Reviews For Ashen
Name: app reviewed Moral Hangover on Sep 25, 2021 09:08 pm
Holy mother of god I felt so many feelings reading this chapter! Thank you!

Author's Response: hahahaha, quite a roller coaster, huh. Hope you could feel some GOOD feelings while reading this one. The next installment will be out soon. Thank you for your comments, my dear. See ya soon.
Name: mercurialeyes reviewed Dueling Emotions on Sep 01, 2021 10:57 am
I was going to write a intelligent review about how much I loved this chapter and how frustrating it was to read (in a completely complimentary way) and how I want to physically smoosh their faces together and scream "JUST ADMIT YOU WANNA BE TOGETHER ALREADY YOU BLOODY IDIOTS" and that I get so excited when you submit another chapter that I sometimes purposefully delay reading it only because I know as soon as I get to the end I have to wait in torturous limbo for you to post the next chapter...but all I have is this hot mess of a review. So, instead I'll say just this: please keep going. I don't think I'd make it if you didn't.

Author's Response: Your 'hot mess of a review' is one of the most sweet, honest and amazing commentaries I have ever received. Thank you. I don't need intelligent words (whatever it means, haha), only your sentiments. It's perfect, I cannot thank you enough, believe me. In your honor, I'll end your 'torturous limbo' sooner than I'd anticipated and finally finish the next installment. YOU WILL MAKE IT BECAUSE I'LL FINISH THIS STORY, WHATEVER IT TAKES hahaha One more time, thank you for your lovely words, meant a lot to me! See ya very soon my dear.
Name: Silvryn reviewed Dueling Emotions on Sep 01, 2021 07:01 am
Oh goodness things sure are heating up! And...he saved her! Conjured a patronus and bloody saved her! So good!
Name: Silvryn reviewed Dueling Emotions on Sep 01, 2021 07:01 am
Oh goodness things sure are heating up! And...he saved her! Conjured a patronus and bloody saved her! So good!

Author's Response: They sure are! Now they need to fix this mess! haha I could not resist the cliche! Boy saving the girl. I suppose now the girl must save the boy, dont you think? Thank you for commenting, dear, it means the world to me! See you soon!
Name: app reviewed Dueling Emotions on Aug 31, 2021 08:26 pm
no you don't understand this whole fic is a kindness from the writer to the readers i feel so happy everytime a new chapter arrives

Author's Response: ohhh, I was moved by your words, dear, thank you so much. What a lovely comment! I suppose you'll be happy soon enough. The new chapter is almost done, hope you keep enjoying it and letting me know your thoughts.
Name: Ksumm reviewed Dueling Emotions on Aug 31, 2021 03:50 pm
Ooh you are so cruel.... I love it!

Author's Response: hahaha, I'm not cruel! (maybe a little bit, but only to Draco and Ginny) Thanks for commenting, dear, hope you keep enjoying it!

Author's Response: hahaha, I'm not cruel! (maybe a little bit, but only to Draco and Ginny) Thanks for commenting, dear, hope you keep enjoying it!
Name: Ksumm reviewed Draco Dormiens Nunquan Titillandos on Aug 14, 2021 09:10 am
That... that was just evil..*crushes coke can in fist*

please don't prolong my pain! Also, I'm really ready to see the more gentle side of Draco, even if it's just a glimpse!

Author's Response: hahahaha, I'm sorry I ruined your drink, it wasn't my intention. To redeem me, the next chapter is ready and should be up soon. and to further reward your suffering, we'll see more of Draco's gentle side as well as get inside his head! I can't wait to show you more how he thinks! Thanks for the comment! It was very kind and I loved it see ya very soon
Name: app reviewed Draco Dormiens Nunquan Titillandos on Aug 12, 2021 04:43 pm
holy mother of god

i'm so suspicious of olivia, and can't even be annoyed at ginny for being stupid i'd probably do something similar this world of hers is so confusing

Author's Response: hahahah, breath! Dont be suspicious of Olivia, please, haha. She's only a woman trying to protect her husband and herself. Not sooo different from Ginny. Yes! It might seem easy to judge Ginny (she was a bit of an idiot anyway), but in her situation, it's not such a hard thing to make mistakes. She is struggling to protect her children, and misses and hits through the path. She's very human. Thank you so much for your words, they were very kind. Hope you keep enjoying the story see ya very soon
Name: NTA123 reviewed Draco Dormiens Nunquan Titillandos on Aug 11, 2021 07:23 am
I am sorry but Ginny was a bit...asking for it to happen.
I am worried about Draco jr but I caanot say the same for Ginny.
Given all her flaws being realistic and all...Ginny is quite annoying, no?

