That's my sentimental side and fangirl side talking. HAHA! :)

P.S. Congrats on reaching 1000+ reads! x

Author's Response: I changed it. I squee in delight reading your reviews, so now we're even! :) Thank you for pointing that out! I just submitted an extra chapter to celebrate the 1,000 views, so hopefully that'll be up before Thursday! Waiting a whole week between chapters is killing me. I'm not patient enough for this. XD
Name: msm_2011simonebb reviewed Chapter 6: Malfoy Manor on Sep 25, 2014 01:13 pm
great scene at malfoy manor!! great job!!

Author's Response: Thank you! I was super nervous about it, so it means a ton to hear that :)
Name: SilverAura09 reviewed Chapter 6: Malfoy Manor on Sep 25, 2014 01:09 pm
Squeeeeeeeee!! Awkward and flustered Draco is so adorable! ...and I'm also a sucker for pureblood gentleman Draco. Teehee. That scene at the lake is definitely one of my fave D/G moments. It's witty, sweet, light, and highly entertaining. Ginny, give Draco tea privileges in exchange for board and lodging! Loljk. :) Ahem. I'm hinting here that you add more to those moments. Well, Ginny's staying, and I hope for a looong time, at Malfoy Manor, soooo... I'll let you work your magic on those two. ;)

Thank you so much for the very fast update and for the 10 points! I was so pleasantly surprised to see my name in the Author's Note. *blushes* And I am very relieved to know that you've already finished writing this story, so there truly is no excuse for you to abandon it and leave us hanging! *throws confetti*

Oh, this is easily becoming my favorite D/G fanfic. It's the first time I've followed an ongoing fic like this, and it's really great to be "part" of the journey. As early as it may be, I'm already hoping that this isn't your last one and you'll be writing plenty more! But for now, I eagerly and patiently await the next update (Oh look, that rhymes!).

Author's Response: Awwww I'm so glad you liked it! Also, congrats, I am now totally kicking myself for not having her trade tea for room and board. Don't worry though, this isn't the last you'll see of the tea XD ...you warm my author's heart so dearly. I've never done this before (completing and then weekly updating a story) so it's insanely fun to take others down this journey that I finished but get to rediscover with each new review. I can't thank you enough for joining me in the journey. Posting all these chapters is already making my fingers itch to start the next one, but we'll see. It took me a year to finish Slytherin Squad (yes, you have quite a few more updates left XD) so there's no telling when (or if) the next one will be ready to start posting. If you have any plot bunnies for me, I'll gladly toy with the ideas! :) Until then, I impatiently await Thursdays. And to satiate my impatience, there's an extra chapter this week too. XD
Name: vintagepearls reviewed Chapter 6: Malfoy Manor on Sep 24, 2014 07:41 pm
Woohoo! So glad that you were able to upload this one quite quickly :) I adored the lake scene and I love how they came to understand more about each others' reasonings on becoming an Auror. I also like how you've been consistent on including interaction scenes with the other Slytherins -- especially Warrington, who I rarely read about in fanfics...Hmm I wonder how loyal he might be? Time will tell hehe. As always, looking forward to your next chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you! :D I'm so glad you like Warrington. I love including little slices of humor from him to flesh out the team more.
Name: Marinka reviewed Chapter 6: Malfoy Manor on Sep 24, 2014 06:25 pm
Loved the chapter, i think this is my favourite one:)

Author's Response: Awww thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it :D
Name: Abatemarca reviewed Chapter 5: Repercussions on Sep 21, 2014 11:56 pm
Amazing. Action, well-written characters and so many Slytherins. Dialogues between Draco and Ginny as always funny, ironic and just real. Generally, dialogues and conversations are strong points of your story.It so good to come home after hard day at work and read a really good DG. Thank you for taking your time to write this story and make my day better:)
So far wonderful job.

Author's Response: That makes me so delighted to hear my story helped :) Reading fantastic in-depth reviews like yours makes my day so much brighter. Thank you for taking the time to review! It makes everything worth it. :)
Name: msm_2011simonebb reviewed Chapter 5: Repercussions on Sep 21, 2014 05:02 pm
the drama cliffie!!
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