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Registered: Dec 22, 2004
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Dark Days by jessica k malfoy    (Reviews - 74)

As the war rages on, Ginny finds herself in prison underneath Draco Malfoy. The Dark Lord's prison is the stuff nightmare's are made of, but a chain of events causes the feelings to start changing. *COMPLETED* This is basically my own recreation of While You Were Sleeping by Burgosdamsco, which is an awesome story, just not finished yet. And yes, I did have her permission!
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: Luna Lovegood, Molly Weasley, Narcissa Malfoy
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Angst, Drama
Warnings: Blood, Graphic Violence, Sexual Violence
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 7 | Word count: 12959 | Read count: 20831 | Published: Mar 02, 2005 | Updated: Apr 21, 2005
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Date: Mar 14, 2005 Title: Chapter 3: Pain and Suffering

You did a nice job of capturing Ginny's state of mind in this chapter. And I love that Draco was faking...

Reviewer: Embellished Signed
Date: Mar 25, 2005 Title: Chapter 6: Beaten Down

This is getting really intense--I was on the proverbial edge of my seat in this chapter. I'm looking forward to the next one!

A Trying Breath by Ephemere    (Reviews - 131)

A horrifying experience has been pushed aside, and people try to get on with their normal lives. But that experience soon turns into distant memories. Distant memories soon turn into haunting nightmares. When nightmares turn into reality, what can a certain group of Hogwarts students do to keep a certain redhead from slipping away? D/G story you've never quite seen before. Contains trips to the library, snogging, unexpected romance, and dreaming Gryffindors.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Other Characters, Ron Weasley
Compliant with: OotP and below
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Action, Drama, Humor, Mystery, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 9 | Word count: 70478 | Read count: 48432 | Published: Mar 05, 2005 | Updated: Jun 05, 2008
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Date: Mar 10, 2005 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Revelations in a Broom Closet

I like how you have brought Draco and Ginny together. It is somewhat reluctant, but also as if that it is as it should be. Their interaction really seems to work well. I am looking forward to seeing what else you do with the story!

Sleep to Dream by CliodnaHPFan    (Reviews - 10)

Ginny Weasley returns to Hogwarts, expecting her sixth year to be like any other - but fate has other plans for her.

Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Romance, Angst
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 2 | Word count: 4794 | Read count: 876 | Published: Mar 17, 2005 | Updated: Apr 13, 2005
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Date: Apr 13, 2005 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

All this numerology... I'm interested to see where it leads. This is quite interesting so far.

Sub Rosa by CliodnaHPFan    (Reviews - 21)

In a world where it seems increasingly impossible to find and maintain a lasting relationship, two people find that love has not passed beyond their reach.

Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Romance, Angst
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 4 | Word count: 8200 | Read count: 1768 | Published: Mar 17, 2005 | Updated: Apr 07, 2006
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Date: Apr 08, 2006 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

This is starting to get really interesting. Poor Draco doesn't know what he's getting himself into, does he? I can't wait to see what twists and turns you have in store for him. Thanks for updating!

The Eternal Gesture by torndeception    (Reviews - 30)

A series of interactions between Draco and Ginny. Something I wrote to get my creativity wheel turning.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 1230 | Read count: 2422 | Published: Mar 20, 2005 | Updated: Mar 20, 2005
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Date: Mar 21, 2005 Title: Chapter 1: The Eternal Gesture

It may be fluffy, but it is quite lovely. I like the choices you made about what to say and what to leave out.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! At first I had a couple other 'gestures' in mind but I decided to keep it to ten so people wouldn't get bored with the fic. Considering there was no dialoge, I understood that some people would lose interest in it if I made it too long.

First Comes Marriage by smprsgrrl    (Reviews - 495)

You know the rhyme... first comes love, then comes marriage... Except it doesn't quite work out that way for Draco & Ginny.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Blaise Zabini (boy), Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: None
Era: Future AU
Genres: Angst, Drama
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 26 | Word count: 63058 | Read count: 146200 | Published: Mar 21, 2005 | Updated: Mar 12, 2006
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Date: Jan 01, 2006 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Ooh, the interactions between Harry and Draco are really intense in this chapter! Very welll done. I am looking forward to seeing what happens in the battle. Your assurances are the only thing keeping me from crossing my fingers!

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Date: Mar 25, 2005 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I love stories where Draco and Ginny get married for whatever reason then find love along the way. Yours looks really promising! I'm looking forward to seeing where you go with it.

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Date: Apr 03, 2005 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Hee hee! I can't wait to see how they deal with the rampaging Weasleys!

Reviewer: Embellished Signed
Date: Apr 17, 2005 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Ah. That was quite satisfying. Ginny was marvelous in dealing with her brothers, and the end of the chapter was perfect. Please update soon!

Reviewer: Embellished Signed
Date: May 16, 2005 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Hee hee. I love Ginny's response at the end. Things are getting pretty interesting. Please update soon!

Reviewer: Embellished Signed
Date: Mar 12, 2006 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

It's funny. I started rereading this story this afternoon, then it was magically updated at just the right time. I like the ending very much. It ties things together extremely well. I particularly like Ron's annoyance at the beginning of the chapter; it echoes the first scene of the first chapter nicely. Thank you for the story!

Not In A Million Years by Butterfly_Kisses    (Reviews - 4)

While trying to compile a list of completely ridiculous couples, a giggling group of Gryffindor girls stumble upon a pair that may not exist only in their wild imagination. (one shot)
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 3291 | Read count: 2721 | Published: Mar 30, 2005 | Updated: Mar 30, 2005
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Date: Apr 01, 2005 Title: Chapter 1: Not In A Million Decades

This is a cute story. I like how you tied it all together.

