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Registered: Feb 14, 2006
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The Plan by Mishavay    (Reviews - 7)

Ginny is tired of being over looked. She hatches a scheme with the help of her best friend to not be ignored...
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Sexual Violence
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 919 | Read count: 608 | Published: May 24, 2006 | Updated: May 25, 2006
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Reviewer: Phaedra7veils Signed
Date: May 26, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Stunned Into Silence.

Draco meets his match. Interesting start.

Author's Response: and only just then beginning.

Reflections by Lyrielle    (Reviews - 41)

“'Weasley…wait,' he mumbled. Ginny, shocked, turned to stare at him... " It's the last train ride home of the year. Draco reflects on who he is, as well as what he is to Ginny.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 950 | Read count: 4230 | Published: May 31, 2006 | Updated: May 31, 2006
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Reviewer: Phaedra7veils Signed
Date: Jun 01, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Reflections

The way you've written Draco's introspection is quite wonderful, the way he is continually startled and appalled by Lucius' darkness in his own facial reflections. The memory fragment involving Narcissa was excellent, especially as it took experience and maturity for him to understand what was really happening from his mother's point of view. A beautiful story. And yes, I would've loved to see Ginny's reaction. Would you be tempted to write a series of shorts like this?

Author's Response: Perhaps, but I\'m not quite sure yet. I have been brainstorming a lot of plot bunnies right now, but it\'ll take some time for them to form. Thanks!

Mile High by CharmedPhantom    (Reviews - 35)

Draco and Ginny in a muggle plane... An empty bathroom... Ladies and gentlemen, welcome to the Mile High Club

Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: None
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Drama, Smut
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 1353 | Read count: 2878 | Published: Jun 01, 2006 | Updated: Jun 01, 2006
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Reviewer: Phaedra7veils Signed
Date: Jun 03, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Mile High

Ooph. The name's "Hanky, Disposable Hanky." Funny, especially since this Ginny's a bit full of herself and all her gorgeousness.

Author's Response: Hanky, Disposable Hanky I like it!

Gale - Prelude to The Storm by Glass_Mermaid    (Reviews - 20)

It is on days such as this, when the sky seems so perfect it hurts, when her heart is left aching and bare to the thought of him, that the shackles on her soul are tightened and she can keep him at bay no longer.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 2104 | Read count: 3154 | Published: Jun 04, 2006 | Updated: Jun 04, 2006
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Reviewer: Phaedra7veils Signed
Date: Jun 05, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Gale

Wonderful character sketch. I love the tantalizing hints you've dropped about Draco and the Order, and really felt Ginny's frustration. Too many beautiful images and phrases to isolate, but the pearly quill, the memory of bloody handprints, the quicksilver veins all mesh into a collective prose-poem whole. The perfect counterpart to the Tempest. I love how they even end with the same phrase. Well done.

Author's Response: Thanks! I worked hard on making their seperate lives joined, as they each parody the others life. Ginny\'s is so full of laughter and life, even if she remains apart from it, and Draco\'s is little but darkness and death, and he\'s caught in the thick of it. I love how they are each caught in their love for one another, but both deem it as a weakness in such trying times. I\'m interested to see how this works out.

A Broken Heart's Desire by CCC    (Reviews - 77)

What does a broken heart want? Ginny is trying to figure that out in a dysfunctional relationship with Draco Malfoy. Can he help her or is it just a game?
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger
Compliant with: GoF and below
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 3 | Word count: 4196 | Read count: 11056 | Published: Jun 05, 2006 | Updated: Mar 27, 2008
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Reviewer: Phaedra7veils Signed
Date: Jun 07, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: A Broken Heart's Desire

I love the transition at the end of the story, their vulnerability. Beautiful job.

Author's Response: Thank you. I liked the idea of two broken people coming together and helping each other.

Ginny's Revenge by CCC    (Reviews - 376)

Ginny catches Harry with another woman. What will she do for revenge?
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Humor, Romance, Smut
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 26 | Word count: 73871 | Read count: 86115 | Published: Jun 15, 2006 | Updated: Sep 14, 2009
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Reviewer: Phaedra7veils Signed
Date: Jun 17, 2006 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I enjoy your sweet Ginny and Draco. Lovely story.

Author's Response: Thank you. I like Draco to be sweet every once in a while.

Giving In by Fistful of Moondust    (Reviews - 7)

Draco and Ginny finally let go of all inhibititions and give into one another.

