Name: pardonthelitany reviewed
Chapter 4 - Cannonballs on Oct 06, 2016 10:34 pm
OH MY GOD, I LOVE THIS.
Sorry. Just. Luna and Draco is so perfect, and I love how how you've written him — how utterly fucked up he is — struggling with anxiety and depression. It's a bit tragic, but it's also perfect.
Plus — his insights with Narcissa, how he'll always love her but never forgive her. I just. They're all so wonderfully human, and I am really enjoying this.
So very much. Thank you.
Name: Anise reviewed
Chapter 4 - Cannonballs on Sep 06, 2016 09:07 pm
Wonderful chapter! It's so hard to really write a scene at the start of Draco and Ginny's relationship where everything works right. So many authors get so close, but there's just something that doesn't exactly fit... but you did it! Yay! :) I love where Draco is in terms of his relationships with other people-- we can see how emotionally stunted he is, unavoidably so, but he is trying, pushing himself out of his comfort zone. My feeling about Harry (YMMV, of course), is that this never really happened for him in canon, and he didn't try to make it happen. He made no real effort-- or we would have seen much more between him and Ginny in the Ep of Doom. But that's enough space spent on Harry... ;)
Really looking forward to the next chapter! (I know what you mean about school... I went back to school AGAIN, who knows what the schedule will end up looking like... but I still want to keep seeing more chappies. ;)
Author's Response: Really? Yay! I was really worried no one would buy it. :S But you made my day when I read that. :D What are you taking in school??
Name: drakebell reviewed
Chapter 4 - Cannonballs on Sep 02, 2016 10:24 pm
Gahhhhhh I love the update!!!!!!!!!!! Okay I'm loss for words here seriously. I reread the paragraphs 5-6 times because it was beautifully and timely written! The exchange of lines were perfect! I love how the relationship of Draco and Ginny blossoms over time, it's like they're so near and so far with each other with regard to their feelings and commitment issues.
I can't wait to see how this story progress! Looking forward for the next chapter! Hope you can update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you! That means a lot to me. :). Hopefully you won't have to wait too long.
Name: bigreader reviewed
Chapter 4 - Cannonballs on Sep 02, 2016 10:00 am
Wonderful! I love the thrill I got from reading the last bit. The tentative beginnings. So sweet, I love how he's not completely sure of himself but still maintains his character. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you! It makes me really happy to hear that my Draco's convincing; I was a little worried about that tbh.
Name: shans12342002 reviewed
Chapter 4 - Cannonballs on Sep 01, 2016 08:31 pm
Love this!!! Can't wait to see what happens next!!!
Author's Response: Thanks! Hopefully you won't have to wait too long!
Name: shans12342002 reviewed
Chapter 4 - Cannonballs on Sep 01, 2016 08:31 pm
Love this!!! Can't wait to see what happens next!!!
Name: loveisnowhere reviewed
Chapter 4 - Cannonballs on Sep 01, 2016 08:10 pm
the awkwardness was so perfect in this chapter, it had my heart racing!
I'm really enjoying the d/g ride you're taking us on.
Author's Response: Yay! Perfect awkwardness! I'm glad you're enjoying it!
Name: fudgepop reviewed
Chapter 4 - Cannonballs on Aug 30, 2016 10:21 pm
Loving all the awkwardness, especially Draco not being able to shut up lol... good stuff :)
Author's Response: :D Thanks!!
Name: Desertisle reviewed
Chapter 4 - Cannonballs on Aug 29, 2016 08:58 pm
Another great chapter! Looking forward to the next installment. Thanks for continuing the fic :).
Author's Response: You're welcome! And thank you for reading! :D
Name: ElectraMackenzie reviewed
Chapter 4 - Cannonballs on Aug 29, 2016 08:50 pm
To hell with school more chapters!! Jk well only slightly...
Author's Response: I would if I could! But if there's no school, then there's only work! Then I'll never get an intellectual job that allows for writing on the side! ~sniff~
Name: lily_malfoy reviewed
Chapter 4 - Cannonballs on Aug 29, 2016 04:49 am
so so good!!!!!!
draco's pov is outstanding!
Luna being the middle ground is so odd but somehow works.
can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad to hear that I'm (so far) pulling off the Luna/Draco friendship. :D
Name: ginatoms reviewed
Chapter 4 - Cannonballs on Aug 28, 2016 03:01 pm
“I don’t deserve someone as wonderful as you in my life.”
Ginny froze, her eyes searching his face. She could tell that he actually believed that. That—she didn’t know what to think of this. How had such a proud and arrogant son of a bitch turned into this? Especially when the person he was addressing was a Weasley? Then a smaller voice asked, he thought she was wonderful?
That bit. That bit punched me right in the heart. Such a beautiful chapter.
Author's Response: :) Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it.