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Omega-13 by gidge_8    (Reviews - 27)

Every teenager has a moment that is so horrible and embarrassing that they wish it had never happened. Usually, they simply have to learn to live with the consequences. But, she is no ordinary teenager. She's a witch with access to a Time-Turner

[Second place winner in persephone33's Great D/G Time-Turner Contest 2009]

Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: GoF and below
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 2 | Word count: 99 | Read count: 8222 | Published: Jan 08, 2010 | Updated: Jan 21, 2011
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Reviewer: erinem Signed
Date: Jan 17, 2011 Title: Omega-13

Hahaha, this is hilarious. I love all the casual immorality. "Jinxes were best done from behind, so there was no risk being caught, or worse, retaliated against." and -- "A moment of guilt washed over her at the idea of casting a jinx on a poor, unsuspecting firstie, but she got over it quickly."

Thoroughly enjoying the story! Thanks for the read.

Author's Response: Hahaha! It is so funny that you picked that out. In my first draft, my beta thought Ginny was too nice about casting that jinx on the firstie. So, I kind of made her just a bit more selfish. I do think it fits well. She is only 15, after all, and this matter is of the most *dire* importance. :D Thank you soooo much for your feedback! I'm so happy you are enjoying it!

Eight Ways From Sunday by Clio    (Reviews - 32)

A sixth-year ensemble comic romance. It could be standing before you, needing a bit of a push. Or sitting beside you, waiting for you to let go. Perhaps it's sneaking up from behind, hoping you will turn around. But sometimes, love falls from a clear blue sky, and you just have to catch it. How do you decide which is the right path, when you're only sixteen? Seamus/Dean, Harry/Hermione, Draco/Ginny, Ron/Padma.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Other Characters, Ron Weasley
Compliant with: GoF and below
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: Slash
Completed: Yes
Series: None
Table of Contents

Chapters: 15 | Word count: 69953 | Read count: 39916 | Published: Jan 24, 2010 | Updated: Feb 01, 2010
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Reviewer: erinem Signed
Date: Jan 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: I Wanna Be Your Man

I love this! I think this was last chapter, but I loved Draco's sarcastic metaphor about the "CEO", etc. I think I laughed out loud.

The first chapter was great; I usually don't like things from Hermione's point of view, but I really enjoyed that...

And last of all (although I realize all of this reponse is not even about this chapter; sorry!), I sort of wish Ginny hadn't cried so much when she overheard Draco. I would rather her have been angry and pissed off, but stronger. But I didn't have that big of a problem with it.

Can't wait for more! Thanks for the read.

Author's Response: I see the crying as more of a shock reaction, you know, that she wasn't expecting it. She definitely toughens up as the story goes along. Yeah, Draco's voice was pretty much dripping with sarcasm in that sequence! There will be 15 chapters in all and I'm posting them a few a day, so it'll probably be complete by the end of the weekend. Thank you so much for this comment! I'm glad you're enjoying the story!

Reviewer: erinem Signed
Date: Jan 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: If I Fell

love it!! especially the dean/seamus and the slytherin scene at the end. thanks for the read!

Author's Response: Thank you for reading! I'm so pleased you're enjoying the Dean/Seamus!

Year Seven by VickyVicarious    (Reviews - 12)

Just because the war is over doesn't mean everything's okay. There are some things magic can't fix.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: All but epilogue
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 6651 | Read count: 2916 | Published: Feb 13, 2010 | Updated: Feb 14, 2010
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Date: Jan 24, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was gooood. I like how it was never explicitly said that Harry died, and no one ever talked about it.

I liked this line -- "There is no way that many people could fit in here with her, but they all do"

and laughed at this -- "If Errol had carried it, he would have died."

Thanks for the read! I'm currently going through your other stories as well.

Saving Ginny by CCC    (Reviews - 54)

Ginny knew she shouldn't have agreed to test the Animagus collar for Fred and George. Thank goodness a nice man with grey eyes found her. He feeds her fish and lets her sleep in his bed. What more could a cat want?
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: GoF and below
Era: Future AU
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 2 | Word count: 4767 | Read count: 7318 | Published: Feb 19, 2010 | Updated: Mar 04, 2010
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Reviewer: erinem Signed
Date: Feb 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is hilarious! What a good idea. I love it. And of course Draco would never return the cat...