*** An outtake from chapter 13 of White Noise.

Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Smut
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 1802 | Read count: 1996 | Published: Jun 16, 2006 | Updated: Jun 16, 2006
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Reviewer: Phaedra7veils Signed
Date: Jun 17, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Giving In

I love Draco's impatience and Ginny's release in this smut-cookie. I'm still annoyed that he's allowing himself to be implicated in Harry's murder, but that will only make it more exciting when he is absolved. Ginny has to show how talented she is by saving him from himself and his enemies, of course.

The Island by kewljules    (Reviews - 11)

The war cost many people many things, not the least of which, in a certain Slytherin's eyes, was the loss of his family stronghold, Spungen House, on the mysterious Malfoy Island. When a strange, brown haired girl with orange high tops buys the island and moves into Spungen House, he really, REALLY isn't happy.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Humor, Mystery, Romance, Smut
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 1118 | Read count: 262 | Published: Jun 17, 2006 | Updated: Jun 17, 2006
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Date: Jun 17, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: The Blonde and the Brunette

Ooh, don't mess with Miss Ginny! Marc Goldstein was incredibly loathesome, a relative of OotP DA's Anthony? Let me guess, the little animal poking its head out from under the bush---a ferret? He seems to know the difference between Muggle and Wizarding footwear...

Slowly by UMBlueMusic    (Reviews - 22)

Ginny had always wanted to learn to dance properly, but she's surprised to find her class leaves her wanting more from her teacher.

Inspired by a night of "So You Think You Can Dance" and some imagination.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Romance, Smut
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 4189 | Read count: 2382 | Published: Jun 24, 2006 | Updated: Jun 24, 2006
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Reviewer: Phaedra7veils Signed
Date: Jun 25, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Slowly

Terrific, you're here! A definite yes for Dance/Smut, and your Draco and Ginny can leave smudges on my mirrors any day.

Author's Response: Thanks! ^_^ Yayy for mirror smudges.

Desert Rose by LovesFantasy    (Reviews - 19)

A fun little one shot. Featuring: Draco, rain, Ginny, mud puddles, and a kiss...
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 2142 | Read count: 2754 | Published: Jun 28, 2006 | Updated: Jun 28, 2006
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Reviewer: Phaedra7veils Signed
Date: Jun 28, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Desert Rose

Very sweet, but it changed direction right at the spot where it was getting interesting. Confounded potato-shopping distractions. :^}

Author's Response: Hahaha, yeah, I know. I didn\'t want to make more out of it than a short one-shot. That\'s why I didn\'t expand on their blossoming relationship... Thanks for the review!!

Ten by kueble    (Reviews - 7)

Ginny's been a bad, bad girl.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Smut
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 1580 | Read count: 3315 | Published: Jun 28, 2006 | Updated: Jun 30, 2006
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Date: Jun 30, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very steamy. This must've been fun to write.

Hesperides' Apple by ogygiasylph    (Reviews - 871)

When Ginny Weasley becomes Draco Malfoy's wife, he suspects neither her true identity nor her dangerous motives. But when all Hell breaks lose and their relationship takes unexpected turns, there is more at stake than preserving their marriage--namely, preserving their lives.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: Blaise Zabini (boy), Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Hermione Granger, Narcissa Malfoy, Neville Longbottom, Other Characters
Compliant with: None
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Drama, Mystery, Romance
Warnings: Blood, Character Death, Graphic Violence
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 33 | Word count: 166850 | Read count: 239370 | Published: Jun 29, 2006 | Updated: Sep 17, 2009
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Reviewer: Phaedra7veils Signed
Date: Jul 23, 2006 Title: Chapter 7: 6. Until death do us part

Now that it has progressed from the fluffy, showy society matron preparation scenes to this very intense and dark oath-taking chapter, I am hooked on this story. I love its plunge into the shadows. Ginny's desparation is palpable. Really good work.

Author's Response: Thank you very much :) I felt as though every \"fluffy, showy society\" has darker roots, and here they are. Why else would a Weasley, brought up in a healthy and balanced environment like Ginny was, ever go for Malfoy\'s twisted world? Unfortunately, she\'s playing with fire and cannot escape unharmed--if she can escape at all.

Reviewer: Phaedra7veils Signed
Date: Aug 13, 2006 Title: Chapter 12: 11. Celebrating Samhain

Very powerful chapter. I am in dread of what will happen to Ginny now, assuming Draco now knows her identity. Good job building the suspense.

