Reviews For Loose Ends
Name: CourtneyFaith reviewed Philby on Mar 11, 2007 06:12 am
~Really Really Great. I just love it.~
Name: CourtneyFaith reviewed In the Beginning? on Mar 11, 2007 06:07 am
~I may have read this before, but it is really great. I love all of your stories tho, so it isnt suprise.~
Name: Flyingwithdragons reviewed Epilogue on Mar 05, 2007 04:43 pm
Brilliant. The tone and mood you set, particularly in the early chapters, are vivid and create a beautiful (if sometimes dark) atmosphere for the story. Some confusion with the timeline, though: in one chapter you say Ginny and Draco's marriage took place 4 years ago; in the next you say it took place 3 years ago. Other than that, well-written.
Name: sweet gurl reviewed Epilogue on Jan 23, 2007 08:30 pm
this is really good!
one of the best stories that is centered on politics ive ever read!
Name: saucy reviewed Epilogue on Oct 28, 2006 04:08 pm
This is awesome! You're one of my favorite authors!
Name: MyEscape reviewed Epilogue on Oct 21, 2006 04:00 pm
Another excellent story, onwards to continue through your works!
Name: dragoncharmer79 reviewed Epilogue on Aug 28, 2006 10:05 am
I absolutley love your writings...all of them. They are just able to grab the reader and keep the captivated and wanting more. I hope you write more soon.
Name: coldblueblood reviewed Epilogue on Aug 14, 2006 10:34 pm
I found this fic through a recommendation, and wonder that I had not heard of it before. Typically, there is something so difficult when it comes to actually writing about love that will last beyond lust. But you did a wonderful job of pacing and developing Dracos' emotional state---showing that happily ever after does not obligatorily come with a white knight (or instant 'true love'). The development of the lesser characters as well, especially Arthur, showed that love stories are not cookie cutter/isolated daydreams. It showed that the other people always have motives beyond finding happiness (or pain) for the protagonists. So many fics lack this understanding, and not only do you grasp the concept, but you practice it beautifully. This is a truly great fic.
Name: kerplunk reviewed In the Beginning? on Feb 03, 2006 03:09 pm
sounds really good. i love the way you you're writing this. good chapter really like it.
Name: kerplunk reviewed In the Beginning? on Feb 03, 2006 03:09 pm
sounds really good. i love the way you you're writing this. good chapter really like it.
Name: Rainpuddle reviewed In the Beginning? on Jan 15, 2006 06:02 pm
I am so glad that you are posting here on FIA. You are very welcomed addition to the archive because you write some the best D/G out there!
Name: LadyGinevraMalfoy reviewed Epilogue on Jun 28, 2005 07:10 am
I truly loved this story, but I must say, I was a bit disappointed by the quick ending. It was almost as if you lost your passion for this story, and hammered out a quick resolution. IF that is the case, I do want to thank you for finishing this piece. It would have been much worse to leave it unfinished. You have such an indepth writing style that captivated me. Thank you for sharing this fic with us.
Name: Fyrechild reviewed Epilogue on Jun 28, 2005 04:05 am
I really enjoyed most of the story- the supressed emotions, the potential for them to be released, and of course your lovely writing style- but while the ending certainly fit, it seemed like there were a few chapters missing. I would have liked to see the relationship between Draco and Ginny change and morph into a real, loving marriage.
Name: MrsDanielRadcliffe reviewed Epilogue on Jun 28, 2005 04:00 am
The build up was great, but, while the end was good, the ending was totally rushed. I look forward to the epilogue I know is coming...because Blaise and Draco are plotting...I can FEEL it! I'm sure it will be brilliant as well.
Name: Ruby reviewed Chapter 6 on May 08, 2005 06:51 am
Wow. My friend sent me a link to this story, and I must say its wonderful! I Love the whole plot (so far). Keep updating!
Name: stellar reviewed Chapter 6 on May 04, 2005 06:39 pm
oooooh. kewlness! :D
Name: stormcloud reviewed Chapter 6 on May 04, 2005 01:16 pm
great writting - i hope that you continue this story. the plot and intrigue are quite enthralling...
Name: Funnykido reviewed In the Beginning? on May 03, 2005 11:34 am
This story, wow, really amazing. This blows your other stuff out of the water! It's so well written, and you gave just enough information to make us curious, but at the same time, everthing is still clear and we can understand the story. Great job!
Name: OverTheMoon reviewed Chapter 6 on May 03, 2005 06:32 am
Brilliant! I love the way it is set up. The plot draws me in, I can feel the raw attraction between Ginny and Draco. I honest to goodness don't havve any criticisim. I will most definitely be checking for more!
Name: caps reviewed Chapter 6 on May 03, 2005 05:53 am
I love this story. The romance in this story is more of a mutual attraction and a tentative attempt at friendship. The story is very well written Caps
Name: Q reviewed Chapter 6 on May 03, 2005 04:59 am
Goood writing. No idiot mistakes and rambling verses on how they looked and felt; finally a piece of work that I can actually enjoy. I love the tenderness that's just hiding and waiting to come out. Thank you for this.
Name: Mynuet reviewed Chapter 6 on May 03, 2005 01:22 am
I love this story so very, very much. There's no overt romance yet - attraction and circumstantial togetherness, but not precisely romance - and yet I still get all swoonyat lines, like, "Draco felt an entirely inexplicable desire to reach out and comfort her. " And Ginny, reaching out for what she wants, the way she's all up front with him and that sets him more off balance than any kind of sneaky thing she could do - just marvelous.
Name: fallenwitch reviewed Chapter 6 on May 03, 2005 12:57 am
I just love your writing and the tales of intrigue you weave. The psychological build up in each chapter and the look we get into each character's mind is really unparalleled. I just loved this line, in particular this time: “They’re not quite sure whether I’m housebroken or not.” Looking forward to your next update!
Name: Bellasol67 reviewed Chapter 6 on May 02, 2005 06:49 pm
I loved this chapter, it felt very intense and serious...and the line about Draco feeling like the prey made me laugh! It's about time the tables are turned on him. You have managed to create a wonderful chemistry between these two characters and I am looking forward to your next update.
Name: Emeral_eyes reviewed Free Choice on Apr 18, 2005 11:20 am
Excuse me while I sigh with glee. I don't know how you do it, but with barely any conversation between the two, you've created so much tension and mystery around the pair...I'll be anxiously awaiting the next update.
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