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Real name: Carrie
Registered: Aug 10, 2006
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I am an actress, playwright and married mother of two who is a little (a lot) obsessed with D/G fan fiction. I am currently at work on my first novel. Fan Fiction helps the creative juices flow, y'know? I record D/G stories for your listening pleasure and mine, and am in charge of the Podcasts at FIA.
Reviews by Persephone33

The Sneaky Slytherin and the Redhead's Revenge by Yazethet    (Reviews - 371)

*COMPLETE* Blackmail, intrigue, lust and yes, snogging. He thought he detested her, she knows she loathes him. Can Draco win Ginny over before she tries to completely humiliate him in front of the entire school?
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Blaise Zabini (boy), Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Other Characters, Ron Weasley
Compliant with: None
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: Slash
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 29 | Word count: 82766 | Read count: 192484 | Published: May 10, 2004 | Updated: Apr 17, 2007
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Reviewer: Persephone33 Signed
Date: Apr 18, 2007 Title: Chapter 29: The Redhead's Revenge

That was a fantastic ending! Ginny's speech in the Great Hall was classic, and Millicent's michevious smile was laugh out loud funny. Thanks. I enjoyed it all immensely.

Tangled Web by Rainpuddle    (Reviews - 109)

It all started with an insult and a stolen kiss, then it became so much more.


Draco and Ginny at Hogwarts. The prequel to And Baby Makes Three.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Angst, Drama, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 6 | Word count: 26795 | Read count: 18366 | Published: May 13, 2004 | Updated: Jan 04, 2007
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Reviewer: Persephone33 Signed
Date: Jan 05, 2007 Title: Chapter 6: Hogmanay

First of all, I cannot believe I've never reviewed on the website properly like a normal fangirl. Second, SQUEE! Yay for the new chapter! Oh, it was good, and let me tell you why(I think so:)). I love the sequence with Ginny getting ready and the allusion to Cinderella. I love that the gown was from him. I even like (knowing what I know) Draco's and Pansy's comfortable relationship (the pat on the bum!), and try as I might, I just can't hate her. She understands that he's obsessed and in love, and seems to even condone it a bit (with the obvious exception of the snake hair). I even *swallows hard* like her. How sick is that? I liked that Draco was sorry before it even happened, and now that you've opened up a whole new 'can of worms' (har dee har) I cannot wait to see how Seamus gets untransformed and how Ginny's hair gets back to its own lovely texture.
I'm sure the squee-ing will continue far into the night...

Author's Response: Pansy is three steps ahead of everyone. She on wants to make it through the coming troubles alive, and she\'s going to drag Draco along, because for what it is worth, she does love him dearly. I\'m just glad you liked it :)

Captivity by Nokomis    (Reviews - 17)

For four months, Draco had been held captive. Now all he wanted was a glimpse out the window.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Horror
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 2931 | Read count: 2240 | Published: Jun 22, 2004 | Updated: Jun 22, 2004
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Reviewer: Persephone33 Signed
Date: Nov 30, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Captivity

Wow. That's perhaps the darkest Ginny ever. Or maybe not dark, just obsessed and need of some sort of mood-altering meds.
I've never read anything quite like this! Original! Thanks!

The Pleasure of Your Company by Kirixchi    (Reviews - 151)

A Weasley at the Daughters of Hecate Debutante Ball? That's almost as unthinkable as a Weasley and a Malfoy in love!
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 23 | Word count: 53632 | Read count: 92596 | Published: Aug 14, 2004 | Updated: Aug 14, 2004
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Date: Apr 19, 2007 Title: Chapter 23: Mrs. Draco Malfoy

I must say that my heart dropped when I read that he was engaged, I laughed out loud at "little miss Frenchie pants", and I LOVED the revenge a la Fred and George. I delightful read from beginning to end. Thanks!

Reviewer: Persephone33 Signed
Date: Apr 19, 2007 Title: Chapter 11: The Ring

I don't know why I've never read this before! This chapter was just heartbreaking... Draco in love is about the best thing ever. I'll review more later, and tell you all about how brilliant you are and how many times I've said, "Oh!" But for now, I have to finish your story!

"Please love me back."

Oh!

Owned by Mynuet    (Reviews - 216)

Draco owns the Furies, a quidditch team which just happens to have a certain Ginny Weasley on the roster. After some flying in the rain, their relationship turns physical and may eventually develop a smidgen of plot.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: None
Era: Future AU
Genres: Smut
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 9 | Word count: 23030 | Read count: 77127 | Published: Sep 10, 2004 | Updated: Jul 21, 2007
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Date: Jul 24, 2007 Title: Chapter 9: Enquiry

I'm telling you, 'comedy sex'should be a new genre. :)

Ah, Draco... brilliantly winning a court case and later acheiving goals that make lesser men horribly jealous. Thanks for the update.