Author's Response: Thank you. Mea culpa for the confusion I caused, but Draco doesn\'t know who she is yet... I just assumed that seeing his wife kissing someone else would justify his anger, regardless of who the dead bloke is. At that point, however, he couldn\'t see Harry (I am REALLY going to have to rewrite a few passages here... eep...)

Criminal Intentions by Lilianna    (Reviews - 4)

Draco Malfoy is on trial for his past and there's only one person that can save him from the dementor's kiss, Ginny Weasley! Can she uncover the truth and set him free? Or will she uncover more to Draco Malfoy than meets the eye? Meanwhile, Ginny is in her own world of trouble. Can she ever tell Harry the truth? How will her family take her new string of lies? Rated for later chapters.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Drama, Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 3 | Word count: 5324 | Read count: 507 | Published: Jun 29, 2006 | Updated: Jun 29, 2006
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Reviewer: Phaedra7veils Signed
Date: Jun 30, 2006 Title: Chapter 3: Making a Deal- Part 1

Hello Lilliana,
You can reorganize the order of your chapters under the edit function of Account Info:Manage Stories.

Author's Response: The chapters are in order. They have been for awhile, just for some reason they were validated in different orders.

The Letter by rae_grace    (Reviews - 12)

Draco gets a letter from a 'secret admirer' and is rather... distraught.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Other Characters, Pansy Parkinson
Compliant with: None
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Humor, Mystery, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 1809 | Read count: 2604 | Published: Jun 30, 2006 | Updated: Jun 30, 2006
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Reviewer: Phaedra7veils Signed
Date: Jul 01, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Your Ginny is a very winsome young lady. I love that Draco doesn't have the slightest idea what hit him.

Author's Response: No idea whatsoever! lol

The Date Doctor by Maelyn    (Reviews - 123)

Narcissa Malfoy wants Draco married off-- and quickly! So, she chooses to send him to a date coach of sorts. What Narcissa wants, Narcissa gets! *Fun, fluff!*
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 7 | Word count: 12938 | Read count: 28805 | Published: Jun 30, 2006 | Updated: Nov 11, 2006
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Date: Jul 21, 2006 Title: Chapter 5: 04. Feeling

Maelyn, I can't believe I missed the last chapter when you posted. What fun your story is, and I really have to express my admiration for your feather light touch. Your Ginny and Draco are completely winsome and delightful. Not a jarring word in their dialogue!

Author's Response: Yeah, I like the fluff! I am having so much fun with this! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Phaedra7veils Signed
Date: Aug 11, 2006 Title: Chapter 6: 05. Trapped

I really wish I could drop my "bad habits" as fast as Draco drops his dates ;^D. Again, another fun and delightful chapter, full of UST. That's going to be one heck of a charity ball!

Author's Response: Yeah, now he\'s droppin\' \'em for a *different* reason..... hmmmm THanks for the review!

Not Quite Fate by Hearts Cadence    (Reviews - 933)

*COMPLETE* Destiny knew better than to bring these two together. One man, determined to draw back an errant Malfoy, is not so wise, and Ginny soon finds herself caught up in events that are not quite Fate.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Narcissa Malfoy, Other Characters, Pansy Parkinson, Ron Weasley, Severus Snape
Compliant with: None
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Action, Drama, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 37 | Word count: 222518 | Read count: 386625 | Published: Jul 13, 2006 | Updated: Aug 04, 2007
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Date: Jul 17, 2006 Title: Chapter 2: By Candlelight

Jonathan Pierce is a very interesting character. I like his sense of ridiculousness with regards to Voldemort. Nice touch. I'm fascinated to see what the candle brings Ginny.

Reviewer: Phaedra7veils Signed
Date: Jul 21, 2006 Title: Chapter 3: Slytherin Ethics

The little lesson that Draco taught Ginny was perfect, although it will be interesting to see how that backfires on him. The story of Pierce killing his mother was bloodchilling, and Snape's conversation with him was very interesting. Excellent story.

Reviewer: Phaedra7veils Signed
Date: Jul 31, 2006 Title: Chapter 5: The Idea

Something tells me Jonathan Pierce hasn't got the faintest idea that the hole he's digging for himself just sank way over his head. I see why you had difficulty with this chapter; it's hard to pull off this sort of manipulation in a convincing way, but you've managed very well.

