Draco and Ginny in a shower, and no plot, from a long-ago challenge which involved including key phrases. Absolutely no redeeming value.Category: Completed Short Stories
Very enjoyable. Excellently written. I've recommended it to a friend of mine who should enjoy it as well.
Currently standing at 190, the as-definitive-as-I-can-make-it list, compiled from various sources, along with a few of my own contributions.Category: Essays
This is the funniest thing that I have read in a long, long time. Well done.
Will Draco ever get Ginny in bed? He feels that they're ready, but our tomboyish beauty seems awfully attached to her pants. Or maybe she just likes driving him crazy...Category: Works in Progress
First off, let me say that you have a decent storyline here. This story has a lot of potential, and I hope that you will update it and continue it.
Second, I feel what other people are saying about the swearing is valid. I felt that there was a little too much of it in this story, especially the use of the word "fuck". And before you go playing the teenage boy card, up until a few months ago, I was one.
Thirdly, if someone says that they felt that the swearing was distracting, don't rip into them and tell them to "get over themselves." It's their opinion. They read your story and were nice enough to leave you a review. Rip into people for leaving their opinion, and soon people leave reviews at all.
LP
Author's Response: Loveable Punk,\r\n\r\nWhile you have not completely changed my outlook, I will try to tone down the cursing simply because the majority of you guys have said something. Also, if I remember correctly, when I left that response I was sick in bed with the mother of all sinus infections and was feeling pretty hateful towards the rest of the world. So I am asking you now, as a sane, healthy individual to forgive me of my earlier meltdown. That means all of you guys. Again, terribly sorry for my outburst and I hope you guys can find it in your hearts to forgive me. \r\n\r\nWith love and regret, your dear friend, \r\nDraconis Major
Here’s the thing about love; no one ever tells you the truth. They don’t want to ruin whatever childhood fantasies you’re going to concoct up in that ‘pretty little head of yours.’ No, no, see, they’re all much more sadistic then that. They would rather you find out later that all the dreaming you did was for nothing. Then that way, you can be just like them, and suffer.Category: Completed Short Stories
Well well well, I think I read a lot of us in that story, minus that fact that you didn't hit me after I kissed you the first time.
Wonderful read as always, darling.
Author's Response: Yeah yeah yeah, I could have, or something. Regardless, thanks for your review punk ;)
“When she says she wants someone to love Harry, she doesn’t mean you. Trust me on that.” His head turned away, looking out over the sea through the window. “No matter what she says, she doesn’t mean you. And she doesn't mean me."Category: Completed Short Stories
Sorry that I forgot to address this is dgloves70's review, but here goes. I'm leaving it up to the reader to decide why Draco cheated. It could be for any number of reasons, any of the multitude of reasons guys cheat in the real world, be it a feeling of invulnerability, loneliness, the need for something different, the thrill, etc. But that's up to the reader.