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Registered: Feb 14, 2006
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Seven Days by xNymphadoraX    (Reviews - 52)

Over the course of seven days Ginny's relationship with Draco unexpectedly goes from platonic to something more...



*Post HBP
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Hermione Granger, Luna Lovegood, Other Characters, Ron Weasley
Compliant with: HBP and below
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Drama, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 6 | Word count: 18143 | Read count: 9480 | Published: Jan 15, 2006 | Updated: Aug 14, 2007
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Reviewer: Phaedra7veils Signed
Date: May 25, 2006 Title: Chapter 5: Perceptive Combustion

This Ginny doesn't think things through very clearly, does she? I wonder what she expected, confronting Draco with a question like that? Who wouldn't toss her out on her presumptuous, incriminating, indelicate buttocks! I like your plot twists, and look forward to reading more of your very amusing and interesting story.

The Hidden Doorway by kjcp    (Reviews - 201)

Ginny, Harry, and Draco have been leading separate lives for years, but then a disturbing case involving mind manipulation brings them all together. Rows break out, animosity and hatred grow, people die, and friendship is tested. In the midst of all that, is it possible for romance between two unlikely people to bloom?
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Angst, Drama, Mystery, Romance, Smut
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 12 | Word count: 72909 | Read count: 9552 | Published: Jan 27, 2006 | Updated: Feb 11, 2007
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Reviewer: Phaedra7veils Signed
Date: Mar 31, 2006 Title: Chapter 5: The Game Begins

Strong, edgy storytelling. I like that the touches Draco and Ginny exchange are more seductive and game-like, than tender and heartfelt. It strikes the right chord with this tale. Thanks for posting it.

Reviewer: Phaedra7veils Signed
Date: May 24, 2006 Title: Chapter 6: The Currant Rum

The seething UST. I hope she's not taking him to look at her collection of hand-knit jumpers. ;^} Very exciting story. I'm terrified that Ginny, single and pureblooded, will be marked as one of the rapist's victims. Your story has me that on the edge of my seat.

Reviewer: Phaedra7veils Signed
Date: Jul 21, 2006 Title: Chapter 7: The Real Story

Great sex writing. I enjoy the rough edges of your Draco, how he doesn't smooth away his bitterness to suit Ginny. The story of his arrest makes it even more fascinating. The last paragraph was delightful.

The Day the Darkness Won by fleeingmouse    (Reviews - 15)

Voldemort has taken over Hogwarts. Features Draco Malfoy, the Dark Lord's right-hand man, a very confused Ginny, and quite a few guest appearances by Blaise Zabini. "And as night follows day, so darkness does consume light". Rating might eventually have to be raised.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Action, Angst, Drama
Warnings: Graphic Violence
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 2 | Word count: 3231 | Read count: 4185 | Published: Feb 10, 2006 | Updated: Feb 16, 2006
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Reviewer: Phaedra7veils Signed
Date: Mar 21, 2006 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Very dark so far. I'm fascinated to read where you plan to take this.

His Girl Weasley by mimosa_magic    (Reviews - 70)

Draco Malfoy only wanted two things in life: Ginny Weasley and a good story. Now he's found a way to get them both - at the same time!
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 7 | Word count: 12837 | Read count: 17358 | Published: Feb 10, 2006 | Updated: May 30, 2006
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Reviewer: Phaedra7veils Signed
Date: Feb 14, 2006 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Draco meets his match. Congratulations for taking on a tricky crossover like this. You've got Billy Wilder down to a tee!

Reviewer: Phaedra7veils Signed
Date: Mar 06, 2006 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Thanks, I've just snorted coffee up my nose and sprayed it over my keyboard.

Reviewer: Phaedra7veils Signed
Date: May 28, 2006 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Oh, poor Ginny! Stuck between an Augusta and a Draco. So far neither one of them deserve her. That last line is very funny.

Stolen Notes by Serenitey    (Reviews - 155)

Five years ago Ginny Weasley disappeared from Harry Potter and the Wizarding World. What happens when she is found, a hidden passion and a forbidden relationship are revealed? [On hiatus]
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: HBP and below
Era: None
Genres: Drama, Romance
Warnings: Character Death
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 11 | Word count: 55304 | Read count: 20370 | Published: Feb 12, 2006 | Updated: Sep 07, 2007
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Reviewer: Phaedra7veils Signed
Date: Jun 30, 2006 Title: Chapter 5: Blood Magicks

Amazing chapter. The stonehenge scene was riveting. I like the way Bill deals with Draco there. Look forward to reading more.

