Reviews For A Trying Breath
Name: LifeofDracoandGinny reviewed Chapter 4: Revelations and Consequences on Nov 30, 2013 04:57 am
asdfghjkl love what you decided to do with the Horcrux! Great plot/storyline thingy!
Name: Mioka reviewed Chapter 4: Revelations and Consequences on Mar 20, 2009 11:39 am
woah okay
i think i get it now xDDDD
thatīs really quite a nice story you made up ^^ i LOVE it.
the writing is still just adorable and specifical at the end itīs rather funny.^^
keep going
Name: MrsDanielRadcliffe reviewed Chapter 4: Revelations and Consequences on Mar 11, 2006 01:25 am
Ha! You know, there is one big attitude circumstance that I love in each chapter, and in this one it is Draco being jealous and not even knowing it. I positively love it!
Name: flame_kitty reviewed Chapter 4: Revelations and Consequences on Mar 09, 2006 11:37 am
Aw! Draco got jealous!
Why can't he just tell Ginny that he wants to be with her so that they can get on with being happy together?

::sighs::

Ah, amore...
Name: Meg reviewed Chapter 4: Revelations and Consequences on Mar 08, 2006 03:57 pm
Oh my, that was the most glorious ending to a chapter I have ever read. I loved the switching back and forth - don't change a thing!
Name: Nectaris reviewed Chapter 4: Revelations and Consequences on Mar 08, 2006 01:58 pm
Nice ending for the chapter! I really like this so far! I think maybe you should be a little more careful with your scene changes, skip a couple spaces or something because it's really confusing sometimes trying to figure out why she's talking to Hermione when she was just talking to Draco. Great job though, I really like it!
Name: imelda reviewed Chapter 4: Revelations and Consequences on Jun 25, 2005 12:22 pm
Great chapter! Especially good was seeing Ginny's ruminations about her past relationships; I found it really interesting and believable. I am DYING to know what is going on with Draco. I am also really sorry that he punched Seamus...as if that poor boy isn't getting a raw enough deal already. But I think the way you handled the switch between great day/awful day was really clever. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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