I really love it, but I need to stop reading your fic at work, because you're making me cry. lol.
im shocked.
it was written so well, im breathless. pretty much amazing story.
It was incredibly sexy. You need more dialogue though.
wow! finally! someone with understandable grammar :] i really loved this story, and the ending was so cute :) can't wait to read your other stories. keep up the good work!
var var var good.
that was awesome and thats all I can say.
AMAZING!
This story has such a cathartic, explosive feel to it. The tension builds up almost unbearably, especially through the bridge in the common room, for that last final release. Thanks for this.
Amazing story! I really enjoyed and loved it. Thank you!
I really liked that. "Take what I can get"...that very well have been the best part because that is often how it is, isn't it? Sad, but true.
It was rather good though. I wish my first D/G had been this good.
You never cease to amaze me...this short was really good. I am in awe at how good you are at writing. I am mostly in awe because this is the first short that I have liked that didn't occur within a short period of time. Usually when I read a fic that stretches over a longer period of time that is a short I get bored and move onto a new fic relatively quick. Well done!
Such a wonderful story! I admire your writing style.
awesome. i loved their interaction, and the way you put the ending was very creative, great job!
And again I loved your writting. Another beautiful great story!
i am shocked. that was a breathtaking story.
Brilliant and slightly scary. I absolutely LOVE this story. Fantastic.
This is beautiful powerful, and (dare I say it?) original. I love it and will be reading it over and over and over.
I think I've read this before, but I'm not sure and frankly, it doesn't matter. This is one of those fics that each time you read it, it gets better and better. One of the best D/G one-shots there is! I love it and I'm copying it right now to Word so I can print it out and read it whenever I want to. Excellent writing.
That was fantabulous! The bestest D/G fic I've ever read, I mean it!
x0x tryphe x0x
Quite unexpected. I'm used to your fics having an amusing, care-free lilt to them but this was also very good. "I didn't know love wasn't always gentle, that it could claw its way into you and make you bleed even as you feel the happiest." Very powerful and evocative; quintessentially D/G.
im Absolutely speechless.... words really can't describe it.. it was beautiful... i love the ending,it was painful but entirely lovely at the same time, that her family didn't accept him.. and she eloped *giggles* ooh yes. its not a fairy tale, but its a perfect ficlet.. its marvellous... good work..
There is no way to describe how wonderful this is. You have a way with words that I envy!
That was fabulous! I really, really loved this fic. I might have told you already, but I think I like every single fic you've ever written, so this doesn't come as a surprise. Ri
Well...I like how this one was done. There was very little dialogue, but it still managed to scream it's point.
LOVE this! Excellent.