Author's Response: thank you very much! there should be some more up soon. :D

All I Want For Christmas by Embellished    (Reviews - 23)

What do you give a man who has everything?
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: HBP and below
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Drama, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 3105 | Read count: 6014 | Published: Feb 17, 2006 | Updated: Feb 17, 2006
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Reviewer: Phaedra7veils Signed
Date: Feb 17, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: For Mynuet

Enjoyed this. The jump from their sweet, fun relationship to Death Eater hell-world was a bit of a shock (as it usually is) but it didn't last too long, thank goodness, and the ending was charming enough to bring the heartbeat back to normal. Great parting shot!

Redeeming Grace by squaredancer    (Reviews - 36)

I dreaded the next time she’d find me in a deserted corridor, and in a strange way I also looked forward to it. I hated the constant bogged-down feeling of being stalked, and yet there was a tiny fluttering of pride presiding somewhere within my stomach walls. The idea that Weasley’s little dolt of a sister was so enamored by me that she needed to see me nigh on every day would bring a smirk to my face in the strangest of instances.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Humor, Romance, Smut
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 3988 | Read count: 1028 | Published: Feb 19, 2006 | Updated: Feb 19, 2006
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Reviewer: Phaedra7veils Signed
Date: Feb 20, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Part One

Terrific! True-blue Malfoy.

Surrender by Ephemere    (Reviews - 16)

When do you know to stop fighting?
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Action
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 1478 | Read count: 3376 | Published: Mar 04, 2006 | Updated: Mar 04, 2006
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Reviewer: Phaedra7veils Signed
Date: Mar 06, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: The End of the Fight

Great story, but that ring! Anything with the words "ancestors" and "Malfoy" attached is enough to give me the heebie-jeebies, but she did make it sound like he was asking her to wear a chastity belt. Fun!

The Unexpected Path Of Love by rae_grace    (Reviews - 35)

Ginny Weasley and Draco Malfoy have their share of action in the disputes between their two families. After a rainy afternoon Ginny is amazed at what she discovers about Draco. Over the next few weeks Ginny finds herself continuing to think about that one night, the man, who's eyes she can read so well and the closeness developing between them. COMPLETE!
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Other Characters, Ron Weasley
Compliant with: None
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 4 | Word count: 17165 | Read count: 13690 | Published: Mar 23, 2006 | Updated: Mar 25, 2006
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Reviewer: Phaedra7veils Signed
Date: Mar 24, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: A Quick Discovery

Interesting balcony scene, Rae_Grace, and I LOVE the necklace. Ginny's reactions to Malfoy's mark, however, leave me skeptical. It's too sudden a shift from contempt to tenderness, since you haven't implied or hinted at a subversive chemistry at work in their arguments. I need to know more about why she swung 180 degrees on herself like that. Otherwise, good start.

Author's Response: I\'m glad you liked the balcony scene! It was the first big piece of the plot I wrote (obviously) an it has a very special place in my heart! I can understand why you don\'t think Ginny\'s turn around is very realistic, but I hope that when you read more of the story that I\'ve backed it up a bit more. You\'re right though that\'s probably one of the weaker parts of the story...I\'ll try harder next time!

Reviewer: Phaedra7veils Signed
Date: Mar 24, 2006 Title: Chapter 2: Quarrels and Quidditch

Malfoy's caught the real prize! Mmm, wonderful tenderness in that quidditch rescue.

Author's Response: Ginny\'s most deffinetely a great prize! I had a great time writing that part of the story. It was a challenge for me to write the action and make it so you could understand what was happening! I found it really easy to write the wonderful scene between Draco and Ginny after she\'s fallen. It\'s such a sharp contrast to their behaviour before the game!

Resolutions by wishiwereaweasley    (Reviews - 9)

After Draco and Ginny have a run-in on the train, both are left confused. Ginny goes up to the Astronomy Tower in an attempt to sort out her feelings and resolve to forget the incident. What happens when Draco is doing the same thing?
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 2605 | Read count: 2882 | Published: Mar 24, 2006 | Updated: Mar 25, 2006
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Reviewer: Phaedra7veils Signed
Date: Mar 25, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: One-Shot

Delightful.

Author's Response: Great! Thank you!

Rediscovering Emotions by wishiwereaweasley    (Reviews - 10)

Draco Malfoy has been brought, against his will, to Grimmauld Place. He's angry and confused, and thinking only of returning to Voldemort, in hopes of redeeming himself. Ginny Weasley arrives a week later, furious at being pulled from the Burrow at a difficult time in her life. What happens when the Prince of Slytherin and Gryffindor's Princess collide?
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 3 | Word count: 8685 | Read count: 9843 | Published: Mar 25, 2006 | Updated: Apr 17, 2006
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Date: Apr 04, 2006 Title: Chapter 2: Missing You

Sweet. He missed her. She missed him.

