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Vineyard Summer by jessica k malfoy    (Reviews - 409)

Ginny Weasley is sent to stay with her grandparents until the war ends, as her parents want to keep her out of harm's way. Her grandparents have another guest, another person in hiding, and a relationship quickly blossoms between them. However, with the war and so many secrets around them, Ginny isn't sure how to make it work. Fluffy occasionally, but things can't always be perfect, can they? Decisions have to be made and consequences dealt with.

For a fleeting moment, she imagined that they would never hear from their families again, that they would remain together in Tuscany until they were old and gray, with great-grandchildren. Much to her surprise, the thought didn’t make her as sad as she thought it should.

Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: HBP and below
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Angst, Drama, Humor, Mystery, Romance, Smut
Warnings: Blood
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 23 | Word count: 123807 | Read count: 65455 | Published: Sep 24, 2005 | Updated: Jul 25, 2011
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Reviewer: PrincessWhizbee Signed
Date: Jun 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Blossoming

I like it! I hope you can keep updating!

Author's Response: thank you very much. i will be updating in the next day or three :D

Hesperides' Apple by ogygiasylph    (Reviews - 871)

When Ginny Weasley becomes Draco Malfoy's wife, he suspects neither her true identity nor her dangerous motives. But when all Hell breaks lose and their relationship takes unexpected turns, there is more at stake than preserving their marriage--namely, preserving their lives.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: Blaise Zabini (boy), Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Hermione Granger, Narcissa Malfoy, Neville Longbottom, Other Characters
Compliant with: None
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Drama, Mystery, Romance
Warnings: Blood, Character Death, Graphic Violence
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 33 | Word count: 166850 | Read count: 239192 | Published: Jun 29, 2006 | Updated: Sep 17, 2009
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Reviewer: PrincessWhizbee Signed
Date: Sep 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: 2. A journey of discovery...

Actually, if I understand correctly, the use of thou/thee/thy in old English was the same as tu and toi in French--the informal/familiar way to address someone. And they used "you/your" for more formal times.

(I'm re-reading this story from the beginning, since I saw you've finished it now.)

The Enemy of Souls by Jaden Malfoy    (Reviews - 121)

After an unexpected attack on Hogsmeade takes the lives of several loved ones, Ginny Weasley is left with only grief as a remnant of war. But what she never anticipated, in the wake of all the tragedy, was to find her will to live again in the form of a bawling, grey-eyed baby left to die in the wreckage of battle... the baby of Draco Malfoy. REVISED VERSION.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: D/G Offspring, Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Hermione Granger, Lucius Malfoy, Pansy Parkinson, Ron Weasley
Compliant with: HBP and below
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Action, Drama, Romance
Warnings: Character Death
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 21 | Word count: 170678 | Read count: 57073 | Published: Aug 28, 2006 | Updated: Sep 26, 2009
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Reviewer: PrincessWhizbee Signed
Date: Sep 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter Sixteen

Hey, I just read all of this. It started off kinda slow, but it picked up after a few chapters, and I'm excited to see how it ends up!

Author's Response: I'm glad you're liking it! Yeah, it took a few chapters to get everything in motion - not to mention, to get Ginny and Draco to do more than argue ;) Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: PrincessWhizbee Signed
Date: Sep 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 21: Epilogue

Great story! Will look forward to the sequel!

Author's Response: Thanks! Hopefully the first chapter of the sequel will be out this week.

