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Reviews by LovelyLytton

Choosing Evil by Mynuet    (Reviews - 68)

Why was Ginny Weasley standing in a circle of robed and cloaked figures, swathed in black except for her uncovered left arm? Why was the littlest member of a family ruled by a muggle-obsessed patriarch awaiting being branded with the Dark Mark?
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Romance, Horror
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 2624 | Read count: 8065 | Published: May 06, 2004 | Updated: May 06, 2004
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Reviewer: LovelyLytton Signed
Date: Apr 28, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: ...

This is very strange, but very well written. I do like the idea that Ginny was corrupted by Tom in this subtle way. Well done.

A Bed Made for One by Sarea Okelani    (Reviews - 121)

And in the darkness bind them.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 3006 | Read count: 16911 | Published: May 22, 2004 | Updated: May 22, 2004
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Reviewer: LovelyLytton Signed
Date: Apr 20, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: A Bed Made for One

Hmm, I actually don´t remember whether I´ve reviewed this before, but let´s just say that I found it very touching and heart-breaking. It was recced to me over at FictionAlley, and I am very glad for that. Brilliant writing.

Summer Rain by Nokomis    (Reviews - 14)

Rain and tears intermingled with regret and remorse, the pain of knowing what might never be. Draco must make a choice between his father's demands and Ginny.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Character Death
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 2057 | Read count: 2950 | Published: May 25, 2004 | Updated: May 25, 2004
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Reviewer: LovelyLytton Signed
Date: Apr 25, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Summer Rain

Oh. Oh. He doesn´t redeem himself and save her. A Malfoy killed his rightful heir? That is a very uncommon approach, and you pull it off in perfection.

The Head Boy's Laundry by sugarbear_1269    (Reviews - 55)

The closest she can get to him is his clothing...
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Romance, Angst, Drama, Smut
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 5945 | Read count: 13315 | Published: Jun 20, 2004 | Updated: Jun 20, 2004
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Reviewer: LovelyLytton Signed
Date: Apr 20, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: The Head Boy's Laundry

I found your fic through the Classics list, and I have to say that it does deserve its place there. Brilliant, red hot, amazing. Wow!

Curiosity by Nokomis    (Reviews - 16)

Ginny Weasley wants to ask Draco Malfoy a question.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 1060 | Read count: 3985 | Published: Jun 25, 2004 | Updated: Jun 25, 2004
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Reviewer: LovelyLytton Signed
Date: Apr 25, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Curiosity

That was sweet!

The Icing on the Cake by Nokomis    (Reviews - 32)

In a tale of forks, golden tassels and cake, Ginny endures an uncomfortable meal at the Malfoys.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 3551 | Read count: 3568 | Published: Jul 10, 2004 | Updated: Jul 10, 2004
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Reviewer: LovelyLytton Signed
Date: Apr 25, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: The Icing on the Cake

Funny! I loved it! I´ll recommend it on my LJ!

Beginning and End by Mynuet    (Reviews - 51)

When had it started? While there was a definite incident that could be pointed to as the start of it all, there were roots that trailed backwards, tangled and building up to where finally something was visible. A girl who felt herself to be tainted started drawing in on herself, and no one, not even her brothers, seemed to notice. A boy, who made sure no one noticed that he watched her, wondered about what was going on behind the deliberate blankness of her eyes.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Romance, Drama
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 3051 | Read count: 4294 | Published: Aug 03, 2004 | Updated: Aug 03, 2004
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Reviewer: LovelyLytton Signed
Date: Apr 29, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Beginning and End

I listened to the Podcast version of this, and I enjoyed it very much! Lovely writing!

Here, Tonight by applecede    (Reviews - 19)

She pressed her lips to his and he collapsed promptly. His arms came around her, and his lips were warm and firm against hers...he thought he might have said, or begged or pleaded, but he wasn't entirely sure, "Don't go, Gin. Please don't leave me. Please."
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Romance, Angst
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 3632 | Read count: 3389 | Published: Aug 23, 2004 | Updated: Aug 23, 2004
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Reviewer: LovelyLytton Signed
Date: Apr 30, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Here, Tonight

Brilliant! Your Draco is perfection!

Considerately Killing Me by applecede    (Reviews - 33)

Breathing, he considered, was so difficult all of a sudden. 'Course, he always had trouble breathing when she was around, but now it was painful.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 2 | Word count: 3019 | Read count: 6667 | Published: Aug 23, 2004 | Updated: Sep 04, 2004
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Reviewer: LovelyLytton Signed
Date: Apr 30, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

This reads very nicely. I wonder: May there be more?

Off and On by Mynuet    (Reviews - 57)

Draco and Ginny have had a relationship, on and off, for years. What happens when Ginny decides she needs more?
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Romance, Smut
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 6315 | Read count: 11476 | Published: Oct 10, 2004 | Updated: Oct 10, 2004
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Reviewer: LovelyLytton Signed
Date: Apr 20, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: For Liss

now, that was steamy, funny and sweet. Well done!

Killer by applecede    (Reviews - 17)

Draco Malfoy is the best sort of killer there is. Ginny Weasley can promise that.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 1670 | Read count: 4281 | Published: Oct 20, 2004 | Updated: Oct 20, 2004
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Date: Apr 30, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Killer

Very well done.