Downfall by Mourning Broken Angel    (Reviews - 169)

An explosion in the Potions classroom leaves behind a raving Potions Master, a bloody Draco, and a certain redhead we all love having a moment of altruistic weakness. Ginny's kindness makes Draco very suspicious, leading him to destroy her goodwill. In retribution, Ginny decides to put some embarrassing information about Draco to good use. Ahh, nothing like one-upmanship to kindle a little romance.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: Blaise Zabini (boy), Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Luna Lovegood, Other Characters, Pansy Parkinson
Compliant with: OotP and below
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 16 | Word count: 58099 | Read count: 32318 | Published: Dec 11, 2004 | Updated: Feb 14, 2009
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Reviewer: Persephone33 Signed
Date: Aug 25, 2006 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Thanks for the lovely new chapter! It was almost warm and fuzzy, for Draco and Ginny.

Cheers!

Author's Response: I know, the peace was a nice change! I was so relieved to get past the arguing (at least for now) between those two.

The Lush Life by Vesanmyn    (Reviews - 657)

A Vesica/Mynuet Collaboration. If Ginny had even the slightest inkling of what the day would bring, she probably would have called in sick. A disastrous press conference proved to be no match for the spin doctoring talents of Lush's chief and Ginny finds herself catapulted from being a lowly intern to the very eye of the storm, living a double life as a careerwitch and glamorous front woman for a racy new line. Throw in a few A-list events, a few dozen crises, an endless promotional tour with her new co-worker and the last person she wanted to spend time with, and a mystery waiting back home that neither of them may be able to solve….Every day's an adventure when you're living the Lush Life!
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Drama, Mystery, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 13 | Word count: 27031 | Read count: 80510 | Published: Jan 05, 2005 | Updated: Apr 28, 2007
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Reviewer: Persephone33 Signed
Date: Sep 19, 2006 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter Ten – The Hottest Old Woman in England

I love chapter updates! I was just thinking about this story today, actually. Draco almost seemed jealous... and what was with the "almost smile"? Intriguing...

Thanks for the chapter. Made my Tuesday.

Author's Response: Ves says: I don’t know. What was with that little almost, kinda sorta smile from Mr. Ice King? Myn?
Myn says: *clamps hands over mouth to avoid revealing anything*

Reviewer: Persephone33 Signed
Date: Oct 17, 2006 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter Eleven – Monday Morning Surprises

I don't know what I love most:
1. The doorway between the offices... **nudge, wink**
2. The fact that Draco was embarrassed about Carissa (ditch her NOW) or...
3. Narcissa practically pinching Draco's cherubic four-year old cheeks

What unfortuante incident happened in the break room? Did I miss it? Or is all to be revealed?

He's acting "different"... *grins*

Great chapter!


Author's Response: Ves says: In my world, Narcissa delights in occasionally making Draco turn bright red and want the earth to swallow him. Tee hee!
Myn says: A lot will be revealed, but we're not entirely sure what or when. I guess we'll find out when we write it, and you'll find out when we post it.

An End to Treachery by Thalia    (Reviews - 28)

"Can't you see? We're the only constants in each other's lives any more. We don't have anything else to hold onto." When Ginny and Draco both betray their causes, and the war threatens to doom them both... one-shot.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Romance, Angst, Drama
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 808 | Read count: 3631 | Published: Jan 18, 2005 | Updated: Jan 18, 2005
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Reviewer: Persephone33 Signed
Date: Nov 30, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: [none]

Oooh. I love 'Draco as the double agent saving Ginny fics.' This one was very nice.

I enjoy your work.

Familiar Things by JSaintG7    (Reviews - 54)

"Because she wasn't overly anything to anyone, she came to mean something to me."
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 3856 | Read count: 6242 | Published: Jan 18, 2005 | Updated: Jan 18, 2005
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Reviewer: Persephone33 Signed
Date: Nov 17, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Familar Things

Thank you so much for this lovely story. I like that it's written in first person, and in the present... so different. So sweet.

Feast of Fools by Mynuet    (Reviews - 102)

Five Death Eaters in training meet utter defeat at the hands of a Weasley girl who knows the way to a man's heart is through his stomach.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: Blaise Zabini (boy), Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Other Characters
Compliant with: None
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 2 | Word count: 13551 | Read count: 22599 | Published: Jan 30, 2005 | Updated: Feb 07, 2007
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Reviewer: Persephone33 Signed
Date: Feb 08, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: The Reckoning

That is the worst hex EVER!  *shudders*  I loved it, and nice sequel to the first, which was adored.