Author's Response: yes, she is hahaha Of course, I'm saying this from the comfort of my couch, safe and sound. She's a big pain in the neck with some things, but I couldn't say that I'd act differently in her shoes. She's a mother and is trying to protect her children. She kind of sacrificed herself to protect James. And she can only think about her new baby, not even about herself. She was dumb, sure, but I think stressful situations tend to bring out our dumber side, haha Oh, dear, I LOVE your comments, really. Thank you for everything you've been doing for this story. Hope you continue enjoying it! See ya very soon
Name: NTA123 reviewed Draco Dormiens Nunquan Titillandos on Aug 11, 2021 07:20 am
I think Draco will come to save Ginny. She might need a doc. And then he will know!

Author's Response: I think he will, right? I cannot resist the cliche of the gentleman saving the girl. About him finding out... It's not now, hahaha. Sorry to disappoint you, but it will really take a while. I REALLY need to develop some points before it. I dont want them to approach because of a child and I think you dont want it as well. It's so... forceful, maybe? I need them to become closer by themselves.
Name: NTA123 reviewed Draco Dormiens Nunquan Titillandos on Aug 11, 2021 07:18 am
This character Mrs. Olivia, she is quite interesting. But is she good, or bad? Good for whom and bqd for whom? Is she and her husband secret spies for Trashos I mean Duo and team (You know who I mean)? Or is she baiting Ginny?
Also, where and who is her husband?? Is he involved with whatever she is doing?
I mean it seems he is at a very top post. Yet, he is only mentioned by others. Never read him talk or anything.

Author's Response: Ah, I really enjoy writing Olivia. I imagine she is what Ginny would become after a few years of living in that society. Someone who, despite having their own ideas and convictions, has adapted to the rules of the game. She's a good person and really can relate to Ginny, even though she's not sure why exactly at this point. Her husband is the Minister for Magic, but he's being controlled, that's why Olivia has to fight to be the sweet and perfect wife, so they don't harm her husband. I suppose he will appear more as the story progresses. (I always laugh at the depth of your resentment towards the golden trio. And you're not alone in this, hahaha)
Name: NTA123 reviewed Draco Dormiens Nunquan Titillandos on Aug 11, 2021 07:12 am
Ginny had so many chances to reveal her pregnancy to Draco!!
*groans*

Author's Response: Yes, this is true. But remember, she is VERY frightened mother-to-be, alone, with no one to support her. I think in this case her first maternal instinct is to hide because secrecy means safety. I'm sorry for her, in fact
Name: NTA123 reviewed Draco Dormiens Nunquan Titillandos on Aug 11, 2021 07:11 am
I slapped my forehead reading this chapter.
#Fact

Author's Response: hahahaha, I'm not sure why but I really could visualize you doing that! =P
Name: NTA123 reviewed Live Your Memory and Amaze Yourself on Jul 17, 2021 08:01 am
Ginny actually doing awesome with legilimens. Draco still does not know.
James is a sweetheart!!

As for what Draco saw in her memories, I definitely do not blame her!! I mean no matter what and who it was, it was part of her life and memories. So, yrah, I hope it does not deter Draco for long!

Author's Response: I totally agree with you. Draco has nothing to do with what happened in Ginny's love life in the past. To be honest, he doesn't have much to do with it the present either, given the nature of their relationship (but that's about to change! hahaha) Malfoy is just a jealous little creature, poor thing. He's not used to sharing what he thinks is his. As usual, I loooove your comments. Thank you for everything. The next chapter should be up in the next few days. See you soon
Name: app reviewed Live Your Memory and Amaze Yourself on Jul 16, 2021 07:59 pm
this is so envolving, i can't wait for the moment he finds out about the pregnancy! everytime legilimens was mentioned i though "omg it's now he's going to read her mind about it"

Author's Response: One more proof that Ginny is getting better and better at hiding things in her mind, hahaha. It will be useful in the future, that's for sure! Thank you for letting me know what you think, it's really special to me. I suppose we are going to see Draco's reaction soon (not soooo soon though) and I promise it will be worth! See ya very soon, hope you keep enjoying it!
Name: Ksumm reviewed Live Your Memory and Amaze Yourself on Jul 15, 2021 11:27 am
Arg! So much UST!!!

