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Real name: Eva
Registered: Dec 02, 2006
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The Girls of Hogwarts by sugarbear_1269    (Reviews - 55)

Ginny's caught writing faux love letters to Draco from girls in other houses. When he steals her sole quill in retribution, Ginny's forced into a twisted game of domination and submission. WARNINGS: violence, perhaps a little blood, D/s, and mind-fucks.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Angst, Drama, Smut
Warnings: Blood, Sexual Violence
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 4 | Word count: 10659 | Read count: 21433 | Published: Oct 03, 2004 | Updated: Jan 19, 2005
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Reviewer: Evalahn Signed
Date: Jan 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Fight for Dominance

"she shuddered out one single word on far too many syllables"

mmm, delish...
Brava, very well-written and, if I may be so bold as to say it in a review, helluva turn-on!

The Enemy of Souls by Jaden Malfoy    (Reviews - 125)

After an unexpected attack on Hogsmeade takes the lives of several loved ones, Ginny Weasley is left with only grief as a remnant of war. But what she never anticipated, in the wake of all the tragedy, was to find her will to live again in the form of a bawling, grey-eyed baby left to die in the wreckage of battle... the baby of Draco Malfoy. REVISED VERSION.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: D/G Offspring, Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Hermione Granger, Lucius Malfoy, Pansy Parkinson, Ron Weasley
Compliant with: HBP and below
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Action, Drama, Romance
Warnings: Character Death
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 21 | Word count: 170678 | Read count: 54652 | Published: Aug 28, 2006 | Updated: Sep 26, 2009
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Reviewer: Evalahn Signed
Date: Jan 05, 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Epilogue

Okay!
I'm done. Phwoar! Pretty epic, missy. To be honest, I didn't even know what I was getting into when I started reading this. Am I reading it late? It says you have no other stories, so maybe you haven't even written the sequel as yet?
Oh, all right, I'll get to reviewing...
Beautiful writing. Really. I truly love that Malfoy is a git throughout. I like a character who changes is almost imperceptible ways, but still holds true to the core of his nature. Ginny, too, but REALLY - Malfoy. And I wish Ginny would just GET IT that it was Blaise in the Riddle House... at least, that's what I'm going with and I know I'm right :P
What else to say... Not much, and a whole lot of a lot, I just don't know where to begin. I thoroughly enjoyed it and am glad I began reading it on vacation, cos otherwise my work would've suffered sorely!
Can't wait to read the sequel! (please let there really-really be one...)

Author's Response: The sequel is not out yet but as I am almost finished with the first chapter, I can say pretty much for sure that it will be out next week sometime! I had a lot of trouble with the plot for the next one, so I didn't get started on it right away like I had hoped. Anyway, thanks for reading and I'm so glad you enjoyed Malfoy's character! He is incredibly hard to write because I really do want him to stay in character as much as possible.

More Than One Way Home by Vesica    (Reviews - 80)

Written for the 2006 DG_Smutakkah fic exchange. It hasnít always been an easy road for them, but sometimes it takes getting really good and lost to find the way home again.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: D/G Offspring, Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Pansy Parkinson, Ron Weasley
Compliant with: None
Era: Future AU, Hogwarts-era
Genres: Angst, Drama, Romance, Smut
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 7 | Word count: 13761 | Read count: 26303 | Published: Jan 02, 2007 | Updated: Jan 30, 2007
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Reviewer: Evalahn Signed
Date: Mar 01, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Here take mine

Hey, I've recently been too stuck on mynuet to read anything by other authors (minus the Okelanis...), but this is really rather good. Er, I'd change a few things so it sounds more like britspeak, but the writing and storyline itself is particularly good. So... brava!

Author's Response: Many thanks! Out of curiousity - what would you change re: Britspeak? I certainly wouldn't mind doing some further edits on this. Skimming the chapter, there are quite a few things in there that are only used in Britspeak, but since I am not native to Britian, there is always room for improvement!

~Ves