Primrose Path by Adelagia    (Reviews - 197)

Ginny, Draco, Quidditch, and entirely too close quarters. Being forced to train, play, and live with Draco for a season gives Ginny a whole new understanding of and appreciation for the amazing bouncing ferret. Ginny's POV.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Drama, Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 6 | Word count: 18937 | Read count: 41237 | Published: Apr 19, 2005 | Updated: May 23, 2007
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Reviewer: Persephone33 Signed
Date: Jun 12, 2007 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter Six

I absolutely cannot believe that I've never read this before. It's nine kinds of wonderful. I laughed out loud several times, but my favorite line was, "I pictured Malfoy on the pitch, standing before a dozen corpses, while Andrew patted him on the back, saying, "Oh, that's a shame. Well, don't let it happen again, my boy," and then buying him an ice cream afterwards. Brilliant. Brilliant!
I totally agree with Ginny that right bastards have no business looking like sex on a stick, and I completely adored the alarm clock. The picture of them playing with McVities was funny, too. My kids won't even touch them, no wonder they had an abundance in the house.

But I digress. This was wonderfully written, terribly witty, the dialogue was sharp and true to the charaters, and I loved it to itty bitty pieces. Would you consent to having it read on a podcast someday? *bats eyelashes*

Thanks!

Author's Response: Gasp! My story in a podcast? That would be the most fantastic thing ever! Thanks! And it seems I\'m in the minority, but I\'ve enjoyed the occasional digestive, and not even the chocolate kind.

Quidditch by fallenwitch    (Reviews - 160)

Draco Malfoy inadvertently comes to Ginny Weasley's assistance during a game of Quidditch. The reverberations from his actions will rock his world for some time to come. Snarky Humor and Romance.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Pansy Parkinson, Ron Weasley
Compliant with: None
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 9 | Word count: 16487 | Read count: 49296 | Published: May 03, 2005 | Updated: Jun 07, 2005
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Reviewer: Persephone33 Signed
Date: Feb 14, 2007 Title: Chapter 9: Never, Ever, Do Anything Like That Again

Oh, so romantic! He actually walked into Gryffindor! And they Slytherins aren't brave...A perfect valentine's day gift! Lovely!

Author's Response: Hi Persephone33! Yes, he did. *snickers* Glad you enjoyed this one and Happy Valentine's Day! -fallenwitch

Bare Naked by Dee    (Reviews - 49)

Aurors-in-training get paid shit and Ginny wants her independence. Which wouldn't be a problem for Draco if Blaise didn't have a fetish for naked Muggles.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 8035 | Read count: 4039 | Published: May 05, 2005 | Updated: May 05, 2005
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Reviewer: Persephone33 Signed
Date: Jan 05, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Bare Naked

This was brilliant! Funny ans well written, I laughed out loud several times! I especially loved the Quidditch posters... and Narcissa's and then Draco's subsequent reaction to the wedding topping her garden party. Dolphin Wrangler, indeed. Cheers!

Quidditch by obssessedmadwoman    (Reviews - 57)

Draco decides to break it off with Ginny as he's engaged to Parkinson (who else?). Quidditch reveals all. Inexcusable fluff.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 6 | Word count: 21491 | Read count: 19820 | Published: May 22, 2005 | Updated: Jul 26, 2005
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Reviewer: Persephone33 Signed
Date: Dec 05, 2006 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I really think I might cry. Oh, that Hurt. So. Much.

Really gripping story, though. Trying not to hate. Wow. I'm actually in pain, a little. Congrats on writing such a viscerally challenging story.

The More Things Stay the Same by Embellished    (Reviews - 25)

At a reunion, Ginny finds that although many things at Hogwarts have stayed the same, not everything (or everyone) is as she remembers.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: OotP and below
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 2 | Word count: 11264 | Read count: 7809 | Published: Jun 16, 2005 | Updated: Jun 30, 2005
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Date: Sep 16, 2006 Title: Chapter 2: Epilogue

THAT was a perfectly lovely story, and I, for one, liked the epilogue very much. Thanks!

A Bit of the Dark Sinister by Echo    (Reviews - 280)

Draco and Ginny had a "moment" in the past that resulted in... another person. A person whose Malfoyishness was always mistaken for Weasley spunk.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Romance, Humor, Drama
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 16 | Word count: 36073 | Read count: 135978 | Published: Jul 26, 2005 | Updated: Jul 26, 2005
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Reviewer: Persephone33 Signed
Date: Sep 24, 2006 Title: Chapter 15: heart

I read this forever ago and really liked it, but came back to re-read once Mynuet told me you were from my state on the forums! Anyway, great story... I love your Snape... and how even the secondary characters in your story are three dimensional. Cheers!

