You have no idea how hard it is to live out a great romance. ~ Wallis Simpson, the Duchess of WindsorCategory: Works in Progress
When an engaged Ginny Weasley was traded to the Wimbourne Wasps, she never expected to fall in love with teammate Draco Malfoy. She certainly never expected their love letters to be stolen and published to the entire Wizarding public. This is a story of how a love affair began and the scandal that rocked Wizarding society.
Originally written for the Fall 2011 DG Forum Exchange; now heavily expanded and revised.
It's going UP!! YAY! This is absolutely on my to R&R list!! Expect a review soon. :)
Author's Response: Thanks! I love your work so I am blushing right now! Keeping Christmas on the Death Train was actually one of the first Draco and Ginny stories I really, really loved.
(sticking head in briefly)
Love, love, LOVE. There will be an actual review soon. Anyway, I posted info about this fic on the FIA FB page. :)
Hogwarts is a place to make memories. For Draco, some of those memories are more pleasant than others.Category: Completed Short Stories
LOVE!! This is a great fic. It covers so many bases-- Draco and Ginny's shared history, what drew them together, what pushed them apart, and why and how they finally reunited. It all feels so believable, and it unfolds in such a logical way. LOVE the fact that their first kiss happened because Ginny was trying to irritate Ron... but then the relationship then became more, very quickly. And I love the fact that both of them didn't commit to it right away, actually (kept flirting with others, etc.,) because I think that's what would have really happened. By the end, we know that their reunion had to happen. And it's too funny that Ron only THEN figures out that they were ever together!!
so-- great job, and I hope to see much more from you! :)
Author's Response: I'm glad you loved it. It's high praise coming from you. The catalyst for their first kiss was the prompt requested by LooneyLunaFan - she wanted Ginny to be rebelling against Ron. I feel like they would have kept seeing other people as well. I'm really glad you liked it. Thanks for telling me what you think.
I hope to write more too but you know...life and such.
The last thing Ginny expected when she got called into work was a promotion; and she certainly didn’t expect the disruption it would cause to her carefully constructed life.Category: Works in Progress
I LOVE the start to this fic!
Draco and Ginny haven't even made their appearance yet, and it's already compelling and memorable. Poor Romilda. I've kind of always had a soft spot for her character, but I don't think she's going to win out here. Lucius and Narcissa's relationship is really well sketched out; the one detail about her hair sums up so much... and Ginny! THAT should be good. I think that Lucius is going to run into more trouble than he anticipated. Looking forward to more!
Author's Response: Thanks Anise! I love a good Lucius in a DG fic, so I figured, why not make him one of the more major characters. But he can be so difficult sometimes. And I absolutely LOVE writing him and Ginny interacting. I hope you continue to enjoy this!
A new chapter!!!!! Unfortunately, my net access time is almost up... I haven't had regular access for 2 weeks, and it's been, well, difficult. :( But I will read and review soon, soon, SOON!
Author's Response: :) Thanks!! Not having regular internet access sounds like my idea of a nightmare - the really bad ones where you die by the hand of blood thirsty clowns. - Ann
So many things to like here! There are just so many details that you nail.
“Ginny thought the idea of Lucius not being terrible contradicted the fact that he was willing to blacklist her. She inhaled a deep breath and tried to banish memories of her first year from her mind. Ginny knew it had been years ago, thirteen to be exact, but she could still feel that weightless, cloudy feeling that had overcome her as Tom possessed her. She could still feel the ghost of his touch on her fragile mind, and the guilt that had overcome her after the terrifying events. Lucius Malfoy had done that to her. He had sacrificed her to a madman, who had wanted nothing more than to completely take over her soul. Ginny clenched her hands, the terrifying thought that her soul wasn't completely intact overcoming her.”
Ginny had to have thoughts like this in her mind after her first year-- ABSOLUTELY had to, even though they were never spelled out. But she’s brave enough to go for the interview anyway. I LOVE the way that she’s finally goaded into confronting Lucius.
I love the idea of the Trio going off together without Harry really seeming to give much thought to Ginny one way or the other. It’s so typical of his obliviousness.
And such an cliffhanger! On to the next chapter...
