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Real name: Manu
Registered: Aug 18, 2006
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Beta/ beta-reader/ Avid reviewer, always have a coment about everythign i read, not alwayas nice, but try to be constructive!
=)
I love D/G and romance so i like the fics where in the end everything turns out ok for them. Without one or both dying.

Reviews by choravenclaw

Here Now by smprsgrrl    (Reviews - 20)

They both had their reasons in the beginning of it, but as their relationship changed, so did those reasons. Draco and Ginny focus on the here and now.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 1658 | Read count: 2237 | Published: May 09, 2004 | Updated: May 09, 2004
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Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Nov 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Here Now

this is so beautiful
don't know why you didn't write more.
Is so sweet, so perfect, everything just...fits.
it's perfection between them
Congratulations and thank you for writing this!
;)

kisses

Sex-Ed by Citrus587    (Reviews - 57)

The seventh and sixth years are getting a little sexual education by their favorite teachers: Professors Snape and McGonagall. *Revised*
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Luna Lovegood, Pansy Parkinson, Ron Weasley, Severus Snape
Compliant with: OotP and below
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 2 | Word count: 6388 | Read count: 2200 | Published: Jul 31, 2004 | Updated: Dec 31, 2004
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Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Aug 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Contraception

It's a pretty good fic!
the project could last a little longer, more classes and those annoying babies too!
THAT would be fun, but more specifically...SMUT!
LOTS AND LOTS OF SMUT!!!

kisses

Exquisite Irony by Myanceris    (Reviews - 318)

Harry is dead; Voldemort won (or did he?); Ginny Weasley is all alone, left to the mercies of the Malfoy family.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: D/G Offspring, Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Lucius Malfoy, Molly Weasley, Narcissa Malfoy, Other Characters
Compliant with: None
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Angst, Romance, Smut
Warnings: Blood, Character Death, Sexual Violence
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 19 | Word count: 80110 | Read count: 92436 | Published: Aug 11, 2004 | Updated: Jul 05, 2022
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Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Sep 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Compromise and Cogitation

HI!
=)
This chapter was rather nice, but not very clarifying
I first read this storie in 2007 and finding it now with a few more chapters was rather nice, but i personally think you take too long to update
You wirte so well!
Simply beautiful!
I am dying to see the moment where Drac and Ginny will confront their feelings for each other and he will be able to tell her exactly how he feels!

I hope this fic can have more chapters and update soon!
it's such a wonderful one and it would be a shame to see it go forgotten!
=D

Congratulations on it, by the way, it's simply marvellous and i love it!
=D

kisses

Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Dec 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Revelations

RIght, well, i have read this fic about 5 or 6 times, whenever there was a new chapter or i just felt like it.
i don't think i have ever reviewed though.
So now that i finally have a vacation where i'm staying home i decided to do so.
i usually get this fic confused with Hasperied's apple because of the situation they are in...i dunno maybe you both got it from a challenge or eschange.
Anyway, here's the first[of many] review:



“I don’t want our son to make the mistakes I did. I don’t want him to receive the mark.”
“How do you know it’s a boy? I’m only about four weeks pregnant.”
“It’s a boy,” he said with conviction, “I can feel it.”
“And there was me thinking I was the pregnant one.”

this was one of the first times i actually smiled sincethe beginning of the fic.
It' finally some humor and it's a very nice change.

The first time i smiled was when she told him she was pregnant, it was not the usual thing for couples but i found it very beautiful and sweet and even his comand made it sound all the better!
So, yeah, i loved it!
=DDD
I feel kinda twisted for fincing this highly amusing, not to mention cute, fluffy and romantic but i just CAN'T see the bad in Draco!
I mean, i ddin't read the chapter when she was in the cellar, well, i ddi but only in the first time, and i skipped a few bits here and there.
And this is more likely the 7th time i read it so i already forgot about what happens there.

Anyway, called me sick or twisted but this is a very cute, fluffy chapter and i really loved it!
i think all the pain she went through was worth it just to get to this point, an even ground and even some banter!
=)

He gave her a ghost of smile, the first she had ever seen from him. It changed his face entirely from hard and cruel to vaguely boyish and appealing.
She smiled back and drained her cup.


