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A Very D/G Christmas by Anise    (Reviews - 4)



HAPPY NEW YEAR! And here's Part 2. :) Can Draco survive Yuletide Eve when he's thrown to the Weasley wolves at the Burrow? Will Ginny be able to save him? Is Fred going to stab him with a carving fork? And who's George's significant other? These questions and many more will be answered in the artistic extravaganza that is... A Very D/G Christmas.

A Quote from Part Two:

“It’s true then,” said Fred, continuing as if Draco hadn’t spoken, He moved around George to confront Ginny. “You’re really seeing him. You’ve really brought him to Yuletide dinner. You’ve actually done it, Ginny.”

That did sum up the situation quickly, at least, thought Draco.

“Look, Fred, I know. I should have just come straight out and told you,” said Ginny, stepping out of George’s protective embrace.

“No, you shouldn’t have done,” said Fred. “You shouldn’t be doing this at all. I’ll do *him* a favor. How’s that?” He shot Draco a look of intense dislike. “I’ll let *him* leave instead of unleashing every hex I can think of. “

Draco groaned inwardly. This was not going to be a good holiday dinner.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: Future AU
Genres: Humor, Smut
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 2 | Word count: 9728 | Read count: 723 | Published: Dec 20, 2015 | Updated: Jan 01, 2016
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Reviewer: Ely_Baby Signed
Date: Dec 24, 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Gaaaaahhh! I read this the other day, but while I was trying to comment on it, my laptop decided to upgrade to Windows 10.whatevernumber and then my user account got corrupted and I just spent the whole afternoon chatting with idiots on the Microsoft Tech Support. Ugh.

Anyway, you don't want to hear that! You want to hear what I think about this! So, here it goes.

I love your writing style! I especially love your dialogues and the snarky remarks from both Ginny and Draco. I started cackling at "And may I say that the elf outfit is adorable; I knew it would be." and didn't manage to stop till the very end. Honestly, I don't want you to introduce any other character - even though, I'm dying to know what the reactions of the Weasleys will be when Draco is introduced to them as Ginny's boyfriend - because I just want to read more and more dialogue between the two of them. Love it that much.

Another thing that I love is the atmosphere, properly Christmassy and absolutely lovely. The pictures that you've added (which are adorable and I am in awe of your talents) are just as fantastic at setting the mood. I love Ginny's clothes and Draco's face. LOL! He's adorable.

I also adore the two of them together, I mean, they obviously love each other but they're not cheesy about it, au contraire, they're actually very relaxed and fun to read. And the details you've added are brilliant, I want to steal the collapisable cottage now! LOL!

And now I'm very curious to read your other characters too! :D Especially Molly and Ron and Cho. Oh boy! That's going to be good! I cannot wait for another chapter! :D This is absolutely adorable and fun, love it. Update soon (or as soon as you'd like, no pressure :3). xxx

PS--Also, Happy Christmas! :D

Author's Response: Thank you so much! :) I'm waiting to post another chappie until there are enough FB Ficlets to make up another entire chapter... although there WILL be extra things in the FIA version. ;) (For one thing, I don't really need to get in trouble with FB over content... :P If you ever read cakewrecks.com, Jen has a couple of great stories about FB censorship when she posted pics of turkey cakes. yep, turkey cakes.) More soon! And Happy Holidays to you too!!