Draco's Dangerous Dilemma by Anise    (Reviews - 1418)

All Ginny wants is to get the upper hand just once with drool-worthy hunk of man candy and callous playboy Draco Malfoy before he moves on to his next careless conquest. So how did this simple plan lead to time travel, nefarious plots involving the most infamous whorehouse in the wizarding world, and the teenaged Draco’s achingly sweet, chocolate-flavored kisses? Even Draco Malfoy was innocent once, as Ginny learns all too well…

Chapter ONE HUNDRED EIGHTEEN Quote of the Day:

THE LAST CHAPTER

The minutes ticked by, long enough for Ginny to know that against all reason, all common sense, she still wanted impossible things from him. But she would leave. Even after today, even when her body ached from him and for him, when she could feel that he had begun to shape her to him, she would turn around and leave him. I will, I will, she thought.

“You don’t understand,” said Draco.

“Oh?” Ginny said stiffly. “At least he hadn’t touched her, she thought. She would not be able to find the strength to pull herself away from him, and she knew it.


Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: Blaise Zabini (boy), Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Lucius Malfoy, Luna Lovegood, Narcissa Malfoy, Other Characters
Compliant with: All but epilogue
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Action, Angst, Horror, Mystery, Romance, Smut
Warnings: Character Death
Completed: Yes
Series: Ever Since Draco and Ginny: Reflections on Their (Un)Natural History
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Chapters: 118 | Word count: 575068 | Read count: 257066 | Published: Mar 19, 2010 | Updated: Dec 03, 2011
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Date: Mar 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

i had no idea a sex scene where no one actually has sex could be so steamy!

Love it. I'm verrry interested to see what happens next.

Author's Response: Thanks! That's what I was going for.

Reviewer: erinem Signed
Date: Apr 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

“Just Stun me and leave me lying on the floor, if you wouldn’t mind,” said Luna. “Otherwise, it’ll cause ever so much bother, because they’ll say I let you escape.”
“All right,” said Ginny. “But it’s only because of our deep friendship, understand.”
“Thanks awfully,” said Luna, arranging herself neatly on the floor in preparation.

--I adore your Luna :)

Author's Response: I just love this Luna too.

Reviewer: erinem Signed
Date: May 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

YES! I love it. Ginny needs to do some manipulating of her own...

Thanks for the chapter :). Can't wait for the next one.

Author's Response: Oh, she will. There's so much more to come... ;)

Reviewer: erinem Signed
Date: May 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Awesome last line. Very nice tension throughout :).

Author's Response: thank you! I was hoping the tension worked. :)

Reviewer: erinem Signed
Date: Jun 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Love the last two paragraphs. Very dramatic, but effective. Thanks!! :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I worked on a few different versions of the last paragraphs, so it's good to get feedback about how they came across.

Call Girls and Killing Curses by Butterfly_Kate    (Reviews - 11)

A charity ball, a hostage situation, an attraction to Draco Malfoy: this is not the evening that Ginny Weasley was expecting.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Neville Longbottom, Ron Weasley
Compliant with: All but epilogue
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Action, Humor, Mystery, Romance
Warnings: Character Death
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 8685 | Read count: 4056 | Published: Jun 20, 2010 | Updated: Jun 21, 2010
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Reviewer: erinem Signed
Date: Jun 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

LOVE it. Reluctant, uncertain heroes. Which is how most people would be in that situation. Great chemistry between the characters, nice dialogue...

Thanks for the read! I thoroughly enjoyed it :).

The Art of the Insult by Ada Achlys    (Reviews - 33)

Can the love of snarkiness bring two people together?
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 4676 | Read count: 4197 | Published: Jul 22, 2010 | Updated: Jul 22, 2010
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Reviewer: erinem Signed
Date: Jul 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Loved it! Very cute. This made me laugh out loud:

“You sick bastard!” she exclaimed.

Malfoy gave her a puzzled glance and then snatched the card back.

“Wrong one,” he said, one corner of his mouth turning up slightly. “Here.”

Thanks for the read :)

A Game of the Heart by pinkblood    (Reviews - 71)

When Harry Potter leaves to go Horcrux-hunting with the Golden Trio, a scorned Ginny Weasley faces the prospect of a sixth year rife with loneliness. When an opportunity for revenge against the boy who broke her heart presents itself, she can't help but take it, even if it requires becoming involved with her sworn enemy. But games of love never turn out as they are intended, and Ginny may be putting her heart in more danger than ever before...
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: All but epilogue
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Romance, Smut
Warnings: Sexual Violence
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 9 | Word count: 17815 | Read count: 21031 | Published: Aug 10, 2010 | Updated: Aug 20, 2011
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Reviewer: erinem Signed
Date: Aug 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

ooooh love it! anger makes people do incredibly interesting things :)

Author's Response: So true ;)

To Inspire a Malfoy by girlMalfoy    (Reviews - 32)

What do an arrogant writer lacking inspiration and a rebellious redhead have in common? Nothing much. But when an accident of magic throws them together, Ginny learns what it takes to inspire a Malfoy.