I love boyish, cute Draco, that's what i missed abot the previous chapters, this banter with no ill intent and coming from both sides!
This is a changing point in this fica and i love it!
=D
Congratulations, by the way, on your writin, you do it superbly!


kisses

Just a Box of Chocolates? by Peffy    (Reviews - 189)

Ginny receives a box of chocolates from an unknown sender. When she actually tries them, she's in for a treat.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Romance, Smut
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 5 | Word count: 6688 | Read count: 28971 | Published: Aug 29, 2004 | Updated: Jan 22, 2008
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Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Jan 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Made It

WOW!
I just realized that I've read this fic about a dozen times[no exageration here] and never reviewed!
=O

Also, i don' mean to sound like a bitch and i have absolutely no idea where your astes about fic sway but...you're great at writing smut!
Why did stop?
i mean, your toher fic?
I got 10 reviews..this one got almost 20 ties more!
TWENTY TIMES MORE!!!
THat's HUUUGEEE!!!
Can't you see you're meant to write D/G smut?
it's in your destiny!

Please tell e you have a livejournal, or some other thing like it, 'caue really, tis fic is far too good to be let go of!


kisses

Paid in Full by Aurora    (Reviews - 28)

What would you do, if the price was right?
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Romance, Angst, Drama, Smut
Warnings: Blood, Non-consensual sex
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 3 | Word count: 6706 | Read count: 5460 | Published: Sep 28, 2004 | Updated: Oct 01, 2004
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Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Jun 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter Three:

Is this the end?
no more?
=((((
I WANT MOOOOOREEE!!!
This is bloody brilliant!
Please write more soon!
Please?
It's great, really, and i want to know how it ends!

kisses

Battle of the Bulge by meatvirgin    (Reviews - 13)

Ginny seeks adventure and change, and Draco finds out that she does it commando.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Romance, Humor, Smut
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 878 | Read count: 1590 | Published: Oct 27, 2004 | Updated: Dec 31, 2004
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Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Aug 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Commando

Oh FUck!
You should definately keep writing this, and make it extremely naughty too!
This could be a very, very hot fic and it would be a pity to put it to waste!
Please consider writing this, will you?i'm sure you'll get a bunch of reviews!
=D

kisses

Shag Buddies by Lissanne    (Reviews - 20)

Ginny is bored with her life and wants something exciting to happen, something to change...
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Romance, Humor
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 2691 | Read count: 2259 | Published: Dec 11, 2004 | Updated: Dec 11, 2004
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Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Oct 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Shag Buddies

i love this fic!
i've read it half a dozen times and it always gets me smiling and wishing for more
it's really really great
congratulations and thank you for posting it
;D

kisses

The Naked Truth by Jude Fawley    (Reviews - 11)

The missing section (i.e., the smut) from Chapter 8 of Sue Bridehead’s work in progress, “Unbidden Desires.” Her version is somewhat 'smoothed over' to keep it at PG-13 – but I have it on good authority from Moaning Myrtle that this is what really happened. ;)
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Romance, Humor, Smut
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 3733 | Read count: 1576 | Published: Dec 14, 2004 | Updated: Dec 14, 2004
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Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Dec 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: The Naked Truth

Hehe
Totally worth leaving a review, even if it's just to bug you
;P
Can you please write more fics like this?
It's soooo difficult to find such a good smutty fic!
^;^
Thank you for this!


kisses

Telling Draco by tkmoore    (Reviews - 65)

From the Hands Universe. After four years of marriage Ginny discovers she's pregnant, now how to tell Draco. Rating may go up in later chapters.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Romance, Humor, Action, Drama
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 6 | Word count: 43664 | Read count: 17885 | Published: Dec 14, 2004 | Updated: Mar 22, 2005
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Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Aug 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

HEY there!
=)
I don't think i have reviwed this brilliant story yet, although i'm reading itfor the second time.
You have a great plot and brilliant writing!
Plus you have kickass betas on your side (I'm a dragonsangel68 fan).

