When Ginny Weasley becomes Draco Malfoy's wife, he suspects neither her true identity nor her dangerous motives. But when all Hell breaks lose and their relationship takes unexpected turns, there is more at stake than preserving their marriage--namely, preserving their lives.Category: Long and Completed
Oh my god, he's going to reveal the truth?? And all I can think is...she's going to have lovely red hair!!! Okay shut up.
I think you describe Draco perfectly, hurt those who you care for the most. I don't like it but it's apt. I can understand that. URGH.
and please please oh please dont make us wait another month! *pokes out my eyeballs*
Oh my god. She is so freaking dead. *runs around flapping my arms wildly* Oh please dont let him find her, or HERMIONE! Oh no, Hermione's in trouble! Or she's gonna be.
That part where she cries out for her brothers, was she acting or was she really dreaming? It was very sad nonetheless. And stupid Draco, all he can think about is getting some.
And as always, UPDATE SOON!
Cheerio!
Author's Response: :::please don\'t hurt yourself flapping your arms and running::: I\'m afraid you\'re absolutely right in thinking that both Ginny and Hermione are in trouble. Yep... But that\'s in the next chapter :D Thanks a lot for all the reviews you\'ve left ever since the beginning!
"Smoothly and swiftly, like a shadow following the body that casts it"
Liked that line alot, dunno why. And omgosh what a development! I smell a change in the wind! -sniff sniff- I don't know what I feel about this chapter but major step occurred here and it's like coming full circle, story wise and different versions of what happened and how I wish that Pensieves were real so that people could finally stop fighting and learn to start forgiving. Theres nothing but pain in war. NOTHING's fair, in love and war.
-claps- Brill. Cheerio!
Little wolf! I really liked that! Though the name Faolan seems very familiar. It sounds like a crook! Hahaha! But on the blue-haired boy, it's just so adorable.
I was hoping Ginny would name her sons after her brothers or something. I really like Charlie's name but it's not Malfoyish enough I guess. William, Billius, PERCIVAL. Hahaha! Julius is nice...but Titus is so EURGH. It's cruel to name a child that!
Anyways, I cant wait to see what you're gonna choose for their names! And Draco is so manipulative but that goes without saying.
Cheerio!
I'm sensing that your fic is drawing to a close. And I realized that I haven't dropped a review in a while, so I will. I hope you still have some way to go before the end cos this fic is one of the main reasons I come to check the site so often. It's brilliant, will go into the classics I feel.
However, I do not think there's anything left to be said, once everything's done and settle and Ginny & Draco are good again. Maybe a crazy attempt by Bellatrix on Ginny's life. I would like to see Ginny meet Harry Arthur again but I don't know how that's possible.
Cant wait for the next one. Cheerio!
OMG!!!! AN UPDATE AN UPDATE!!! HAHAHAH WONDERFUL!!! -CLAPS JOYFULLY-
Oh how far they've come, especially with the banter and flirtation thing. Oh I LOVE the flirtation things! It makes my insides all aflutter! But you have pointed out some very good points that all is not well and dandy and they still have a lot to get through.
I liked the part where Draco wishes Ginny would forgive him. It's just so real and so THERE. So wow. Okay cheerio and omg please update soon so I dont hyperventilate when I see a new chapter!!!
Peaceout.
Author's Response: Oh no, I\'m sorry I left you hanging... I\'m happy you liked the chapter, and I\'ll really try not to take THAT long to update again. Thanks for your enthusiasm!
I can't believe it's over. I havent gone to this site very much but was always delighted to receive emails that this story has been updated, so I thank you for continuing and finishing up this story, even though it took some time. I was kind of surprised to see suddenly see an Epilogue (yeah I didnt see it coming) but at the same time, glad.
Anyways, this particular part stood out for me,
"Valerian, I saw you putting a stone in that one!" Ginny bellowed suddenly. "Take it out immediately or you'll have to answer to me!"
It just struck me how very Molly-like Ginny turned out to be and it was a rather touching moment for me. I'm wondering, did you put that in for that purpose?