Author's Response: I 100% agree - Ginny definitely had to have been scarred from that experience. I would have been completely messed up, and whether or not JK meant it that way, it showed Ginny’s strength that it never really prevented her from doing anything she wanted to in canon. I’m sure it was just unexplored, but in my delusions, I think it makes sense. Thanks so much for the review!! - Ann
I think that by the end of this chapter, it was believable that Ginny would have accepted Lucius Malfoy's offer. Part of it, I think, it's that she's not totally out-on-the-streets level desperate. She had the ability to make her own choices. I don't think she has any illusions about him, but she has a kind of core confidence in herself that would enable her to take what he's offering. So we shall see!
Author's Response: I mean she’s fiercely independent, and after seeing her parent’s home life, I don’t think she would want to end up back there and encroach on them in their time of independence from all the children. So yes, she’s definitely in a good place to consider it and go through with it. Even if it’s to save so she can quit later :P Who knows? - Ann
I think what I'm growing to like so much about this fic is that it's such a slow burn, for want of a better term. You are not rushing these characters into anything. It doesn't feel like Draco and Ginny are just inevitably going to get together, and all that the readers are doing is waiting for it to happen. Your conception of the Malfoys is so fascinating-- they're not evil, but they're genuinely unpleasant people in a lot of ways-- and we can see that it is really going to take a lot to get our pair together. Looking forward to more!!
Author's Response: It’s funny, when I was planning this fic I knew it wouldn’t be a rush into the DG. I had to build the characters and mold them into what I wanted - I also kept thinking episodic. This is going to read very much like episodes (and I may have been watching Friends at the time). And the Malfoys are certainly rough around the edges, but I do love them. I can never see Lucius as pure evil so much as someone who knows they’re too good to hang out with you and just deigns to amuse the peasants with their presence. - Ann
YAY!!! Okay, I'll come back after the next crazy week and leave a real review, but for now, I'm SO happy to see more of this wonderful fic. :)
At twenty-three, the thing Draco Malfoy has been dreading his whole life, bestowed upon him by blood, has finally come and he is NOT ready for it. He feels his dreams slipping through his fingers and decides to try living on his own while he still can. He soon realizes he needs a roommate - but the only person available is the hated Weasley girl, whose life he just ruined...Category: Works in Progress
So glad to see a new author on FIA! :) This is a really good start. I like the way that the situation is set up, and it's also believable. We really don't know whether or not the magical world had royalty or nobility-- it certainly isn't spelled out in canon, and as far as I know, it was never given out in extra-canon information, either. (Although I'm kind of at the point where I'm over that, most of the time... :P If royalty does exist, it's logical that the Malfoys would be it. Looking forward to more!
Author's Response: Thank you, Anise! I appreciate the feedback! I'll post soon!
When Draco Malfoy finds Ginny Weasley working at a Muggle strip club, he enlists her help in being his fake girlfriend to get his money back. But can they pull it off without getting their feelings involved?Category: Works in Progress
Here it is here it is here it is! (runs around screeching.) Ahem. :) SO happy to see this chapter, SO looking forward to more! And Nutmeg, I know you're over there... I've never given up on wanting to read more of your fic. ;)
Author's Response: Thank ya, Anise. You are so awesome. I am glad you're liking this.
I love the way this story is going! I feel like the end of this chapter is a turning point... everything else has kind of led up to where Draco and Ginny are now. A lot of externals have changed (the fake dating, the kiss, the meetings, etc.,) I think they're both about to start realizing that something internal is going to change for both of them. It seems like it's all about to start with this very real discussion between them... so bring on chapter 4!! :)
Author's Response: It'll be coming soon! I'm so glad you liked it!
I LOVE the first chapter! You've really put everything in place: believable motivations for both Draco and Ginny, the starting point for the attitude and personality of each, and the inciting situation that gets it all going. I really like the way that you portray this Draco-- he's kind of a spoiled brat, but there are lots of little details that show us he's basically chosen to be a decent human being (such as the sacrifice he made for Blaise.) For some reason, I just love that they met in the library. And the way they negotiated boundaries-- perfect! I look forward to more. :)
Author's Response: I am so glad you like it! That means a lot to me. I was shooting for Draco being an arse, but an overall not too bad person, so I'm glad I succeeded in that respect. I'm just so happy you like it, eeek! =D
A new chapter, yay!@ :) Such an interesting take on the Malfoys here as a family, and Draco's parents. Especially the way that Draco emphasizes his father is the easier to win over of the two. The truth is that we really don't know what the situation would be after the war with Narcissa, Lucius, their relationship, and the influence they'd have over any of Draco's potential love interests. In some ways, I can really see Lucius as the weaker of the two. He certainly was the less active character by DH. And it's interesting to consider that he might feel guilt over what happened to Ginny during her second year. We honestly don't know from canon what his feelings were about that after the fact, and there are a lot of possible scenarios where he did feel guilt. But Ginny obviously won both of Draco's parents over... ;) So let's see how feelings develop between those two!