Coming Home by CCC    (Reviews - 50)

Harry comes home, and Ginny finds she has to leave.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger
Compliant with: None
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Angst, Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 6435 | Read count: 9128 | Published: Mar 07, 2007 | Updated: Mar 07, 2007
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Reviewer: PrincessWhizbee Signed
Date: Jun 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Neat story! My favorite line was "Their friendship was based on insomnia." :D

Male Bits by Lirie Halliwell    (Reviews - 64)

Draco took upon himself the role of a chastity-belt when it comes to one Miss Weasley. Zealously devoted to his job, perhaps he’d developed the tendency of going a bit too far.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: None
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 1985 | Read count: 7174 | Published: Jul 06, 2007 | Updated: Jul 06, 2007
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Reviewer: PrincessWhizbee Signed
Date: Nov 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Male Bits

Oh my goodness. That was great--what a challenge to do dialogue-only! And the part about "fish bits" was so randomly hilarious. :D

Compagnons d'Ame by SMichaelM    (Reviews - 108)

Miss Weasley,
The War has caused a drop in the population of the wizarding world. To correct the situation, the International Confederation of Wizards is arranging marriages for every witch and wizard of age. The marriages are determined by a soul mate spell. Each couple will have to produce three children minimum. All forms of contraceptive are banned. Please come to the Ministry of Magic at 9:00 on Monday morning to be paired with your soul mate. If you do not show up to receive your fiancé(e) on the date above, you will be exiled from the wizarding world.
Sincerely,
Rufus Scrimgeour
Minister of Magic
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: HBP and below
Era: Future AU
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 6 | Word count: 10454 | Read count: 29181 | Published: Aug 09, 2007 | Updated: Jun 20, 2008
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Reviewer: PrincessWhizbee Signed
Date: Aug 09, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Somebody to Love

This is a goofy story so far. If it's meant to be humorous/light, I think that's fine. I really don't want to see any more Hermione/Snape (yick), and I'm not sure what your motivation was for giving Harry an underage soul mate (maybe we'll see?)

I think Ginny's line about Burger King was the best part of the story so far. More details like that would be excellent. I also thought this first part was rather rushed. It would have been good to hear the characters' reactions to the new law before they arrived at the Ministry to be matched up.

Author's Response: You think the Burger King part was the best? The nun part always made me laugh more. Interesting. Thanks for the comments!

I Hear the Secrets that You Keep, When You're Talking in your Sleep by CCC    (Reviews - 134)

Ginny talks in her sleep. Draco finds out some interesting things.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Hermione Granger
Compliant with: HBP and below
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 4 | Word count: 8013 | Read count: 32444 | Published: Aug 31, 2007 | Updated: Sep 26, 2007
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Reviewer: PrincessWhizbee Signed
Date: Nov 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was awesome! I was totally not expecting the ending!

Marrying Pansy Parkinson by Persephone33    (Reviews - 169)

In order for Draco to regain control of his assets after the war, he is required to marry. For Draco, this can mean only one witch - Pansy Parkinson. Who, you may ask is the Ministry liason for both Malfoy and Parkinson? Ginny Weasley.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Blaise Zabini (boy), Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Pansy Parkinson, Ron Weasley
Compliant with: None
Era: Future AU
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 6 | Word count: 10553 | Read count: 29738 | Published: Sep 05, 2007 | Updated: Sep 06, 2009
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Reviewer: PrincessWhizbee Signed
Date: Apr 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Awww! I know you're working on other lovely projects, but I would love to see the end to this one.

Reviewer: PrincessWhizbee Signed
Date: Sep 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Lovely story!

The Devil You Know by CCC    (Reviews - 1004)

Ginny is twenty four, and the war rages on. Draco is a Death Eater, and he needs her help. Of course, he doesn't give her a choice. Now she's surrounded by the enemy. She begins to see that not everything is black and white. Can she come to terms with her new role in his life?
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: GoF and below
Era: Future AU
Genres: Action, Angst, Mystery, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 34 | Word count: 69661 | Read count: 218156 | Published: Sep 26, 2007 | Updated: Sep 28, 2010
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Reviewer: PrincessWhizbee Signed
Date: Jun 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

You are a wonderful writer!

Breaking Frost by Eustacia Vye    (Reviews - 23)

It's never too late for a change of heart.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: None
Era: Future AU
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 4323 | Read count: 6319 | Published: Dec 25, 2007 | Updated: Dec 25, 2007
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Reviewer: PrincessWhizbee Signed
Date: May 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Ficmas 2007

That was a cool adaptation of Dickens' story. :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

A Closer Look by Persephone33, Mynuet    (Reviews - 101)

Fresh-faced Ministry employee meets her... nemesis?

