Ginny's caught writing faux love letters to Draco from girls in other houses. When he steals her sole quill in retribution, Ginny's forced into a twisted game of domination and submission. WARNINGS: violence, perhaps a little blood, D/s, and mind-fucks.Category: Long and Completed
"she shuddered out one single word on far too many syllables"
mmm, delish...
Brava, very well-written and, if I may be so bold as to say it in a review, helluva turn-on!
After an unexpected attack on Hogsmeade takes the lives of several loved ones, Ginny Weasley is left with only grief as a remnant of war. But what she never anticipated, in the wake of all the tragedy, was to find her will to live again in the form of a bawling, grey-eyed baby left to die in the wreckage of battle... the baby of Draco Malfoy. REVISED VERSION.Category: Long and Completed
Okay!
I'm done. Phwoar! Pretty epic, missy. To be honest, I didn't even know what I was getting into when I started reading this. Am I reading it late? It says you have no other stories, so maybe you haven't even written the sequel as yet?
Oh, all right, I'll get to reviewing...
Beautiful writing. Really. I truly love that Malfoy is a git throughout. I like a character who changes is almost imperceptible ways, but still holds true to the core of his nature. Ginny, too, but REALLY - Malfoy. And I wish Ginny would just GET IT that it was Blaise in the Riddle House... at least, that's what I'm going with and I know I'm right :P
What else to say... Not much, and a whole lot of a lot, I just don't know where to begin. I thoroughly enjoyed it and am glad I began reading it on vacation, cos otherwise my work would've suffered sorely!
Can't wait to read the sequel! (please let there really-really be one...)
Author's Response: The sequel is not out yet but as I am almost finished with the first chapter, I can say pretty much for sure that it will be out next week sometime! I had a lot of trouble with the plot for the next one, so I didn't get started on it right away like I had hoped. Anyway, thanks for reading and I'm so glad you enjoyed Malfoy's character! He is incredibly hard to write because I really do want him to stay in character as much as possible.
Written for the 2006 DG_Smutakkah fic exchange. It hasn’t always been an easy road for them, but sometimes it takes getting really good and lost to find the way home again.Category: Long and Completed
Hey, I've recently been too stuck on mynuet to read anything by other authors (minus the Okelanis...), but this is really rather good. Er, I'd change a few things so it sounds more like britspeak, but the writing and storyline itself is particularly good. So... brava!
Author's Response: Many thanks! Out of curiousity - what would you change re: Britspeak? I certainly wouldn't mind doing some further edits on this. Skimming the chapter, there are quite a few things in there that are only used in Britspeak, but since I am not native to Britian, there is always room for improvement!
~Ves