Anyhow, hope you continue writing. Till the next story! =)
Ps: Saw the family tree and can I just say, "WOW." Love your dedication! :D
They don't hold hands when they walk anymore and it troubles her to no end. But she is not the only one greatly troubled and when the silence is finally broken, a few tears will be shed.Category: Completed Short Stories
Maybe like my 5th time reading this fic? One of my absolute favourites, first read it on FF and I'm reading it again here and oh man, I just love love love how you made Draco here. Brilliant. Sigh. Cheers!
Narcissa Malfoy wants Draco married off-- and quickly! So, she chooses to send him to a date coach of sorts. What Narcissa wants, Narcissa gets! *Fun, fluff!*Category: Long and Completed
Hahahah god Draco is so mean! AND OH SO HOT!!!!!
Author's Response: Isn\'t he though? I wonder if Ginny notices? ;)
*COMPLETE* Destiny knew better than to bring these two together. One man, determined to draw back an errant Malfoy, is not so wise, and Ginny soon finds herself caught up in events that are not quite Fate.Category: Long and Completed
There was a bunny?
Anyways, it's lovely lovely lovely to see such a long chapter. Yay for you! And it's a ritual for me to scream and shriek and squeal at the start of every new chapter. Even at 2am.
It's really rolling now, Draco noticing all these little things about her. GAH! Oh man this is gonna be great, I love you and your fics, update soon!
cheers!
So the next chapter will be super long, hopefully, maybe, most likely yes? Heehee! You know the "accusations" that Draco hurled at Pierce would have seemed ridiculous had they NOT been in Slytherin. Can you imagine accusing your teacher of drugging you so that your house can win a football match? Crazy!
Though I'm sorry that Draco can't see that Pierce has an ulterior motive. It's hard to see, yes, because his plan is so "brilliant" & anyhow, it's the road to true love for D&G so I don't really mind. That much.
Okay I'll be waiting..............
cheers!
First off, I don't know WHY you're apprehensive! Great awesome pure DG interaction! So what's Draco trying to do now?! All friendly and teasing and oh I'm scared for him!
This has GOT to be one of my fav chapters so far. It's all about them you know? And I love how Draco got them into the Restricted Section. Pure Slytherin.
Cheerios!
OOOOOOOHHH EXCITING!!!! Why didn't Draco just guard her, or bring her to McGonagall's for protection? Shove her back into Gryffindor tower? Hide her under his robes? WHY?! Small tiny dark places. Scary.
And that line about her trusting him, man it hit me too! *tearing* OMG I cannot believe I'm going to have to wait like weeks and weeks for the next chapter. NOOOO!!!
I don't know why but I always prefer to read your fic here instead of at FF, even though I have you on alert there. It looks a whole lot better here. To me. -shrugs-
I am SO SO glad that Draco sees, somewhat, what Pierce is doing. Was it that last line from the ceremony that gave him away? Darnit, I really wish that Draco would just NOT RUN TO HIM ANYMORE! He's no good! No good!
Great job, love the 20. Worth the wait.
cheers!
Thank you insomnia. Heehee. I LOVE all these little feelings that Draco get at all the inappropriate times! And a teeny weeny glimpse of a jealous Draco, OW. Hot! LOL. Nice long chapter with lotsa DG. My kind of thing.
cheers!
That last line caused me to break into this huge grin ever so slowly. It's so sadistic, I LOVE IT! Oh cheers!!! And Ginny's too Gryffindor here, all concience and what not. Don't leave Draco!!!
But I like that whole part about change. You really put alot of thought into your chapters, kudos to you. Now I need to go and ponder over this.
Cheerio!
I loved Naomi, she reminded me of Ginny somehow. I was hoping for more DG after last chapter's exciting end! But I'm glad you did on Pierce. Made him a bit likeable. To me atleast. I think that maybe he was much more like Draco back when he was younger than we would suspect, huh?
Good job with this one, thank god for that bit of DG at least. And I wonder if Pansy really had anything important to say? Might not be wise to dismiss her so easily next time.
Cheerio!
