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"If you dream it you can do it"- Walt Disney. My personal belief when it comes to writing Draco/Ginny fanfiction.
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Dragon and Angel by dragonsangel68    (Reviews - 750)

COMPLETE!  Strolling through Diagon Alley Lucius Malfoy comes across a little boy who could have been Draco's twin.  Has his family tree been expanded, without his knowledge?  Has Draco been keeping secrets?  Or is he oblivious to the fact that he may have an heir?
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: Arthur Weasley, D/G Offspring, Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Lucius Malfoy, Molly Weasley, Narcissa Malfoy, Other Characters, Pansy Parkinson, Ron Weasley
Compliant with: None
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Drama, Humor, Romance, Smut
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: Dragon and Angel Arc
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Chapters: 56 | Word count: 387242 | Read count: 297011 | Published: Jun 27, 2004 | Updated: Jan 11, 2006
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Reviewer: Valentines Riddle Signed
Date: Apr 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Diagon Alley

Hi,

Just to get this out of the way - I think you're a great writer, and your grasp of family situations and relationships are uncannily accurate!

However, as enjoyable as your story was to read (at least for the first half), I felt you repeated yourself and dragged the story out in some sections. Not all, mind, but things like the repeated discoveries while on the verge of kissing etc were a tad irksome after a while. Overall, although I think your writing is good, pruning the story down so it didn't drag out so much at the end would have improved it.

I assume this is supposed to be OOC, so I won't take you to task about Draco/Lucius's fluffiness etc, but the fact Ginny was a stay-at-home mother, and a clone of Mrs Weasley, annoyed me in places too: I see her as a little more independent. Also, although Drake and Angel were accurate representations of small children, they were just as aggravating if not more so to the reader than to Draco and Ginny at times!

Those were just some minor criticisms. There were many good points, and this is definitely one of the only Harry/Hermione fics I could read without vomiting, and I like that you didn't make Pansy desperate or a whore! Overall, congratulations on a generally well-written story.

sincerely,

Riddle.

Author's Response: Thanks.

Any Means of Distraction by danator    (Reviews - 33)

There aren't nearly enough stories about Ginny manipulating Draco. Smut lovers be sure to keep an eye out for scenes in the rain and a classroom. You're welcome.




Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Smut
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 3 | Word count: 8208 | Read count: 18500 | Published: Nov 04, 2006 | Updated: Nov 04, 2006
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Reviewer: Valentines Riddle Signed
Date: Apr 04, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Funny and a great read, I loved it! Well done
Riddle Xx

Anything you can do, I can do better by Peki    (Reviews - 24)

"It was a war, and he was determined to see her back down first." ~ Written for the D/G smutakkah 2006.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: None
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Smut
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 7118 | Read count: 10637 | Published: Jan 05, 2007 | Updated: Jan 05, 2007
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Reviewer: Valentines Riddle Signed
Date: Apr 04, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Love it. Really good banter, as in character as D/G can be, and hot, imaginative sex! Well done!
Riddle Xx

Curiosity: Part I by la_rubinita    (Reviews - 23)

Can Draco convince Ginny to take what she wants?
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: HBP and below
Era: Future AU
Genres: Romance, Smut
Warnings: Blood
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 4821 | Read count: 4771 | Published: Oct 25, 2007 | Updated: Oct 25, 2007
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Reviewer: Valentines Riddle Signed
Date: Apr 05, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Absolutely amazing!

Author's Response: Thanks :D