The Morning After by Gingergirl    (Reviews - 8)

The morning after a one-night-stand Draco tries to recollect the events of last night's encounter with an unknown witch (Ginny).
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Smut
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 453 | Read count: 1218 | Published: Jul 16, 2006 | Updated: Jul 17, 2006
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Reviewer: Phaedra7veils Signed
Date: Jul 17, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: The Morning After

Mmm, lovely. Very sexy.

Author's Response: Thank you very much, kind of to review.

Under: The Life and Death of Fire and Ice by Pixie Stix    (Reviews - 4)

This poem is about Draco and Ginny (duh) though it doesn't directly say it. Its my first fanfic. Also its very dark and such with lots of symbolism.
Category: Poetry
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Angst, Drama, Romance
Warnings: Character Death
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 113 | Read count: 2218 | Published: Jul 21, 2006 | Updated: Jul 21, 2006
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Reviewer: Phaedra7veils Signed
Date: Jul 21, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Fire and Ice

This is quite a lovely poem. The ending is a bit morbid for me. I kept hoping that it was "Le Petit Mort" that Fire and Ice died of, but even so, there is a nice interplay of quenching and melting, crushing and dousing. Good job.

Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I kept changing it around before I posted it, so I am glad that it turned out well! I am glad that the quenching-melting, crushing-dousing worked out well. I am happy that you enjoyed it! Thanks again!

You've Got Mail by twiddlekinks    (Reviews - 21)

*Completed* Someone finds a "Good Wife For Life" site on the Internet, but Ginny gets to the package first. Who in the wizarding world wants a mail-order-bride, and what'll happen when this particular parcel is signed/sealed/delivered?
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 4 | Word count: 5046 | Read count: 27222 | Published: Jul 26, 2006 | Updated: Aug 06, 2006
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Date: Aug 08, 2006 Title: Chapter 4: Epilogue: I'm Yours!

I already wrote this on the ginnylovesdraco community site, but it's worth archiving here: I love this fun and funny story. You have a wonderfully light touch!

The Trouble with Princesses by Rainpuddle    (Reviews - 41)

Draco has managed to raise two sons (with a wee bit of help from his lovely wife, Ginny) without scarring them (too much) for life. But now he has a pair of teenage daughters...
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Drama, Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 2 | Word count: 4266 | Read count: 8866 | Published: Jul 27, 2006 | Updated: Jan 28, 2007
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Date: Jul 28, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: TTwP 01 - Dry Run

Bullwer-Lytton, the god of fanfiction! I wondered when he would show up. AND a Hufflepuff. I almost inhaled my coffee when out came the Big Pink Book of Doom. It sounded like Rauri was the sort to set up man-traps in the garden. I love little girls as scary creatures stories. Hilarious!

Author's Response: And Draco\'s daughters are the worse. Sly and cunning or out right scary. And he thinks they are sweet girls. HA! And Bulwer-Lytton, I just couldn\'t resist!

Vancouver by Embellished    (Reviews - 31)

When Ginny Weasley travels to Vancouver to do research for the Department of Mysteries, she learns much more than she ever expected about life, love, and Draco Malfoy.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Arthur Weasley, Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: HBP and below
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Drama, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 8124 | Read count: 3805 | Published: Jul 27, 2006 | Updated: Jul 27, 2006
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Reviewer: Phaedra7veils Signed
Date: Jul 28, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: For wcoast_girl

Ginny and Draco have moved to Gastown. How wonderful is that! I just love your unorthodox British Wizardry meets with West Coast First Nations, and the character of Joseph is great too. The thing that really made me laugh is, knowing the Museum of Anthro, they probably have a unofficial Dept. of Mystics somewhere for real, with bonafide medicine men/women. And they would probably agree wholeheartedly with the aspects of love, or at least that love is the major aspect.

The way that Draco and Ginny ease themselves into love is also quite wonderful. I love that first kiss. So, altogether this is quite the unusual, imaginative and terrific story.

Author's Response: I\'m happy you think the Vancouver setting works. I was a little worried about that! I also don\'t know a whole lot about the ideas behind First Nations art, but I figured that love is at the center of most religions/philosophies/world-views, so it probably wasn\'t too far off. I originally had the whole story on a much more compact time-line, but decided it was completely unrealistic and threw it out the window. You can\'t hurry love, after all. Anyway, I had better stop rambling before I start channelling more Motown groups. Thanks for the review!