Hold Me, Heal Me by sugarbear_1269    (Reviews - 172)

In a world where Death Eaters reign and good wizards hide in plain sight, preconceived notions must be redefined. AU for post-Hogwarts setting. WARNING: Allusion to H/Hr since I posted this at Portkey. Please don't bludgeon me; I almost did it myself.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Romance, Angst, Drama
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 11 | Word count: 29460 | Read count: 25149 | Published: Oct 25, 2004 | Updated: Sep 03, 2006
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Reviewer: LovelyLytton Signed
Date: Apr 24, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: On A Shoestring

I have to drain the dragon.

So far, it is both funny and interesting, I´ll just keep reading.Good writing you´ve done here.

Reviewer: LovelyLytton Signed
Date: Apr 24, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: Gently Comes Their Slumber

Love it!

Reviewer: LovelyLytton Signed
Date: Apr 24, 2008 Title: Chapter 5: Between The Sheets

It was hard to resist someone who had likely never asked permission in his life.
This is my favourite line, it characterizes him so well.

Reviewer: LovelyLytton Signed
Date: Apr 24, 2008 Title: Chapter 7: Until It Sleeps

Steamy!

Reviewer: LovelyLytton Signed
Date: Apr 25, 2008 Title: Chapter 11: Battlefield

Cliffhanger-alarm! I am on my toes, waiting for the next part.

Economy In Love by applecede    (Reviews - 58)

Ginny breaks up with Draco. Draco doesn’t take it very well. The trials and tribulations of their relationship.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Romance, Humor
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 4 | Word count: 13858 | Read count: 4118 | Published: Dec 28, 2004 | Updated: Jul 28, 2005
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Reviewer: LovelyLytton Signed
Date: Apr 30, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: How to Make Perfect Sense

The story is brilliant, I can´t wait to read more!

Singed by applecede    (Reviews - 19)

Ginny wants revenge, and she extracts it from Draco.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Romance, Angst
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 2757 | Read count: 1666 | Published: Jan 04, 2005 | Updated: Jan 04, 2005
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Date: Apr 30, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Singed

Now this was utterly amazing!

Familiar Things by JSaintG7    (Reviews - 54)

"Because she wasn't overly anything to anyone, she came to mean something to me."
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 3856 | Read count: 7084 | Published: Jan 18, 2005 | Updated: Jan 18, 2005
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Reviewer: LovelyLytton Signed
Date: Apr 29, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Familar Things

This is really amazing, you write a picture-perfect Draco. My favourite moment was when sat next to her in the library, doing his homework, while she was crying, without being cruel.

Dance Me To the End of Love by Embellished    (Reviews - 30)

He can't help but watch her dance through life.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: OotP and below
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 4290 | Read count: 4269 | Published: Feb 21, 2005 | Updated: Feb 21, 2005
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Date: Apr 30, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Dance Me To the End of Love

This is very sweet. Well done.

Brightside by jessica k malfoy    (Reviews - 40)

Ginny's got a secret with silver hair and a Dark Mark, and it's her fiancee that finds out. This is the result of me listening to the Killer's Mr Brightside 1000 times. Not really a song fic though cause I don't like those.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Angst, Drama
Warnings: Character Death
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 3435 | Read count: 2308 | Published: Apr 03, 2005 | Updated: Apr 03, 2005
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Reviewer: LovelyLytton Signed
Date: Apr 27, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: #1 Oliver

Oh, this is so sad. I like how you told this through Oliver´s eyes.

Cliche Fic of Doom by Mynuet    (Reviews - 146)

A fic whose purpose is to eventually include every D/G cliche ever. Mary Sues and melodrama abound.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 2108 | Read count: 2248 | Published: May 19, 2005 | Updated: May 19, 2005
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Date: May 03, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: In the Beginning

funny!

Follow by applecede    (Reviews - 18)

From one place to the next, it's always the same routine: a letter, a meeting, a memory modified.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 2115 | Read count: 1064 | Published: May 30, 2005 | Updated: May 30, 2005
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Date: Apr 30, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Follow

I liked it! I hope there will be more.

A Fate Worse Than Death by ragdollangel    (Reviews - 28)

It wasn’t half as bad as she thought it would be.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 1316 | Read count: 4602 | Published: Jun 13, 2005 | Updated: Jun 13, 2005
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Reviewer: LovelyLytton Signed
Date: Apr 25, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: A Fate Worse Than Death

Sweet!

Chocolate Shags by Anise    (Reviews - 55)

The good news is that magical chocolate really does have romance-enhancing properties. The bad news is that at Hogwarts, well, everybody's been giving chocolate to everyone else at Hogwarts for years. Including the giant squid. What will happen when the consequences catch up with them all at last?
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 1119 | Read count: 6837 | Published: Jun 15, 2005 | Updated: Jun 15, 2005
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Reviewer: LovelyLytton Signed
Date: Apr 30, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: The One and Only

This is very original, and I enjoyed it. But the idea of Ginny and Dumbledore made me cringe. Urgh, terrible. But other than that: Well done!