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Registered: Jan 09, 2007
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Always Mine by Angelsea585    (Reviews - 19)

It wasn’t simply her exquisite face, her lustrous hair or her graceful curves that moved the cynical poet within him – it was seeing it all bound before him, bent to any of his dark whims, and the slow death of the fire in her eyes that stirred his shadowed soul.

Unredeemed!Draco - smut-free, but too dark for firsties.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Angst, Drama, Horror
Warnings: Blood, Graphic Violence, Sexual Violence
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 1228 | Read count: 2586 | Published: Oct 09, 2006 | Updated: Oct 09, 2006
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Reviewer: combosolo Signed
Date: Jan 09, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

As I told you, the story does draw you in and make you want to pay it attention. It mirrors Draco and his sordid need for attention from Ginny nicely. The decriptions in this fic are awesome, I'm always so concious of descriptions in fics as I can never get them right, but you've got it spot on. Enough to leave you with an impression but not so long as to make the story drag.
*jealousy*
=D

Author's Response: *Huggles*\r\n\"sordid need for attention\" - that\'s a beautiful way of putting it, I may have to steal it for something else I\'m writing.\r\nI\'m glad you like my descriptions, I\'m always worried I\'m a tad too long winded (as I am in RL). \r\n*love*\r\nCan\'t wait for you to submit your own!

Reviewer: combosolo Signed
Date: Jul 31, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

oOo!!!
How delightfully cruel he is...
You make me ashamed of my work with your eloquent sentences, I hope you know!
Mwah!

Author's Response: OI. Firstly, don\'t be ashamed of your work! Everyone has their own style, and you\'re an eloquent, sophisticated thinker who has her own, unique way of expressing herself. (Ie, hurry up write some more!) I think \"delightfully cruel\" is the perfect way to dsribe him. Hurrah! *Loff*

Mentally Infirm? by Angelsea585    (Reviews - 17)

The privilege of being Head Boy comes with specific obligation. Will healthcare and hi-jinks ensue? One can only hope…


Winner of the FIA Forum's November Challenge “Infirmary”.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 2 | Word count: 2305 | Read count: 6728 | Published: Nov 30, 2006 | Updated: Dec 01, 2006
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Reviewer: combosolo Signed
Date: Jul 31, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Accidental Volunteer

"...and generally standing around practicing his nonchalant pose."
I can TOTALLY see him doing this. I had a bit of a *gigglesnort* moment there... I'm off to continue reading the fic>

Author's Response: He\'s so vain, he probably thinks this fic is about him! And honestly, how did he get so good at all those poses unless he practiced them in private beforehand? Being suave is a full-time job.

Reviewer: combosolo Signed
Date: Jul 31, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Charming Work

*seethes with jealousy of Miran's talent and huffs off to attempt to finish own work...*

Author's Response: Pfft. *Snorts at combosolo\'s ludicrous, baseless self doubt and encourages her to work on her own stuff* :D