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Irritations by Mynuet    (Reviews - 99)

An essay written by your Site Mommy on the topic of things that those of us who read through and approve your fics wish you wouldn't do.
Category: Essays
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 3554 | Read count: 8789 | Published: May 30, 2005 | Updated: May 30, 2005
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Reviewer: Fire Unicorn Signed
Date: Sep 15, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Irritations

Thank you every so much mynuet for posting this. Especially the spelling and grammar. I'm english and there are certain american expressions, which, used in an english boarding school set my nerves on edge. So thank you for these guidelines as to what is and isn't appropriate in fanfiction *skims post to try and squash and spelling and grammar errors, and hopes for the best*



p.s Found the "go little troll go" response hilarious.

Cherry Tulips by Cheeseandgreen    (Reviews - 74)

It's an old age tradition - bestowed upon those who deserve. Ginny's experiencing an unwanted boyfriend, Hermione is completely shocked at the morals of the world, and a new tradition sends an entire school into a chaos that no one can handle.

Will things fall into place? Or will they tragically end with cirumstances unbelievable to those around them?

Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: Blaise Zabini (boy), Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Hermione Granger, Other Characters, Pansy Parkinson, Ron Weasley
Compliant with: None
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Action, Angst, Drama, Mystery, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 4 | Word count: 13365 | Read count: 8017 | Published: Jul 05, 2007 | Updated: Mar 14, 2009
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Reviewer: Fire Unicorn Signed
Date: Jul 06, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: The Desire

More more (we cry)! I'm intrigued! Please post the next chapter soon, the suspense may kill me :D

Demented Cherubs by CCC    (Reviews - 455)

Valentine's Day brings a surprise, but not the one Ginny was hoping for.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Compliant with: GoF and below
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 15 | Word count: 34511 | Read count: 63697 | Published: Sep 12, 2007 | Updated: Jul 04, 2010
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Reviewer: Fire Unicorn Signed
Date: Sep 13, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

*Bounces* can we have more? pretty please? there's only 1 chappie and i'm already hooked. Brilliant!

Author's Response: Thank you for the enthusiasm. I\'ll try to update asap.

Reviewer: Fire Unicorn Signed
Date: Dec 10, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

More more more, pretty please? With cream and cherries on top. :D

Author's Response: That\'s too tempting an offer to refuse. : )

Reviewer: Fire Unicorn Signed
Date: Jul 29, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Finally!

You have absolutely no idea howw glad i am you've updated this (though the gushing of happy in this review may give you a clue)

It's one of the truest characterisations of these characters in this type of setting.

It's wonderful that they're actually having to develop their relationship and that they're not totally accepting of one another.

Also the humour, yay for them all but especially Pansy and Draco because their slightly sarcastic humour is spot on.

So a HUGE thank you, and please don't be tempted ever to abandon this fic. A little bit of happy would be stripped from my day and i'd die from curiosity

right, gushing over :D

Cowards by livvyharris    (Reviews - 49)

"He hasn’t woken up beside her in almost twenty years, but he still wakes each morning thinking she’s there."

Nineteen years later, Astoria watches her husband and Ginny Potter at the train station.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: Other Characters
Compliant with: Fully compliant
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 712 | Read count: 4822 | Published: Apr 30, 2008 | Updated: Apr 30, 2008
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Reviewer: Fire Unicorn Signed
Date: Apr 30, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Cowards

Now normally i'm not a review bunny, very bad of me i know. However having just read this i couldn't NOT write a review. This was quite simply one of the best short fics i've ever read. I am now sitting here with a tear in my eye thinking 'gosh, how can someone cram all that emotion into just over 700 words' and yet you've done it. So thank you. I am also hoping fervently that a sequel may be forthcoming, please?

Author's Response: Thank you! I confess, I also often forget to sign in and review, but I usually do a better job after having just put up a new story because I empathize better. Reviews are the only way I can judge how good and well liked a story is. It makes me feel absolutely amazing when you say that this compelled you to write a review. Thank you so much for leaving me such kind words, they absolutely make the writing worthwhile. Unfortunately, I don\'t think there is going to be a sequel to this fic, as I kinda like the open ending. Nothing is concrete though, so...maybe. I\'m glad you enjoyed the story so much, thank you for leaving a review! :)

Lost and Found by Pipperstorms    (Reviews - 9)

To lose something is painful, to lose it twice can destroy you.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter
Compliant with: HBP and below
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Action, Angst, Romance
Warnings: Character Death
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 2945 | Read count: 2856 | Published: Jan 30, 2009 | Updated: Jan 30, 2009
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Reviewer: Fire Unicorn Signed
Date: Jan 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Lost and Found

Because i'm a bad person i forgot to leave a comment for this on the exchange, so i'll do it here.

If we'd had a category for Most Likely to Break Your Heart i'm pretty sure this would've won hands down.

And i want to blast harry into itty bitty pieces and then pickle them, and possible burn them after that.

Truly evocative writing and in many ways a little too believable.

Author's Response: Hmmm...I'm not sure he'd make a very good pickle anyway. But thank you for your awesome review.

Draco's Defection by CCC    (Reviews - 58)

Ginny uses unusual methods to convince Draco to trade sides. (This is alternative Hogwarts era and takes place Draco's last year.)
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: OotP and below
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 2 | Word count: 3536 | Read count: 8253 | Published: Feb 13, 2009 | Updated: Mar 12, 2009
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Reviewer: Fire Unicorn Signed
Date: Feb 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Loved it.

I'm currently sporting the biggest grin.

Thank You.

Silver Thorn, Bloody Rose by MemoriesToLast    (Reviews - 18)

They looked perfect, too perfect. To the casual passerby, it may have looked as though a master craftsman had merely left two, lifelike statues lying in the snow - AU, Ron contemplates two of Wars casualties. Implied DG, rated for character death.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Ron Weasley
Compliant with: OotP and below
Era: Future AU
Genres: Angst, Horror
Warnings: Character Death
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 1376 | Read count: 2241 | Published: Sep 15, 2009 | Updated: Sep 15, 2009
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Reviewer: Fire Unicorn Signed
Date: Sep 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Definitely worth it. Thank you.

Author's Response: Thank you!! ^.^