Author's Response: I agree that Lucius was the weaker one in DH. Narcissa was the stronger one by far. I just sent out the next chapter to be beta'ed, so soon there will be more!
YAY for a new chapter! And for me?!? (blushes) I love the way that Draco and Ginny's relationship is developing, and Ginny's determination to not allow him to get too close to her (I don't think that plan is going to work out, though... ;) What we still don't know is how he feels about her. But I think that'll become more obvious in future chapters. Looking forward to more!
Author's Response: The next chapter focuses more on Draco's feelings. And yes, it is for you. Because if it weren't for you I wouldn't come back to D/G writing. You keep me going when I feel like my stories aren't good enough. So this is my thanks.
Foxmere has approximately 250 inhabitants, one pub and nothing magical whatsoever.Category: Works in Progress
Simply put, it's plain boring and in the back of beyond, which made my best friends decide it was the perfect get-away for me to clear my head.
No one had expected that the quiet process of getting my life together would involve breaking bones, breaking hearts and breaking prejudice.
This is a GREAT first chapter, and I guarantee that I wouldn't have guessed that English was not your first language. You've created such a rich world for your Ginny and her friends, with so many fun details. Also, I've always thought that if Ginny broke up with Harry (which WOULD happen, of course!), then she'd be uncomfortable with seeing him again for a very long time. She had a crush on him for too long for this not to be the case. Anyway... it'll be great to see where this goes! :)
Author's Response: Aw what a great review! I'm really glad you like it so far and I hope I can keep up the standard :) Of course Ginny and Harry would eventually break up! We always knew it would happen.
Hi,
I WILL r and r this fic... it's on my list... but for now, the admins are trying to reach you and your email link is dead. :( Could you please either correct it on the site or submit a ticket so that I can do it? Just press the "help" tab at the top of the screen.
When her family perished in the great wizarding war, Ginny turned her back on the magical community and eeked out a life for herself in the muggle world. Struggling to make ends meet, Ginny seeks to escape her hum-drum life and a throwaway comment from Draco galvanises her into action. Afraid of losing her, Draco intervenes and nothing ends up going to plan.Category: Works in Progress
I WILL review soon. Promise. I'm getting ready to go to Minnesota... I will bring my laptop and review! :) I remember I once left a review to a fic from the MN State Fair...
I'm so glad you were able to get this up!! (We'll make it work for the rest of the fic, I GUARANTEE. (glares at stupid filter on the site). It's so wonderful to see new material from you, and I can tell that this one is going to be good. This is such a believable Ginny, much more so than the vaguely sketched postwar canon version. It really does make sense in a lot of ways that she might give up magic and stubbornly live in the Muggle world no matter how difficult it was for her. And it also makes sense that she'd be stuck in her life, unable to move forward without some kind of outside impetus. There was a lot of brokenness in Ginny that simply wasn't dealt with in canon.
Anyway... looking forward to more! :)
Private Detective Ginny Weasley makes her living from investigating affairs, but on this case, only one thing is clear: there's more to Draco Malfoy than meets the eye.Category: Long and CompletedFor the DG Forum 2015 Fic Exchange - Winner of Most In Need of a Sequel.
(sticks head in) There will be reviews. YES, yes, there will. Very soon. :)
When a case of workplace sexual harassment leaves Ginny in a truly desperate state, the natural thing to do is to convince Draco Malfoy to pretend to be her boyfriend. Naturally.Category: Works in ProgressWritten for SunnyStorms in The DG Forum's 2015 Winter Fic Exchange.
Love this chapter! Pansy's character has grown on me, and this is a great portrayal. She knows what's going on, which Ginny and Draco aren't about to admit yet. I think that you showed in some very subtle ways why they can't yet make that admission. Draco actually thinks that he honestly can't define the reasons why he's fighting this attraction so hard, but I think that his mother's reactions tell the whole story-- if he gives in to his desire for Ginny, then he's really kind of giving up on the world that the Malfoys used to inhabit. And even though he's not happy with his mother for her attitude towards Ginny and her attempts to force him into behavior that was appropriate for that world, he's just not quite ready yet. It's a major step for him to take. My guess is that this is basically what Ginny is struggling with too.
