I haven't reviewed in so long! Blame exams. u_u Blergh.

This story was beautiful. I loved your take on Charlie- he was always my favorite of the male Weasley's.

Draco's desperation came through so nicely here, so well done. I really sympathized with him, and he wasn't even the narrator.

I also loved Ginny's confusion at the beginning. Her curiosity and suppositions were really nice to read. :)

-Jayde.

Author's Response: Than you :) And I hear you about exams yuck. I had fun writing something from Ginny's POV for a change.

Your first D/G? It's really good!
Is it sad that your description of Draco reminds me of a drugged up starving artist. I like it. ;P
You convey Draco's confusion really well and I love how you included the Mirror of Erised so cleverly. :)

-Jayde

Author's Response: I'll never understand why the challenge that was used for this story screamed DRACO GINNY at me so loudly - but it did - and an addiction was born :) Thank you for this, as well as all your other reviews, it makes me sad that this is the last review I had waiting for me :-P I always love seeing more in the "unanswered section" Thanks again!!

Indescribable. A little part of me hopes that there are other pieces like this buried somewhere in your list of stories. Well, I'll find out, won't I?
Fantastic work.

-Jayde.

Author's Response: So far - this is my only smutty goodness story, but I do have others that are on the fluffy side of life! I hope you enjoy those as well!

That was amazing. Your imagery is perfect. I could see the scene in front of me as I read.
You mentioned that people say you need to eat more chocolate and hug some puppies? Well, maybe you should hold off on that for a bit, because the sad stories- especially yours, it seems, are my absolute favorite to read. ;P

Author's Response: Thank you! I haven't finished anything in a long while - But i'm working on something sad and horrible now :)

That was so sad, but beautiful at the same time. The ending was fantastic, Ginny emptying the gun's shells; really meaningful.
I love their obliviousness of what the gun is, though it is the general knowledge of most of the Wizarding World. A wand that only performs one spell.
Well done, again. You'll be sick of my reviews soon. ;)

-Jayde

Author's Response: Thank you very much :) I had a great prompt o work with for this one - and I must say - I never grow tired of reviews from anyone ;)

This story is really well written so far.  I really want to know what happens next, I can't stop reading (though I probably should).  The result of this being your second review from me in a day.  Good job! :)

Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it enough to not stop reading ;) Hopefully you continue to like the rest! Let me know ;)

Awe, that was so cute. I love how you portrayed Harry as more than someone trying to get in the way of Ginny and Draco's relationship, and the ending was fantastic.

-Jayde

Author's Response: Thank you :) I think it's fun to play around with how Harry would have acted.

This story was fantastic. You made all the characters come to life and your descriptions are amazing.

I loved Lucius. He was so delightfully bone-chilling.
Again, well done.
-Jayde

I really like your introduction.  It sets the mood for the chapter really nicely. ^_^
 
‘"Finite Incantatem," she murmured, watching the green light disappear and leave her in darkness once more.’—Did you mean ‘leaving her in darkness once more?  That word sounded a little funny to me.
 
Your imagery involving the green light is astounding.  And I especially adore this sentence: ‘Instead, that green light turned her shaking, white hands into alien limbs: pale bones dipped in viridian.’
 
I love how many different characters you’ve included so far; Seamus and Adrian aren’t usually characters that would be included, but I’m glad that you have.
 
The password is very original, ahahah.
 
I love your description of the war-torn Golden Trio.  Not something that you usually see, and it’s very nice to see a story where they aren’t quite so invincible.
 
Fred was very interesting.  I like that you didn’t just tell us outright that he was blind.  It’s a little sad that they’re stuck working for the Death Eaters, but still very inventive on your part.
 
Great start and I can’t wait to read more.
-Jayde. ^_~

Author's Response: You know, I stared at your username going, WOW THAT NAME IS FAMILIAR until I remembered who it was? Haha. And apologies in advance: FIA doesn't allow review-replies to have any sort of paragraph breaks in them, so this will be a huge chunk of response. That particular confusing line does not sound confusing to me, so you'll just have to be stuck with it because I'm definitely not going to go back and try to change it on FIA because that is next to impossible. Viridian is also my favorite color name. Well, not THE favorite: vermilion and carmine are close seconds and thirds. There is going to be a wide array of characters included, so I really hope I don't overload the story by including so many. Hopefully I'll just be able to focus on a few a chapter and that way keep it manageable. I've always sort of not-liked the Golden Trio, but in this story I've got a bit of pity and grudging respect for them. I'm not entirely sure where I'm going to take Fred and George, mainly because I haven't thought about them too much, but they'll probably/most-likely make it back in and be important. I hope you liked the second chapter (which you did, because you already reviewed it)! *hugs!*