He would have been happy to admit defeat. Admit that he had made a mistake, hurt her, and brought this upon himself. But she didn’t ask for his admittance, didn’t wish to deal punishment or see him pay. She just wanted out.Category: Completed Short Stories
this is such a powerful story. i hope you decide to continue, but as is...it's so strong. i can feel draco's torment in a raw way, it could almost be a character study. it sparkles to me! i loved it :)
What really happened in the DH Epilogue of Doom. Poor, poor Harry, so very clueless...Category: Works in Progress
Chapter SIXTY-NINE quote of the day:
Ginny scowled at him. “You don’t know me very well.”
Draco shook his head, his eyes more sorrowful than ever. “No. I don’t. Eternity wouldn’t be long enough for that.”
“Why do I feel as if we’ve suddenly wandered into the set of a men’s cologne commercial?” complained Lucifer.
“Can’t you keep your damn mouth shut, Lucifer?” spat Draco.
“Please… really… I don’t think you should talk to him that way,” whispered Ginny.
this story just gets more and more powerful. i have to say it's my favorite anise-fic, i think that has a lot to do with the daily updates ;) i understand why ginny did what she did, but it doesn't make it any less heartwrenching-- i can't imagine how they get out of this mess!! what i'm wondering though, is what about the times that ginny has said i love you to draco before? do they not count? and why have the angels not come until now, some 18yrs later? do they have to be standing on platform 9 3/4 for the consequences to hit? anyway, i'm looking forward to answers and more mystery :D
oh, that bright light ginny saw by her bedside was draco in his glimmering demon self, wasn't it? i hope so!! i think your portrayals of arthur and molly are spot on and i can't wait for what molly's huge secret is.
Zombie Draco and Ginny meet under the watchful eye of the Moon, that shimmering Peeping Tom.Category: Completed Short Stories
it was boring?!
i love this- the spacing, the way poetic way it forces you to think and backtrack and enjoy the way the words are put together, like there's art not only in the meaning, but the composition.
overall, just a great read. a style of its own, and each small part has beauty-- lovely [:
Author's Response: Thank you so much, you really have no idea how much this means to me. I almost cried I was so taken aback. And thank you for not just simplying saying, \'It was good\', because then I never would have known what you liked about it. Really, thank you. You have no idea.