I'm really hooked on this one...I can't stop reading it :D
Author's Response: Well thank you so much! I'm really grateful for the review and hope you enjoy the rest. :)
Wow, that was a whole lot of talking! I really like how they're getting to know each other, in the 'Character' sense. However I'm feeling the suspence in the fact they don't know who the other one is! I'm pretty sure you have it written in later chapters that they figure it out and theres this whole dilema (i'm not sure if I spelled that right...oh well, I'm not going to get the dictionary). I put my trust in you that my suspenseful feeling will go away. Okay, I'm rambling. I'll stop with this review now so I can read the next chapter. Really love your story! When I'm done with this one, I'll read more of your stories! If there is more, not that I'm saying there isn't. oh rambling! Bye!
Author's Response: LOL! You're rambling like Draco does when he's nervous. Yes -- they eventually figure it out... and yes - there are more fics. I hope you enjoy them as much as you do this one! ;)
Author's Response: Awww. Thanks!
Author's Response: Awww. Thanks!
It's been a while since you've updated. Please do. I really like the plot so far. It's original, and you really shouldn't let it go to waste by forgetting about it.
I don't really have any big criticisms. Nothing really stood out as annoying or confusing. I would like to say that, though I understood it, and I'm sure everyone else figured it out too, the following passage was rather confusing.
" She'd made him laugh out loud the day she told him about making her brother break out in green spots all over his body after he refused to stop badgering her about her nonexistent boyfriends. He was always bugging her about it, and it was ‘obvious’ he had a friend he wanted her to date, but she told Draco that she just wasn’t interested in ‘him’ anymore. She loved making her brother suffer. It was ‘mad fun!’"
Though using the little quotes from Ginny's letters is a great part of your voice, you want to make sure that you don't use too many of them so close together, or it can be a little distracting from what you're really trying to say. In that particular instance, you were trying to get across the kind of relationship they had, and so it wasn't a problem. I just want you to know that in another place, that could be.
Good job, and for god's sake, update.
Author's Response: Thanks... for the review and the constructive criticism. I haven't forgotten the story, in fact, the whole thing is already written, it's just not typed and beta'd yet. I do post it over at ff.net unbeta'd for the girls on my LJ that just can't wait for it to get here... but currently I have been lying in wait for more updates from Anise (her new story is brilliant) and having massive morning sickness... but I promise there will be more here soon! ;) (I think it is 3 more chapters... and never fear about usuing too much of Ginny's letters... In the next chapters there won't be any (not to ruin it for you or anything! ;) )
Awww... This is definitely sweet, and a fantastic idea. Perfect roles, as well... I'm looking fwd to that ball you mentioned. :oD
Author's Response: Thank you so much. Enjoy the ball! ;)
It's a great story! Please keep writing and update as fast as you can!!
Author's Response: All done! Thank you for the review!
Another great chapter! Looking forward to more of the story!
Author's Response: Oh thanks! You rock!
I really love this story, It really is a new idea, please continue to update quickly.
Author's Response: Thank you for the lovely review. I'm glad you didn't think the idea was old and over used! ;) The fic is all done now. I hope you've been able to enjoy it! ;)
Aww! It's so sweet! I love it! I can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Oh Thanks! ;)