Author's Response: Oh, my so sorry! hahaha But I promise all the suffering will be worth in the end! Thank you for stopping by!
Name: quirky_vixen reviewed Live Your Memory and Amaze Yourself on Jul 15, 2021 10:52 am
Wow! I am so hooked to this complex story and their game of cat and mouse and excruciating pining. I can't help but laugh at such idiots they are, lol! This was such an interesting chapter and I loved that exchange between James, Ginny and Draco, such fun! :D

Author's Response: Owwww, thank you for your kind words. I'm so happy you're enjoying this story so far! I'm doing my best, haha. Yes, they are really dumb. How could they not realise what is happening? Poor things, hahaha I promise I'll write more about their little family in the next chapters. It's really fun to write about them! One more time, thank you! The next chapter will be out soon See ya soon
Name: NTA123 reviewed Live Your Memory and Amaze Yourself on Jul 15, 2021 06:21 am
Goyle?! Wtf?? Ewww...he seems to be lusting for Ginny as well! *cringe, given his personality* I really hope you remember your promise to get him a dreadful end!

Author's Response: Www, indeed. I don't remember if I've ever told you this, but I believe Goyle is the real villain in this story (which is kind of fun, because he's really slow to figure things out, haha) YES, I do remember! Fear not, his end will come. It's just going to take a while because, like Goyle, I'm kind of slow too - slow to write in my case. =P
Name: NTA123 reviewed Live Your Memory and Amaze Yourself on Jul 15, 2021 06:18 am
My condolence to Mrs. Longbottom. I can imagine how hard things are for her.
Thank goodness Anne could get to the Resistance!

Author's Response: Mrs. Longbottom suffered a lot, even in the canon. Have all my respect for resisting all the hardships of life. I enjoy writing her a lot, so I suppose she will show again in the near future, haha
Name: NTA123 reviewed The Reality is the Worst Prison on Jul 10, 2021 11:51 pm
Ginny the genius wants to hide her pregnancy from Draco...
And how is she gonna hide it?! Okay, may be for few early months but then?
Draco will be around her and James. Now, even more after she escaped prison and made potions.
*Don't care about Ron. I actually rolled my eyes while reading the part Ginny and Anne were talking about Hermione*

Author's Response: Yes, she's almost a Hercule Poirot haha. Hiding the pregnancy from Draco is not a smart move at all, but as I like to think, none of them is perfect. We tend to be a bit dumb when we're in stressful situations, haha But I guarantee you that she will have a lot of doubts about it - tell or not tell. Ohhh, how much hurt in this little heart of yours regarding Ron and Hermione, hahaha. I can't judge, really. Sometimes I feel the same while writing them. =) I just posted another chapter and I hope you enjoy it. Your comments are wonderful and I appreciate them A LOT Thank you, my dear
Name: NTA123 reviewed The Reality is the Worst Prison on Jul 10, 2021 11:48 pm
The old lady seems nice.
Ginny would be keeping the baby. There was NO shock there.
I am glad she was able to make the potion.

Author's Response: yes, I agree it shouldn't come as a surprise. I can't imagine Ginny not wanting her baby (of course, she had EVERY right to do so), but I don't think it would do her character justice. I believe family means everything to Ginny - and also to Draco, in a different way. I'm so excited to keep writing them!
Name: NTA123 reviewed The Reality is the Worst Prison on Jul 10, 2021 11:46 pm
Hey!
Ginny escaped and I do not know why I feel it is not the first and last time I will get to see Anne.

Author's Response: hohoho, because it's not! I became fond of her, haha She wont be overly important, but I guess I appreciate what she represents.
Name: app reviewed The Reality is the Worst Prison on Jun 28, 2021 04:13 pm
aaaaaaah everytime a new chapter is released it makes my day a lot better thank you so much!!

Author's Response: ah! So I hope your day just got better because THERE'S ANOTHER CHAPTER YEEEEY ahahaha. I'm the one who should thank you, really. I really appreciate any comment. Hope you keep enjoying it.
Name: Silvryn reviewed The Reality is the Worst Prison on Jun 27, 2021 09:35 pm
Dark! Draco is always so much more fun - and bold Ginny is the best! Their interaction at the end here was especially enjoyable.

Author's Response: Oh my dear! I always have a lot of fun writing Draco, that's for sure. I hope you can keep enjoying reading him as much as I enjoy writing him. Ginny will keep being bold, I promise you haha Thank you for your words and your constancy in this story. It's very kind. See ya very soon. The next one is coming, babe!
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