Name: Kisou reviewed Chapter Eight on May 23, 2006 10:58 am

You say "Bill especially liked Draco' switched around with different words here twice. It's really only necessary once. ^_^

"Bill especially. Ginny had known that he and Charlie would be easier to convince than the others, since they had never known Draco personally. Bill in particular seemed to take to Draco."

[That passage came from when you were talking about Draco's visits to the Weasleys at the first.]

Author's Response: Didn't catch that. Thanks.