Written by Mynuet and Persephone33.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: GoF and below
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 4 | Word count: 8042 | Read count: 24427 | Published: Dec 26, 2008 | Updated: Feb 21, 2009
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Reviewer: PrincessWhizbee Signed
Date: Jan 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Not Attractive. Nope.

Nice!

Die, with a "T" by gidge_8    (Reviews - 149)

A chubby Draco and the physical trainer from hell. What more can I say? A D/G twist on dieting and an ending sweeter than candy floss. Enjoy. :)
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Other Characters
Compliant with: OotP and below
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 10 | Word count: 34144 | Read count: 52586 | Published: Mar 30, 2009 | Updated: May 01, 2011
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Reviewer: PrincessWhizbee Signed
Date: Jun 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Be Prepared

Thanks for the update! This is a fun story. :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! It means a lot to know that you have as much fun reading it as I do writing. Definitely makes it worth my effort! Best wishes!!! - G

Not Quite an Affair by Rosalie    (Reviews - 522)

“You mustn’t tell them, Rose! Harry knows but Lily and the boys… you can’t breathe a word…”

When Rose Weasley went to her favorite aunt for advice on how to handle loving someone her family disapproved of, she never dreamed the older woman would have been able to relate so well. In the comfortable safety of her kitchen, Ginevra Potter told her niece everything and swore her to secrecy. But months later, when Ginevra notices that her daughter, Lily, is spending time with Scorpius Malfoy, Ginny realizes too late that the truth can never really be locked away. Children question their parents and their own identities and everyone must confront the past.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Other Characters
Compliant with: Fully compliant
Era: Next Generation
Genres: Angst, Drama, Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 32 | Word count: 108603 | Read count: 141708 | Published: Apr 11, 2009 | Updated: Dec 23, 2011
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Reviewer: PrincessWhizbee Signed
Date: Apr 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: A Truth to Tell

I've never read any "second generation" stories, but I'm liking this one, and interested to see where you take it--you have such a lot of leeway!

Author's Response: I'm not gonna lie, the leeway is wonderful :)

Reviewer: PrincessWhizbee Signed
Date: Jun 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: The Dangerous Musings of Comparisons

enjoying it!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Historical Artefact: Ink Traces, 2011 by bee5    (Reviews - 5)

The resistance is coming to an end: Harry races Voldemort in order to control the five Magical Sites that would enable a victory to overcome Voldemort's Elder Wand while the Hound, Echo, and the Thieves converge to overcome the Death Eaters.

Meanwhile, near Old Kerry, a comatose patient suddenly disappears, and the number of freak murders and kidnapping by the old brothels and night-clubs seem to follow the pattern of a well-planned route of vengeance.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Luna Lovegood, Pansy Parkinson, Ron Weasley
Compliant with: None
Era: Future AU
Genres: Drama
Warnings: Blood, Character Death, Sexual Violence
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 1781 | Read count: 2082 | Published: Jun 24, 2009 | Updated: Jun 25, 2009
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Reviewer: PrincessWhizbee Signed
Date: Jun 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: March 17th, 2011

Wow, very different and interesting so far. I will look forward to seeing more of this!

Distracting Ginny by CCC    (Reviews - 74)

The war rages on. Twenty year old Draco Malfoy is stuck at Grimmauld Place with nothing to do until Harry asks him to distract Ginny. Perhaps Harry should have been more specific about what he wanted Draco to do.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter
Compliant with: OotP and below
Era: Future AU
Genres: Humor, Mystery, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 2 | Word count: 3678 | Read count: 9455 | Published: Jul 10, 2009 | Updated: Nov 27, 2009
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Reviewer: PrincessWhizbee Signed
Date: Nov 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

This is a cute story so far!

