This isn’t a fairy tale that ends happily ever after; at least not for me. You see, this is the story of how I, Harry James Potter, learned to let her go.Category: Completed Short Stories
I loved this :) I read it slowly over and over trying to visualize all the in-between moments and loved what you created. Great job!
Author's Response: I'm gald you enjoyed it enough to read it a few times! Thanks for the review!
Draco and Ginny fight every time they see each other. Luna and Blaise are tired of listening to them complain about the other and hatch a plan that they hope will put an end to the enmity between them.Category: Completed Short Stories
Loved it! Very cute and I love how many times they had to try the kiss again and again. It wasn't too rushed to be unrealistic or too slow and sappy. Great balance!
Author's Response: Wow! Thank you!
“Don’t you have plans?” “They can wait.” Short pieces examining moments in Draco and Ginny’s unorthodox relationship.Category: Works in Progress
I absolutely loved this story! I love their exchange and how he just decided to stay the night! Very good!
Draco Malfoy is tired. Tired of having his life dictated for him. Tired of the pressure he feels to take on the Death Eater lifestyle his father wants for him. No one notices that Draco is unhappy, though. No one, that is, except for the one person he doesn't want around.Category: Long and Completed
I liked how unbothered Draco was about everything and the couches. Short but sweet and very enjoyable.
Author's Response: Thank you very much!
So sweet. Nothing else to say, but very sweet. Great job!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Interesting... I definitely am curious as to Ginny's reaction. Keep it up ;)
Author's Response: Thanks! A new chapter will be forthcoming!
I really liked this chapter. I'm not sure on specifics about why, but it was good. I think it's starting to feel like 'the plot is thickening' saying. ;) Keep it up, I'm definately interested and wanting to know where your taking this!
Author's Response: Thank you! Lol! The plot is definitely thickening. I'll post soon, and the next chapter... well, let's just say it's rather interesting. ;)
Ooh... intrigue! I like it!
Author's Response: Thank you! ;)
I just wanted to tell you that I am honest to goodness loving each of your updates and especially how frequent they are! I love it! Very good!
Author's Response: Lol! I'll be sure to keep it up, then! Thank you!
Of course I like it! You're doing a wonderful job with this story. I never know where its going but I think I like it that way! Every chapter is a pleasant surprise!
Author's Response: Thank you! Plenty more surprises to come.
Fantastic! More please! (and I love your version of her disappearance, can't wait for what Draco thinks with Luna in his house) Also, was Luna taken at Christmas or Easter (I know Harry and Ron found her over Easter, but was she taken before then?) because I know Ginny they tried to get at some point also. I think. Sometimes the books get fuzzy. Anyway, I think you are doing a terrific job with this story and I always look forward to reading it the moment I see it's been updated. Fantastic job! Give yourself a pat on the back ;)
Author's Response: Oh! Ow! Can't reach my back too well. Sorry, I meant to write Christmas. Silly me! I'm so happy everytime someone says they like my story. Like I could fly! Anyway... thanks for reviewing!
OOh please include a mother-son talk about girls. Awkard or not that would be wonderful! Great job by the way, still love this!
Author's Response: People keep asking me for that, but I didn't write it. Maybe I'll do a cookie at some point. Anyway, thanks for your review!
Ooh intrigue! So he does know the spell!
Author's Response: Hehe! Of course!
Oh cute! I like Martha a whole heck of a lot now for making Ginny open her stubborn eyes to the possibilities! Good job!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Someone had to do it! Ginny is a bit too oblivious to her own feelings.
Oh that was so cute! FINALLY. *deep exhaling breath* This story is so superb and well-paced, much as I wanted this moment to happen sooner, I'm glad that you took the time to set it up properly and make it natural and believable. The fact that you could make your readers anxious as well reflects that. Great job, looking forward to more!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! That really means a lot to me! And I'm also glad to have finally gotten into the relationship a bit. The next few chapters are some of my favourites! I'll post again in a couple of days.
Yes, your kiss scene was very well written, especially as it is their first kiss scene. It was innocent and mostly chaste though Draco was eager for some tongue, which isn't a surprise. He is Draco Malfoy after all. Well done with the whole chapter really. I'm so glad they're finally getting somewhere and that you didn't make her concerns with her family too long and consuming. You got the point across without pointless prattle, OMG he's a MALFOY thinking. It was very cute and realistic. And can I just say how much I love your regular updates?
Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it! I figured she'd spent enough time in the last 17 chapters thinking about how he was a Malfoy and she and her family hated him so much that I didn't really need to beat it to death in this one. Besides... I wanted to get to that kiss! ;)
Great job, can't wait for more! Hope they can get past all the jealous rages and such and get onto the good snogging sessions! Oh and I love your frequent updates!
Author's Response: Lol! Thank you!
Brilliant. I want to know where Ginny is, but I loved that he tried to save her. Great job!
Author's Response: Thanks! The next chapter will clear up that little mystery.
I don't think it's choppy at all, really well-written in fact. Great job with this and I'm so glad that they're finally together!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Oh wow was NOT expecting that. Do update soon!
Author's Response: Surprise! Lol! Thanks for reviewing!
Beautiful. Undoubtably your best chapter thus far. THIS is what this story has been leading to and it was so utterly perfect! Loved the fight to see if she would give in and finally kiss him!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :D
I liked it. I'm wondering where it's going with Blaise knowing plus Lucius' suspicions. I really love this story though, so keep up the good work. Don't ever doubt your own work either. If you like it, that should be enough :) More than that, your readers like it, so I'd say you're writing marvelously. Keep it up and I'm looking forward to more!
Author's Response: Thank you! Really, thank you. Every now and again it's nice to hear more than the usual 'really good chapter, can't wait for more'. I appreciate your encouragement!
I really enjoyed the glimpse of the DA in Ginny's life. Great chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks! I felt that it was important to include it, since it was such a big part of Deathly Hallows (even though we didn't see it very much at all, disappointingly) and it was a good way to move the story into the next idea segment. I'll be posting again soon, so stay tuned! ;)
As each of us die we leave behind glimpses of our lives that linger in places we have been. Those memories, those pieces of our lives, are the most powerful form of magic. We ourselves are not important. It's what's inside of us. What lives on when we are gone.Category: Completed Short Stories
Nice one-shot. Never thought of anything like this, but I liked it a lot. Very original. Weird to see Draco as an old man though. ;P
A poem inspired by Ginny's love for Draco, about her feelings for him remaining strong after his passing-away.Category: Poetry
I loved the whole thing! That was really pretty and just perfect! Good job!
Author's Response: Thanks you so much! :D
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