Reviews For A World of Gray
Name: v3456d reviewed Prologue on Jul 09, 2014 05:57 pm

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Name: ContessaNatasha reviewed Prologue on Jan 05, 2007 06:47 pm
I assume you will not continue this, as it has been over a year, but I do hope something will come of it. It is a great beginning.

"It had existed before me, and it existed until the day all lines were erased, and all the canyon walls tumbled down, and until barriers all over bowed down to the realm of possibility.
But we are not speaking of an epic battle, as perhaps my words have suggested. We are talking of a little luck, a little chemistry, and a boy and a girl. "
Beautifully written, and I really would like to read more. If you ever decide to continue this, or need a beta, let me know. (While I am not amazing at grammar, I am fairly good, and have some talent with canon and plot ideas, continuity, etc).
So I hope this continues.
Name: razzle_baby_69 reviewed Prologue on Sep 18, 2005 02:05 pm
i really like this. I always wanted to know what Draco's laugh sounded and in lots of fics i just don't like how it is described but a bark...i like that one. anywho it is a really good fic so far.
Name: Kaitie reviewed Prologue on Aug 11, 2005 11:42 am
I liked the way you wrote the prologue. It seemed like an old fairy tale. I can't wait to see the story develope more!
Name: Terri reviewed Prologue on Aug 09, 2005 03:47 am
i thought this was brilliantly written howeva i didnt reli understand 1 thing fully without addin mi own assumptions, cedric n thomas were brothers rite? but they were both prewitts(soz if i gt that wrong) n they were male yet werent they meant 2 represent malfoy n weasley? so i jst assumed that somewhere along da lines they each had a girl hu married in2 da names malfoy n weasley!!! im probs bein very dense bout this coz that mite have been ur intention 2 make that obvious which it wasnt 2 me, so i dnt no lol cnt reli c were this story is goin tho, which i suppose is gd if it isnt predictable unlyk most stories on this site :D
Name: Leah! reviewed Prologue on Aug 08, 2005 05:17 pm
Mmm. Gorgeous imagery you have. (Yoda!) I think this would be a better angst story though, as opposed to fluff. Though Heaven knows how much I love fluff. I'm glad to see you took most of my suggestions. I can't WAIT to see where this goes!
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