I Have Never Felt Your Fear by Echo    (Reviews - 254)

Ginny learns a thing or two about what being a Slytherin can really be like through an unexpected source.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Romance, Humor, Drama, Smut
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 21 | Word count: 65843 | Read count: 145026 | Published: Jul 27, 2005 | Updated: Jul 27, 2005
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Reviewer: Persephone33 Signed
Date: Aug 18, 2006 Title: Chapter 5: I think she likes you

I giggled a LOT about the arse cheeks line. Very funny. The whole fic (thus far) is very well written and FUNNY! I'm enjoying it very much.

Reviewer: Persephone33 Signed
Date: Aug 18, 2006 Title: Chapter 20: Who else would I be, silly?

I loved it! I read away the entire afternoon, and laughed VERY hard several times. You are sick and twisted, though, in a good way, perhaps. Loved the titles of the chapters the best. Thanks a bunch!

Dense by Jennay    (Reviews - 26)

God, she loved him when he was being dense.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Romance, Humor
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 2734 | Read count: 3584 | Published: Aug 19, 2005 | Updated: Aug 19, 2005
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Reviewer: Persephone33 Signed
Date: Aug 01, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Dense

I just finished recording this for the August podcast and just wanted to drop you a line to tell you how much I enjoyed reading your story out loud. You have an easy, conversational style and Ginny's internal monologue is all at once funny and very real. Thanks for allowing me to do it!

My Anything by Eienvine    (Reviews - 364)

It's an old spell and an older oath, and Draco Malfoy would have laughed them off were he not in his present situation. Things being as they are, however, being married to Ginny Weasley might just be the answer to his problems. Pre-HBP.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 21 | Word count: 119113 | Read count: 202744 | Published: Sep 20, 2005 | Updated: Oct 16, 2006
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Reviewer: Persephone33 Signed
Date: Aug 24, 2006 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter Twenty

Yaaaaaay! Finally! Finally! I can't tell you how angry I was going to be if you killed him off! Thank heavens! And Bernard. He knew how it should have been all along. Cheeky elf.

Reviewer: Persephone33 Signed
Date: Oct 16, 2006 Title: Chapter 21: Epilogue

What a lovely ending! *sniffles that it's over* The whole chapter was just beautiful. I like Draco's little joke that he and Harry had always been best friends (brilliant) and that Ginny got him to go out and greet the guests by saying he wanted everyone to see "how pretty" he was. (I laughed. Hard.) Thanks so much for a wonderful story.

Along Came A Wizard by fallenwitch    (Reviews - 642)

A bet, a wanted witch, and a magical contract land Draco in a most unexpected situation. Can his Slytherin soul survive intact or will he succumb to one redheaded witch in bondage? Snarky humor, romance, and a pinch of angst. “I don’t want it. I didn’t order it. Now leave me the fuck alone.” He slammed the door closed. Only it didn’t close due to the enormous boot wedged into its threshold. One loud grunt later and it flung back open, almost hitting him in the face. Draco reflexively leaned back, and that’s when she was thrust into his unsuspecting arms.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: None
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Angst, Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 18 | Word count: 46917 | Read count: 42867 | Published: Nov 29, 2005 | Updated: Jan 18, 2007
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Reviewer: Persephone33 Signed
Date: Dec 11, 2006 Title: Chapter 17: Fuck Off

First off... I love your chapter titles. They make me smile immediately when your story pops up on the screen. Second... wow! Political intrigue, assassinations, etc. A brainy D/G fic. Third...Fuck their idle chatter and useless concerns. He had a witch to save. Ahhh. I adore it. If only he were super!Draco... able to leap... whatever. She'd still be married, though.

So, fallenwitch, when's the Bulgarian @#**%&# going to die?

Author's Response: Super!Draco - I love it, Persephone33! As for the Bulgarian @#**%&#, you don\'t really want me to kill off Christo, do you? Thank you so much for a superb review, as always. I adored it! -fallenwitch

Reviewer: Persephone33 Signed
Date: Jan 19, 2007 Title: Chapter 18: A True Pureblooded Witch

Okay, I actually squealed when I brought up the home page and saw that you'd updated. That clinches it, I'm a fangirl.
I'm not sure whether my tears are from heartbreak or the fact that I didn't blink once while reading the last half of this chapter. Oh, fallenwitch! I just want to grab your Draco up and give him a good cuddle. And Ginny dying... crap. I know your dark side. I feel that there's no hope for her. Bad words!

The first paragraph rocked, by the by, and I loved the theatrical metaphors, of course. :) Excellent chapter. Excellent.