My Soul Belongs To You by eveil woman    (Reviews - 122)

Married for wealth, Draco regrets his decision to leave behind his love and allow her to marry second best. Now years later, lust and envy fill the air as they fight the passion and want to be together.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter
Compliant with: Fully compliant
Era: Hogwarts-era, Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Angst, Drama, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: My Soul
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Chapters: 20 | Word count: 40738 | Read count: 65367 | Published: Jul 29, 2009 | Updated: Oct 14, 2010
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Reviewer: PrincessWhizbee Signed
Date: Nov 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

This is a good story, and I like how you managed to incorporate Rowling's Epilogue and still make it D/G!

A Girl's Best Friend by ogygiasylph    (Reviews - 66)

Draco is looking for an engagement ring for Astoria, but is it really what he wants? Ginny will help him find out...
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Other Characters
Compliant with: All but epilogue
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 7 | Word count: 22935 | Read count: 24290 | Published: Aug 30, 2009 | Updated: Sep 07, 2009
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Reviewer: PrincessWhizbee Signed
Date: Aug 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: 1. Pearls

This was well-written, but seemed to end rather abruptly. I could see this was not going to be a fic where Draco and Ginny get together (it would be terrible after the way you described Draco's relationship with Astoria) but I was hoping for more of a "you helped me become a better person" ending. But I enjoy your writing at any rate. :)

Oh Baby! by whyevenbother    (Reviews - 97)

You thought taking care of a plastic baby was hard work? At least it wasn't magical. Hilarity ensues as the students of Hogwarts learn a lesson in responsibility through Dumbledore's new parenting project. AU DG with several other minor pairings.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: Blaise Zabini (boy), Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Luna Lovegood, Other Characters, Pansy Parkinson, Ron Weasley
Compliant with: GoF and below
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Drama, Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
Table of Contents

Chapters: 4 | Word count: 9570 | Read count: 4936 | Published: Sep 25, 2009 | Updated: Jan 08, 2010
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Reviewer: PrincessWhizbee Signed
Date: Oct 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Hey, what a fun story! I look forward to reading more.

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Beneath The Surface by Flighty Temptress    (Reviews - 474)

Ginny is one of the few surviving Weasleys after the War. With little money to her name, she has been working a low end job at a nearby restaurant to pay for her Healer training. It's been a long four years, but she has finally made it and earned her license. Problem is: there's only one position available, and the very idea of it is appalling. Slightly AU.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: Blaise Zabini (boy), Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Narcissa Malfoy, Ron Weasley
Compliant with: HBP and below
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Angst, Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
Table of Contents

Chapters: 28 | Word count: 68659 | Read count: 78756 | Published: Oct 21, 2009 | Updated: Feb 06, 2010
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Reviewer: PrincessWhizbee Signed
Date: Oct 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: The First Day

Great start to the story!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: PrincessWhizbee Signed
Date: Nov 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Releasing Tension

Good chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Look At Me by DeLaLune    (Reviews - 336)

Ginny finally has everything she's ever wanted. The boy of her dreams, top grades, and a way to finally break into the Golden Trio. When perfection turns out to be less than perfect she finds herself seeking solace in another journal. When this journal writes back, she is understandably worried—until she discovers the person writing back is a fellow student. A fellow student who refuses to divulge his identity. Does she want to know who this mystery person is? Or has she already revealed too much of herself?
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: GoF and below
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 13 | Word count: 35569 | Read count: 19540 | Published: Nov 11, 2009 | Updated: Mar 18, 2010
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Reviewer: PrincessWhizbee Signed
Date: Nov 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Blind Eyes Never See

Lovely! I'm really enjoying this one! I will track it and look forward to an update!

Author's Response: Eee! My first track :) You made my day. Thanks for reading, new chapter tomorrow!

Reviewer: PrincessWhizbee Signed
Date: Nov 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - The Truth Hurts

This is an awesome story! I love it!

Author's Response: Thank you so much :)