Name: Mollie reviewed
Push and Pull on Oct 25, 2015 05:36 am
Loved the story. It is one of my favorite kinds... Because the tragedy is so beautiful!
Name: dmgirl1 reviewed
Push and Pull on Oct 21, 2015 02:01 pm
That was so pretty. There was a beautiful, bittersweet escalation in the anticipation as the story went on. Good job
Name: dykeadellic reviewed
Push and Pull on Oct 21, 2015 01:53 pm
This caused my heart to restrict. Just, wow. Stylistically, it was a bit hard to read, but it was worth it. It was a different flow than I am used to, but I liked it. It worked well to tell the story. You were able to evoke emotion within me, and I felt the pain and sadness Ginny felt. Great job!
Name: dykeadellic reviewed
Push and Pull on Oct 21, 2015 01:53 pm
This caused my heart to restrict. Just, wow. Stylistically, it was a bit hard to read, but it was worth it. It was a different flow than I am used to, but I liked it. It worked well to tell the story. You were able to evoke emotion within me, and I felt the pain and sadness Ginny felt. Great job!
Name: SniperTeamTango reviewed
Push and Pull on Oct 19, 2015 06:46 pm
This made me feel the strangest type of weird! It was so good but I was still hating every second of it. Why cant they just be :(
Very good first piece.
Name: Nutmeg44 reviewed
Push and Pull on Oct 17, 2015 07:55 pm
Oh, this is so bitter-sweet. I love the tone and atmosphere of this. Melancholy. That's the word that describes this best. Beautiful but sad. Thanks for sharing this.
Name: malvia reviewed
Push and Pull on Oct 16, 2015 08:56 pm
The end made me yell in frustration (into my pillow) after I read it. But in a good way I think.
Name: KJ Expelliarmus reviewed
Push and Pull on Oct 16, 2015 03:37 am
It's a good story. I hope you can update soon with a epilogue with a happy ending for both.