Reviews For First Kiss
Name: Boogum reviewed Mistletoe Madness on Jan 10, 2011 04:48 pm
Awww, adorable -- and hilarious. I must have chuckled aloud at least seven times. Pansy's kiss really did it for me, as did the Minister. Poor Ginny.
Name: Boogum reviewed . on Jan 10, 2011 04:36 pm
I've read this before, but I don't think I reviewed. Anyway, I liked this little prelude. Simple, but very telling. You managed to capture Draco's younger personality perfectly: imitating his father, but still uncertain.
Name: emilyhdez20 reviewed Mistletoe Madness on Jul 28, 2010 06:41 pm
Kiss me cause ya feel like it
Name: GoldenFawkes reviewed Mistletoe Madness on Jul 22, 2008 08:53 pm
Is a "muffler" a scarf?
Name: ExquisiteBeauty reviewed Mistletoe Madness on Mar 10, 2008 07:12 pm
Yay! This is so cute!
Name: Flipinpenname reviewed Mistletoe Madness on Dec 30, 2007 10:16 am
great job! i really liked this one!
Name: bridgetmalfoy reviewed Mistletoe Madness on Feb 01, 2007 12:28 pm
Name: CourtneyFaith reviewed Mistletoe Madness on Aug 08, 2006 01:50 pm
~This chapter sounded a bit fake. I mean, I know the the whole thing is fake, but I dont think this is your best work.~
Name: CourtneyFaith reviewed . on Aug 08, 2006 01:31 pm
~WOW. I love the tie in to the books~
Name: FrecklesForever reviewed Mistletoe Madness on Jun 19, 2006 07:40 pm
Name: Judibry reviewed Mistletoe Madness on May 02, 2006 08:39 am
I really should be working on my PTA stuff or cleaning house. But, I'm really stressed out today worrying because it's election day here and our school levies may fail. So anyhow, I decided to distract myself by reading some stories by one of my favorite fanfic writers. Hence, all the reviews from me today.
You are just so awesome at this! This and feast of fools are absolutely hilarious! Thanks for the uplift on a bad day.
Name: jessica k malfoy reviewed Mistletoe Madness on Sep 20, 2005 06:22 pm
this was great! i have a few favorite things from this chapter: #1 Ginny making the delivery boy hit early purberty #2 ginny trying not to kiss draco's feet (*giggles*), and # 3 "sauntering down the hallway in a way that Ginny was sure he had practiced in order to maximize the way his arse showed to advantage." i love draco when he's fluffy. and you make him wonderfully, believably fluffy. i mean, he is the guy is fluffy enough to like ginny, and annoying enough to tick ron off. he's perfect. excellent!
Name: Lynne reviewed Mistletoe Madness on Sep 20, 2005 02:55 pm
Name: Q reviewed Mistletoe Madness on Sep 20, 2005 12:30 am
So Fred and George. So Draco, too! and so Ginny. Yes.
Name: Faith reviewed Mistletoe Madness on Sep 19, 2005 08:43 pm
Too sweet for words! :)
Name: corvidae reviewed Mistletoe Madness on Sep 19, 2005 02:45 pm
LANGILIERS?! that movie is sooo old! oh but i MOST ARDENTLY LOVE AND ADORE all of your writing so much it hurts! if i could read one author forever it would be you mynuet! you! you should totally write more often these days because i this was the best fic i've read in months! *-*
Name: Embellished reviewed Mistletoe Madness on Sep 19, 2005 11:54 am
Hee hee! Fred and George truly are evil geniuses. And Percy is perfectly pompous. But I think my favorite part was when Ginny managed to get the thug to help her and then kneed the other guy. Thanks for uploading this!
Name: Ada reviewed Mistletoe Madness on Sep 19, 2005 08:47 am
That was amazing (as always). I love your ability to combine laugh-out-loud humor with fluffy romance. The bit where Ginny had to kiss Percy's back was great, as were Pansy's quick hands. My favorite line was "'They're going to die for this,' growled Ginny, looking quite demonic by the light of the flames, although this effect was a bit wasted as no one was there to see" which was funny, but also a wonderfully economical way to capture her character. Well, now I can go about my day filled with the warm and fuzzies. Thanks!
Name: hermionesclone14 reviewed . on May 28, 2005 04:51 pm
This was really good.I liked the irony of Draco saying he might mention it to Crabbe and Goyle when he showed them the article because that was when Ron and Harry would have been Crabbe and Goyle.I would have loved to see Rons reaction.He freaked when Draco talked about 'mione dying but,if he found out draco kissed his sister......ohh that would be bad. :)
Name: ronlover reviewed . on Dec 22, 2004 01:17 pm
This is very interesting. I think you should continue with this story. :) Happy Holiday!
Name: imelda reviewed . on Dec 15, 2004 06:27 pm
OK, I know I reviewed before, but I've been rereading and I just realized another great part of this fic--you do a really good job or showing how young they are. With Ginny's not-nearly-witty comebacks and Draco's imitation of his father and not knowing what to do when kissing. Like I said before, very different from your other fics, and very effective!
Name: where_is_truth reviewed . on Dec 14, 2004 01:36 pm
I just realized I never reviewed this. So now I am reviewing it. Probably my favorite part of this whole piece was the sort of waver in his bravado, the idea of the emulation of his father as a shaky concept. The ending was well-done. Now I want to read the continuation. Now. Right now. :-)
Name: ScarletAngel reviewed . on Dec 01, 2004 11:37 am
Favorite line? " He had taken it, like the ruthless conqueror he had been raised to be." Loved the little references to Tom, and to the article he was going to show Crabbe and Goyle. It was so priceless seeing him at a loss, not knowing what to do after he grabbed her hand. Nice save by him, by the way. Hee. Excellent ficlet!
Name: halfdemon reviewed . on Nov 30, 2004 04:49 am
Draco was completely adorable in all his Malfoy manner. But of course Malfoy's aren't adorable they're menacing...*snigger* his attempts at imitating Lucuis are classic. And teasing us with this ficlet is very ebil. Loved it!
Name: draconianshadow reviewed . on Nov 28, 2004 08:26 pm
Oh wow! I loved it. Especially when Draco said "Don't swoon, Weasley..." Denial isn't just a river in Egypt, Draco, it's a way of life.
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