OOh, what a cliffhanger!  I've been following this story for a while and I really like it. Harry's getting on my nerves right now and I'm kind of mad at Ginny for being mad at Draco, but mainly I'm hoping for her to find out she's pregnant, just because.  Really excited about the next chapter, as well as apprehensive.

Ah, so that's why they couldn't just cast the spells on Draco.

I really liked this scene between Ron and Draco. Not only did it show how they'd both matured, but it was bittersweet in that they both care for Ginny very much. And Ron might know more about Harry than Draco thinks he does. Because if he hadn't suspected in the first place, then he would have had more of a reaction to what Draco told him about Harry. So, is Ginny going to come and visit Draco now, or is she still too weak?

Oh no! What has happened to Draco. But woohoo! Yay for Ginny. Gosh, what an arsehole you made Harry, I love it! Free to hate him as I so please. And I just knew Hermione was up to no good. So then, Draco and Ginny will run off together with Luna as the confidant and the witness to their wedding. Nice. (not really what I think's going to happen, but wouldn't that be nice?)

So...I bet Bella/the half-Dementors are the cause of what went wrong. That plus the whole, out of energy thing. Maybe the half-dementors were using their ability to suck the happiness away, which further weakened Draco who will now be in somewhat of a comatose state? Or is there something wrong with his soul, and not his body?

Weirdness. Bella's either sleeping with them or she's "changed". I'm really loving this so far, and your little skit at the beginning was great. It reminded me of Ginny and Draco Do America as well as your MST fic.
Lots of mysteries here, but mostly I just want to beat up Harry and rescue Ginny from his clingy clutches. He reminds me of a friend of mine that had a crush on me and well, got a little obesessed, saying he loved me after our first kiss, and that's how I imagine your Harry acting. Clinging to Ginny when she wants to be alone, and not even noticing her discomfort in the least because of his own selfish happiness at just having her there.
And the whole asking if he could kiss her again, obviously there was a reason that she stopped kissing him, and I think it had more to do with her feelings for Draco, than with the whole "I have to keep my virginity for Draco" thing. And yay! She still likes Draco. She wasn't lying when she said that she loved him, but there is definitely something weird going on with Potter. If only Hermione and Luna were still there to rescue her. Ah well, I can't wait for the next chapter, and am looking forward to what Bella's really been up to with the guards. *winks, then recoils in horror at what I have suggested*

Aww, that was sweet.

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Liked it. Very funny. Though this sounds vaguely familiar, and I'm not not talking about "Chocolate Shags".  Also, what all of a sudden made all these people have to shag Harry?

That was really cool. I loved the way you characterized your Cho. She's pretty cool. Not too smutty, but I think the lack of explicitness only adds to the nature of the fic. Perhaps a follow up fic following Cho or Draco and Ginny?

I liked this.  Not quite cutesy, I'm not sure what word to use.  I really liked the mood of this fic. It was very cinematic.

This is really good. I really liked it, especially the last part. The fact that there wasn't really much of a relationship between Draco and Ginny added to it, rather than taking away from it.