(Wo)man hunt by OverTheMoon    (Reviews - 36)

Ginny Weasley finds that she can hide, but she can't run.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 2242 | Read count: 6168 | Published: Mar 31, 2005 | Updated: Mar 31, 2005
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Date: Apr 01, 2005 Title: Chapter 1: one-shot

Hee-hee! That is really cute. It is so like Draco to go to those lengths.

Stiffies and Things by BlueJeanJunkie    (Reviews - 11)

One-shot. I, Draco Malfoy, am not getting utterly turned on by a certain female Weasley’s presence. There’s the hag now. What are those girls laughing about? They pointed somewhere south of my stomach and… Feck, maybe I am.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 1892 | Read count: 3201 | Published: Apr 01, 2005 | Updated: Apr 01, 2005
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Date: Apr 03, 2005 Title: Chapter 1: Stiffies and Things

This is fairly amusing. You do a good job of protraying Draco's confusion and denial.

Author's Response: That\'s a huge compliment especially coming from as established a writer as you. Thank you for the comment and taking the time to read this! I\'m a big fan! ;P

Brightside by jessica k malfoy    (Reviews - 40)

Ginny's got a secret with silver hair and a Dark Mark, and it's her fiancee that finds out. This is the result of me listening to the Killer's Mr Brightside 1000 times. Not really a song fic though cause I don't like those.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Angst, Drama
Warnings: Character Death
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 3435 | Read count: 2308 | Published: Apr 03, 2005 | Updated: Apr 03, 2005
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Date: Apr 03, 2005 Title: Chapter 1: #1 Oliver

Ooh. This is so painful and touching! Nice job!

Sunshine and Shadows by gotsnape    (Reviews - 197)

Ginny is looking for summer cash. Draco is looking for summer fun. Neither realize what they will eventually find.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Warnings: Blood, Graphic Violence, Non-consensual sex, Sexual Violence
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 13 | Word count: 100107 | Read count: 15466 | Published: Apr 04, 2005 | Updated: Apr 13, 2007
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Date: Apr 07, 2005 Title: Chapter 2: Tumbling Stones

This is an interesting premise. I'm looking forward to seeing where you go with it...

Author's Response: Thank you. I have been trying to kill this particular plot bunny for some time now. Little sap sucker just wouldn't go away.

Closure by ragdollangel    (Reviews - 14)

Some things just don't end.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Romance, Angst
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 2140 | Read count: 2908 | Published: Apr 12, 2005 | Updated: Apr 12, 2005
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Date: Apr 12, 2005 Title: Chapter 1: Closure

I really like this! Ginny's emotional reactions are really believable, and the ending is just right.

The Past Didn't Go Anywhere by Fearthainn    (Reviews - 90)

It is 2010, 12 years after Voldemort's downfall, and Draco Malfoy has returned to England at long last. A Draco/Ginny story.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 12 | Word count: 119172 | Read count: 84847 | Published: Apr 12, 2005 | Updated: Apr 12, 2005
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Date: Sep 08, 2005 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter Twelve

Since Mynuet's classic's drive, I have been going back to read some of my favorite stories. This may be my all-time favorite D/G story. Your characters are so realistic and the story isn't sappy, and for some reason it just stays with me. Anyway, I realized that even though I have read it multiple times, I never reviewed before. So thank you for this and your other wonderful stories!

A Matter of Identity by ragdollangel    (Reviews - 153)

A spell goes terribly wrong, leaving Ginny believing she is from another century.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Romance, Humor
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 10 | Word count: 11106 | Read count: 56096 | Published: Apr 14, 2005 | Updated: Apr 30, 2005
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Date: Apr 14, 2005 Title: Chapter 2: The Way Things Are

This looks like it could be quite interesting... especially with the way you ended this chapter. I'm looking forward to more.

Reviewer: Embellished Signed
Date: Apr 17, 2005 Title: Chapter 3: Introducing Draco as Lord James

I love Draco's reaction! This is really funny. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens on their walks. And of course what happens when Ginny eventually regains her own mind...

Reviewer: Embellished Signed
Date: Apr 21, 2005 Title: Chapter 4: Repercussions

This chapter made me chuckle. Now I am wondering how much Ginny will remember once she recovers. Hm...

Author's Response: So am I, lol.

Reviewer: Embellished Signed
Date: May 01, 2005 Title: Chapter 10: How It Ends

I really enjoyed this story. It is definitely a diiferent idea. I particularly like the ending--not entirely cut and dry.

As Darkness Fell All Around by fallenwitch    (Reviews - 46)

Ginny struggles with Draco's choice of becoming a Death Eater and joining Voldemort over his love for her. Stark and angst ridden.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: Character Death
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 4 | Word count: 2967 | Read count: 14941 | Published: Apr 14, 2005 | Updated: Apr 14, 2005
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Date: Apr 14, 2005 Title: Chapter 4: As Darkness Fell All Around

This is really powerful. I like how you chose just a few scenes from their relationship but were able to make it seem like you told more. Well done!

Author's Response: Wow! What a compliment. That is exactly what I trying to achieve. This stuff really works.

March 28th by sugarbear_1269    (Reviews - 25)

The Weasley family gathers to remember loved ones gone. *Please read/heed the warnings and read the author's note.*
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Graphic Violence, Character Death
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 639 | Read count: 2902 | Published: Apr 18, 2005 | Updated: Apr 18, 2005
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Date: Jan 01, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: March 28th

I think I may have read this before, but it just came up on the new random story feature, so I read it again. I just thought I should let you know that it made me cry, too. It is a lovely story.