You're doing an amazing job with this fic and i can hardly contain my excitment to read the net scene, wih i hope features Jade and Blaise.
I completely love Blaise, he's like my second man (first being Draco, of course). And i hope that even if he takess the news poorly, or just tragically bad, Jade gets the chance to talk to him properly and have him on her hands before telling him. Also, deppending on his reacton, i hope she goes to Ginny and pansy and them their husbands and they can all have a go at talking to Blaise, in the end of this plot line, it would be nice if Jade heself was the one who got to bring him around, although i must admit i love Ginny's influence over Blaise!
;)
I hope you'll be updating this brilliant fic soon, i can hardly contain my excitment to see this!
=D

Kisses

Baking Lessons by Embellished    (Reviews - 32)

Draco finds Ginny baking in the kitchens. Has he bitten off more than he can chew?
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: OotP and below
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
Table of Contents

Chapters: 1 | Word count: 4372 | Read count: 6862 | Published: Jan 30, 2005 | Updated: Jan 30, 2005
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Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Dec 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Baking Lessons

=DDD
this was really really good, although i didn't like the fact that he got to call her Ginny face on...for her i can understand because she knew she fancied him and she made an effort but he kind of wanted her and wasn't even sure, so to go out screeeching her name was a very un-malfoy-like thing to do!

Nevertheless this was really good and i enjoyed it immensily!
congratulations on your writing and plotting!


kisses

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed the story!

The Way to a Man's Heart... by vinofaerie    (Reviews - 25)

In dire need of funds, Ginny accepts the position of chef in the Malfoy household after the house elf liberation. Will she get more than she bargined for?
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 3 | Word count: 14115 | Read count: 1641 | Published: Feb 03, 2005 | Updated: Mar 22, 2005
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Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Nov 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 3:

So hot, wonderful and simply PERFECT!
i LOVE to see any one of them in the kitchen, especially due to their sweet tooth!
It was brilliant!
I absolutely loved!
Congratulations and thank you so much for posting this!
=DD

kisses

Pineapples? by moerae    (Reviews - 13)

She didn’t know what had possessed her to say it to Draco Malfoy of all people....
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Humor, Romance, Smut
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 3782 | Read count: 2413 | Published: Apr 17, 2005 | Updated: Apr 17, 2005
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Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Dec 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: One

hmmmm...
wasn't there more to this fic?
Whe he does it to her?Or is it another fic?
I could swear i saw him doing this to her!
In a dark hallway when he was doing his rounds and near a window???
Is my imagination goig crazy or does this fic really exists?

ANyway...great fic!
I loved his idea!
=DD
Is the pineaplle thing true?
O.o
;P

kisses

Food Fight! by Selina Kyle    (Reviews - 14)

In which Draco and Ginny learn about the perils of using baked goods as weapons.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Romance, Humor
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 1818 | Read count: 1395 | Published: Jun 10, 2005 | Updated: Jun 10, 2005
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Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Dec 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Food Fight!

Hmmm...i'm starting to like fruitcake!
;P
Is there a smut cookie version for thi one?
maybe lyin around your computer and you totally forgot to post?
I'm a huge fan of masks and i KNOW you can write smut.
It would be great if you could tell us exactly what happened during those 20 minutes and the hours that took for the potion to wear off!
^;^

kisses

Shared Room by MsBeliever    (Reviews - 11)

The need for space drives Draco and Ginny to share a room noone knows about.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Character Death
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 1352 | Read count: 2341 | Published: Jun 12, 2005 | Updated: Jun 12, 2005
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Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Sep 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: 1

Well this was sweet and fluffy, i like long stories but this was awfully nice and i enjoyed it immensly!
=)
congratulations on your first writing!

kisses

Bored, Are You? by MiSs_AiR_HeAd    (Reviews - 19)

Draco's bored and Ginny certainly knows how to help the young Malfoy.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Romance, Smut
Warnings: Sexual Violence
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 1083 | Read count: 3834 | Published: Aug 01, 2005 | Updated: Aug 01, 2005
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Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Dec 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Bored, Are You?

i HAVE to know....why ddin't you continue this???
It's so hot and has sooo much potential!!!
I can't believe you just abandoed it!
please tell me you shall continue not only this one but your other fics as well


kisses

Ginny Weasley and the Online D8 by twiddlekinks    (Reviews - 164)

The wizard dating scene is utterly boring. Tired of the same old stuff, Ginny Weasley turns to the Internet, specifically online dating services. Whom does she find?
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 10 | Word count: 38476 | Read count: 5807 | Published: Aug 23, 2005 | Updated: Nov 24, 2006
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Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Aug 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: In Which the Two Enjoy Some Food for Thought

Just when the REAL fun was about to begin you stopped?
This was REALLY REALLY good!
I was sooo looking forward to see Draco showing her what porn was.
More excited about her dancing with him!
It would be incredible to have her dancing and rubbing herself against him! Even more so to see how she would react when she realized her dancing actually ressembled the porn he decided to show her!
=D
sorry abuot my rambling i was just really excited about this story!
;)
Anyway i hope you write more chapters soon!

kisses

Vineyard Summer by jessica k malfoy    (Reviews - 387)

Ginny Weasley is sent to stay with her grandparents until the war ends, as her parents want to keep her out of harm's way. Her grandparents have another guest, another person in hiding, and a relationship quickly blossoms between them. However, with the war and so many secrets around them, Ginny isn't sure how to make it work. Fluffy occasionally, but things can't always be perfect, can they? Decisions have to be made and consequences dealt with.