Bed Of Lies by Slythhearted    (Reviews - 63)

A harmless romp where by Draco tries to make up for past mistakes, Ginny is unsympathetic, Luna is Luna, and Blaise tries to steal the show.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 5 | Word count: 9361 | Read count: 3189 | Published: Mar 26, 2006 | Updated: Apr 07, 2006
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Date: Mar 26, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

5 Chapters, fantastic! I'm looking forward to reading them. Good start, so far.

Reviewer: Phaedra7veils Signed
Date: Mar 27, 2006 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

"Draco's current marital status is of no more importance to me now...That chapter in my life is closed...." Ooh, famous last words. Let the games begin!

Reviewer: Phaedra7veils Signed
Date: Mar 28, 2006 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Oh, they're just being so darned civilized. The Business Market, indeed!(Might want to tidy up that last sentence of Draco's, unless it was intended that he should stumble over those words.) Good fun so far, but after these little sparks, I'm looking forward to a serious conflagration and heat.

The Blower's Daughter by Alexandria Malfoy    (Reviews - 11)

All of his life he watched her. All of her life she watched him.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: None
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Drama, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 1450 | Read count: 2936 | Published: Mar 26, 2006 | Updated: Mar 26, 2006
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Reviewer: Phaedra7veils Signed
Date: Mar 26, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: The Blower's Daughter

Beautiful story about simultaneous curiosity and yearning. One tiny nit, this sentence confused me:
"...he wasn't considered a hero, if only by a select few." Is he a hero or not? Or are you saying the select few who don't consider him a hero happen to be people she's close to? Otherwise a lovely story.

Author's Response: Thank you. Ah, yes. I shall answer your questions: What I mean by that statement is that he seen as a hero by people like Slytherins. Basically his own housemates or people like him. Your second question pretty much answers it. Thanks again!

Drug Of Choice by PerhapsMissMoon    (Reviews - 128)

The Second war is over, all ended as it should. Harry Potter defeated the Dark Lord and the world rejoiced. Seven years later Draco Malfoy finds that he must deal with death, love and life all at the same time. Meanwhile Ginny Weasley has made a name for herself in the Wizarding medical career. What happens when two worlds collide with the help of a magazine and a rather determined friend? Can old enemies form bonds of friendship? Can friendship ever become more? Just exactly how well did Ginny’s brothers teach her to fight? And what say does Draco's drug of choice have in all this?
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 15 | Word count: 48970 | Read count: 5806 | Published: Mar 27, 2006 | Updated: Jan 27, 2007
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Date: Apr 04, 2006 Title: Chapter 5: The Date

"...He truly did enjoy his date with Ginny Weasley" not that anyone doubted he would. Draco's in quite the slump, isn't he? Everyone around him, except Sandy, is sparkling more than he is. I hope Ginny shakes him up.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Ginny will most certainly give Draco a wake up call…with a little help. ;)

Reviewer: Phaedra7veils Signed
Date: May 25, 2006 Title: Chapter 10: Dinner With Narcissa

What a wonderful revelation of character in the last two phrases! I'm glad to see that Ginny's finally putting a few little hairline cracks that hard, hard shell of Draco's. Well done.

Author's Response: Thank you! I’m happy you like the end, I was considering changing it but I think it works out for the best in the end. Draco definitely does have a hard shell. Lets see how much farther Ginny can get!

Reviewer: Phaedra7veils Signed
Date: May 31, 2006 Title: Chapter 11: Past, Present, and Future

Well, this is an interesting twist. Ginny is certainly a healthier addiction than Fire-Whiskey.

Author's Response: Oh, I do agree! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Phaedra7veils Signed
Date: Jun 07, 2006 Title: Chapter 12: A Chat With Blaise

Ooh, I like your Blaise very much. Ginny should definitely kiss Draco. Scary about the mood swings, though. In fact, potentially terrifying given that Ginny's not likely to be as strong or physically capable of defending herself as Blaise. Spell damage or drugs? Neither sound helpful. What a great story. I'm completely hooked.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Kisses are coming! Draco’s mood swings are going to come into play sometime soon as well. I do love how you think ahead :D Chapter 13 will be up soon!

Secrets Revealed by cornishpixie    (Reviews - 37)

AU. The war is over and people have moved on. Draco and Ginny are married with children and everything seems perfect until old family secrets start to surface. What secret does Draco hold about the final battle? What does that secret mean to his daughter and her possible love?
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Angst, Drama, Humor, Mystery, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 7 | Word count: 17325 | Read count: 1866 | Published: Mar 29, 2006 | Updated: Jan 29, 2007
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Reviewer: Phaedra7veils Signed
Date: Mar 31, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Lock her in a closet, ha! Good first story, cornishpixie.

Author's Response: Thanks! I got that line from some of things I\'ve heard my dad say about me.