Anyway... on to the next chappie!
Author's Response: Narcissa is a pretty big reason for Draco's reluctance to admit his feelings. There's definitely more under the surface (some stuff not related to their families, but personal demons) that contribute to their denial as well. It's a big complicated mess, and the fact that they won't acknowledge the mess makes it messier. ;) I'm so glad you enjoyed the last couple chapters! Thank you for reading and reviewing! n_n
Love this chapter, LOVE!! The smut at the start was great, although I kind of knew from the very beginning that it couldn't actually be happening in 3D space-time... ;) Loved the conversation with Astoria; she really has a personality here, and yet-- although it's a little hard to pin down exactly why-- it's easy to believe that she wouldn't be compatible with Draco. My favorite part, though, had to be Ginny's meeting with Colin. Such a wistful evocation of an encounter with a ghost... I wonder if he's sticking around only because he wants to see Dennis and stay at Hogwarts. Hard to tell. But clearly everyone doesn't become a ghost, so he must have some pretty good reasons. On to Ch 6! :)
Author's Response: Thanks, Anise!
Wonderful chapter!! There's so much revealed here about all of the characters. Your Hermione is so well done that I'm actually considering shifting her towards a more sympathetic character in Shadow... and that's saying a lot. :P I kind of lost patience with Hermione's character by the end of DH, but you give me hope that she can be redeemed! :) And this paragraph really sums up the realistic reasons why Ginny is so unwilling to admit that she does want to be with Draco:
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The difference between Hermione’s reaction to seeing the brand on Draco’s arm and Ginny’s reaction disconcerted Ginny more than she cared to admit. What did it mean about her that she was drawn to that kind of darkness rather than repulsed? It wasn’t the first time—no, definitely not the first time—that she’d wondered whether some essence of Tom Riddle still lingered inside her, and her interest in Draco’s Mark did nothing to relieve her of her fear."
That's a genuine, believable reason, and it makes a lot of sense. It's a big reason why I think that Draco and Ginny would be drawn together in the first place, but it could also be what frightens Ginny enough to drive her away from him. It feels REAL rather than like just another one of those plot devices used to keep the pair apart.
Anyway.... on to the next chapter, and eventually, I'll catch up to the present day! :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much, Anise!! We're going to see Ginny confront that darkness in future chapters, too. I'm glad you think it's a believable possible setback in their relationship!
NO! You're not imagining it. YES! I'm actually leaving a review! :) The past year has just been... well, there hasn't been a lot of fanfic reading, forget about reviewing. :P This chapter seriously went up a year ago, I know. But this means that there are a whole bunch of delicious chapters to catch up on. :) And this one is so much fun-- from Draco thoughtfully providing Ginny with a hex dummy to a three piece suit being made droolworthy. Off to the next one.
Author's Response: Doth mine eyes deceive me?? ;) Your persistence to catch up means a lot to me. I hope you enjoy the chapters to come!
Snerk—Draco’s reactions re just so perfect. He actually kind of WANTS a disastrous reception. Although I wonder if in a way, he just convinces himself that he wants to see it because he can’t imagine that kind of reaction not happening, and he wants to feel in control of the possibility. I LOVE Harry and Astoria together!! Hint… I’m kind of writing that too. ;)
Some of the Weasleys really do have a terrible reaction eventually, of course, so he was kind of right. :P Interesting that Arthur is the one to defend him even though he seems genuinely uncomfortable with Draco being there.
Such a great scene when she wants to see the Dark Mark… she’s really straightforward about it, which I think is the only way this Draco could have been honest about it in return. Their relationship is moving ahead in such a believable way.
On to the next chapter!
Author's Response: Harry and Astoria is my way of subverting the epilogue of DOOOOM. It's not Astoria's fault that Ginny is a better match for Draco! So she takes over Harry for me. :) Arthur defending Draco is more of an act of support for his wife, since Molly is the one who requested Draco to attend. It would be super rude of them to invite him over and then let their entire family gang up on him, you know? And Molly has never approved of the Malfoy-Weasley fighting. Just see how she reacts at the beginning of CoS when Lucius and Arthur get into it.
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, Anise!