For a fleeting moment, she imagined that they would never hear from their families again, that they would remain together in Tuscany until they were old and gray, with great-grandchildren. Much to her surprise, the thought didn’t make her as sad as she thought it should.

Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: HBP and below
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Angst, Drama, Humor, Mystery, Romance, Smut
Warnings: Blood
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 23 | Word count: 123807 | Read count: 65510 | Published: Sep 24, 2005 | Updated: Jul 25, 2011
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Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Jun 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Blossoming

I loved this!
I only found it today and really loved it!
It's so great!
I can't wait for them to be alone at the villa.
Please update soon!
I liked so much i read it all at once! I am really looking forward to read more of it!
=)

kisses

Author's Response: hee hee, i can't wait for them to be alone their either :D i'm working on the next chapter right now (in which, they will not be alone at the villa, but it gets them closer)!

Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Jun 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Welcome to Tuscany

YAY!
o/
i hope you can update it soon!
=D

kisses

Author's Response: it will be! i'm almost finished with the next chapter :D thanks for reading.

Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Jun 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Welcome to Tuscany

WOO HOO!!!
I get to read it after I'm done with my gardening!
=D
Thanks!

kisses

Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Jun 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Eat, Drink and be Merry, for Tomorrow You'll Be Hungover

GREEEAT!
Although I would appreciate some more descriptions instead of jumping the juicy parts
=D
When is the next upgrade?
I'm really looking forward to it!
=DD

keep writing!
XD

kisses

Author's Response: do you want more descriptions of the juicy parts, like go full blown extremely naughty, or just more in general? i will take your answer to heart!

Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Jun 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Welcome to Tuscany

"full blown extremely naughty" sounds like fun!
The more general one usually gets me upset, my imagination is only good when i read things, then I can see everything perfectly in my head.but leaving me to imagine it? I suck at that!
And besides it would be real nice to see them together the way you picture it, I love the way you write!
=D

kisses

Author's Response: ok, i will work on it in general and even more so for the next time ginny and draco get frisky! LOL (but it'll be more than frisky next time!) :D

Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Jun 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Welcome to Tuscany

YAY!
o/
Have I mentioned that I love you?
serious, you're definately on my top 3, and I'm comparing with JK rowling and Stephenie Meyer!
=D

I'll be looking really forward for the next chapter!

kisses

Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Jul 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Sex Talk

YAY!
o/
Smutty princess lives!
=D
This Draco is far too sweet! For us NOT to fall inlove with s very hard.
I think you have just doomed all men!None of them are perfet anymore! =)
I truly need to get one your Draco's version and turn him into a real one...
Anyway... pushing my daydreaming away... it was a GREAAAAT, AWESOME, AMAZING, WONDERFUL, SWEET chapter!
It was a nice and fluffy smutty foreplay! =)

I hope the mooving doesn't take too long, I would love to read at least 2 more chapters before my trip on the 17th! So please keep doing your great work ;)

kisses

Author's Response: thanks for the reviews, the email and the link to the story. i will make the chapter where they actually get it on much more to your liking. i hope!

Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Jul 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Faith and Desire

YAY!!!
insomnia is sooo worth it!
it's a litte after 4 a.m and i just found out i love my nsomnia!
=D
I loved this!
thank you thank you thank YOU!!!

I have to agree ith Ginny on this one, they should stay out and enjoy the afterglow a little longer then they can head back to Har's!
=D
oh can we please have a shower scene???
please please please, pretty please with sugar chocolate, whipped cream and strawberry on top???
preferrably before they go back, please???

I looooved this sweet and semi smut scene!!!
You're the best!
=D

kisses

Author's Response: i will do a shower scene just for you :D sorry you have insomnia, but i'm glad you put it to use! LOL