I don't know why I have an alert at FF but always read your stories here. Anyways, LOVED this chapter. Totally DG, my favourite!! And sigh, what I wouldn't give to receive a necklace from Draco. And have him put it on! GAH! I LOVED Draco's POV. *smiles fondly at him*
And that bit with Nott? Ah, I didn't see that one coming. Is he for real? Or is he just playing the game? Interesting turn. And I bet Pansy has some interesting news too.
Cheerio!
Yes I finally did it! Went and added you on my favourites list. I want an update always!!! Anyways, I have this image of Naomi Watts in my head everytime I read about your Naomi and I can't get it out. GARGH.
More about Nott! Does he like Ginny? Or is he just bored and being all Slytherin by knowing the scoop on everyone, especially our lovely Mr. Malfoy? Is HE WORKING FOR LUCIUS? Hahaha okay I'm just on overload. Thanks for the update, a pleasant PLEASANT surprise dont doubt that.
Cheers!
Let me take a moment to WARGH!!! I added this story on my favourites but for some reason, it's not showing up there and because of that, I almost missed your latest update cos alot of ppl were updating their fics at the same time and it was only cos I was bored that I happen to check your fic again and there was suddenly a new chapter and I am so irritated that I almost missed it!!! Again, WAAARGGGHH.
I'm sorry.
Now my real review. So, we find out what's Nott's deal yes? The friendly interest was just that, friendly. I can't help thinking that Nott works for the Order. There MUST be some benefit! Urgh! And that stupid Pansy idea, should totally disregard that stupid cow. BLEARGH.
And I don't know but I don't trust Naomi. Maybe I feel like you're trying to psycho us and I'm doing a reverse psychology thing and whoa, I put way too much thought into your fic than what is deemed the healthy level.
Hahaha gosh Im sorry I will stop rattling on now.
Cheers!
Oh god, I feel like I held my breath from the moment Draco found the mask all the way until the end! Phew! I kept imagining Draco turning arnd and PIERCE being there! Scary shi*. Anyways, I didn't really like this chapter as the others but it was necessary I suppose.
*inhale, exhale*
Cheerio!
Ooohh I don't know what to make of this chapter. Though it seems like Naomi's character is important to the plot, maybe it's outcome even? Unless you kill her off or something. But I like her! And I like the idea of a treehouse. -sighs- Well, will just wait for the next chapter. You're getting awfully good at updating regularly, it's brilliant! -beams at you happily- Thanks.
Cheerio!
GRIN GRIN GRIN BEAMING LIKE A BEACON GRIN GRIN GREEN WITH ENVY.
That was excellent. Almost totally wiped out what I read in the first part of the chapter, about Naomi. YAY!!! I hope you give us a Draco POV next. I am DYING to know what went or is going on in his mind right now, or during that kiss GAH! Jumble Mumble!
Oh right, I was going to say that everybody's a Slytherin because Slytherin wiles is human nature. We're all born with it. And poor poor Naomi. I want to stomp on Snape for being, well, SNAPE!!! -stomp stomp- Crazy sense of desperation there, when he didnt believe her and whisked her away. God, I wanted to tear his greasy hair out! URGH!!! SAVE BEN! And omg I like the name Ben. Like as in Ben the rat, that Michael Jackson song no?
Hahah okok I should stop now. Cheerio!!
Im worried that the book belongs to Pierce or something but a housewife diary?? If only you included some excerpt from that diary, then maybe we'll see if Draco's random guess is correct. Anyways, my brain's not really working now so cheerio! Lucky me really, I was just thinking abt this fic like an hour ago and when I logged in, here it was all updated! HEHEHE. Peace.
Cant stop grinning. Oh man, I can't believe Ginny can listen to Draco go on and on like that and NOT kiss him!!! ARGH!!! I'm so ELATED! GO DRACO! Though I am more interested in Nott now more than ever. Please explain him. I like to think that he likes Ginny cos his excuse for looking out for her seems flimsy but maybe, that's just wishful thinking huh? Oh well. Thanks for the update!
Cheerio!