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Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Hermione Granger, Luna Lovegood, Narcissa Malfoy, Pansy Parkinson
Compliant with: HBP and below
Era: Future AU, Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 3 | Word count: 10172 | Read count: 9238 | Published: Sep 02, 2010 | Updated: Sep 09, 2010
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Reviewer: erinem Signed
Date: Sep 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I like it! I've never read a story where Draco is a writer, I don't think. So far, I'm interested to see where this Pansy thing is going. I liked the foreshadowing in the first chapter.

Thanks for the read!

Author's Response: Thank you for liking it and thanks for leaving a review! :)

Wizard, Sorcerer…or Skill Monkey? by Alyra Black    (Reviews - 16)

When Draco comes across a group of students playing a Muggle game whilst on prefect duty, what will he do?
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Blaise Zabini (boy), Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Luna Lovegood, Other Characters
Compliant with: OotP and below
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: Dungeons and Draco
Table of Contents

Chapters: 1 | Word count: 2544 | Read count: 2965 | Published: Nov 05, 2010 | Updated: Nov 05, 2010
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Reviewer: erinem Signed
Date: Nov 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Wizard, Sorcerer…or Skill Monkey?

This is a silly sort-of-crossover, and I really like it. Thanks for the read!

No Added Sugar by starlit skyes    (Reviews - 5)

"You're back," she said unnecessarily, blushing. "No, Weasley," Draco replied with an elegantly raised brow, "I died tragically in a car crash, and this is my unbroken spirit that flew to London now attempting to exchange pleasantries with you."
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 1926 | Read count: 2704 | Published: Nov 06, 2010 | Updated: Nov 06, 2010
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Reviewer: erinem Signed
Date: Nov 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ooh, I love this. I like her irrational, emotional response to his letter and how intense Draco acts when he comes to see her before doing anything else.

Very nice. Thanks for the read!

A Travelling Travesty by Boogum    (Reviews - 20)

There were five people travelling on the Knight Bus that night, and none of them were there because it was their preferred mode of travel. Little did they know, it was about to get a lot worse. A lot worse.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Other Characters, Pansy Parkinson
Compliant with: OotP and below
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 1047 | Read count: 3666 | Published: Nov 12, 2010 | Updated: Nov 12, 2010
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Reviewer: erinem Signed
Date: Nov 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: A Travelling Travesty

I love everything about this. The first line, Pansy's sex jokes, "Matchmakers from hell", everything. I think I laughed at everything.

Thanks for the read!!

Author's Response: You're welcome, and I'm very glad you enjoyed this. I was in desperate need of a break from work when I wrote this, so I may have gone a little excessive with the randomness. But who doesn't want to laugh at the absurd side of life every now and then?

Ginny Weasley, Hit Wizard by MemoriesFade    (Reviews - 41)

Ginny Weasley was dedicated to her job as a Hit Wizard and nothing else. But when an investigation turns her life upside down, Ginny finds herself analyzing her morality--and having tea with a Malfoy.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Other Characters
Compliant with: All but epilogue
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Drama, Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 6 | Word count: 24698 | Read count: 8012 | Published: Apr 15, 2011 | Updated: May 20, 2011
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Reviewer: erinem Signed
Date: May 15, 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I watched the Importance of Being Earnest just before I read this, and I must say all the clever quipping certainly corresponds nicely! I like Marcus and Ginny's relationship, and I'm looking forward to finding out more about the mysteriousness surrounding Draco. Thanks for the chapter!

Author's Response: *blushes* Thanks! I always find my banter can be sometimes lacking and not clever at all. So thank you. I promise all questions shall be answered in the next chapter. :)

The Journey Home by gidge_8    (Reviews - 56)

Ginny skips out on her last year at Hogwarts to go in search of answers in a troubled post-Voldemort world. What she finds along the way is a mad-eyed mentor, a mystery around the murder of Lucius Malfoy, and an adventure that teaches her far more than she thought possible.

Written for tudorrose1533 in the 2011 DG Fic Exchange. Nominated in six categories, winner: Best Minor character.

Note: this story will have one additional scene that was not part of the fic exchange posting. It will be NC-17.
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Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: All but epilogue
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Angst, Drama, Mystery, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
Table of Contents

Chapters: 6 | Word count: 23640 | Read count: 7954 | Published: Sep 22, 2011 | Updated: Nov 04, 2011
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Reviewer: erinem Signed
Date: Oct 10, 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - The Challenge

I love this. Definitely not just a sexy scene for entertainment. Ginny's point of view in this is great, and you see a more understanding side of her. I can't wait to read more! Thanks for the chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I am not typically a fan of smut for the sake of smut. There can be such powerful emotions involved. I'm glad it came across. Thanks for the review!
Best wishes!
G