on Jun 02, 2008 04:18 am
That was...well...interesting. Betting that it would not have happened if it was Draco instead. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
on Jul 30, 2007 09:10 am
I love it! Please update!
on Dec 01, 2006 06:30 pm
I just read your recently submitted fic, which was very cute, by the way, but this one is *very* interesting... I love an unsure but yearning Draco, and the fact that you've kept it HBP compliant! I would very much like to see an update, if you haven't given up on it!
wishbear reviewed Undone
on Sep 30, 2006 08:16 am
love it. the emotions feel so real!!! i feel ginnys pain and draco's hurt and harrys- well obliviousness.
on Aug 13, 2006 12:12 am
Ha Ha Ha! A premature Ejaculating Scarhead! You know, Draco would never do that! ;) Ginny should know that too!;)
red-starlette reviewed Undone
on Aug 09, 2006 12:53 am
this story is just awesome
pls update soon , love it :)
on Aug 02, 2006 01:37 pm
~Gross...I would have thought harry would have more control.~
on Jul 27, 2006 02:26 am
how embarassin. slightly amsuing and i do feel bad ginny for that memory but whats a girl to do. i do hope in good taste she doesn't tell draco bout that no point in giving him more in his defense. wondrful chapter, can't wait for 7.
Name: Angelique Collins
on Jul 26, 2006 01:18 pm
this is such a good story. Please update soon!
on Jul 26, 2006 08:56 am
Oh, Ginny, Ginny, Ginny! Going along with what other people want is what got you into this mess in the first place. Don't do it any more!
Sorry about that, but Ginny is just driving me crazy. Of course, I completely understand--it isn't an easy situation to get out of. And I am looking forward to finding out how the weekend with Draco will change things. Thanks for the update!
on Jul 26, 2006 05:49 am
This fic is fantastic; I like Ginny's personality and the relationship she has with Draco. My biggest fear, however, is that you're going to demonize Harry to end their engagement, which is unfair. Sometimes things just don't work, even with good men! But then, the 'bad' Harry is a pet peeve of mine, and you know whatever direction you want to take this fic in.
Have to say, I didn't really understand the whole sex scene...was Ginny upset because she didn't get the sex she didn't want? And 'white *something* on her stomach'? Is she not supposed to know what semen is?
Sorry, maybe that sounded a bit harsh! But I was just confused by the whole scene. In any case, I love the rest of the fic and can't wait to see some more serious D/G time in Crete!
Author's Response: I'm not planning on demonizing Harry. The fic isn't about Ginny escaping a "bad" relationship to be in a good one with Draco. It's more that she's finding herself as an adult and as she does this, she realizes her relatinship with Harry no longer fits. Honestly, even though Harry is a central figure he's definitely second to D&G.
Ginny understood what it was (but she is a virgin), but she's in such a state right now that her mind wasn't working to recognize it. Also, it wasn't that she didn't want to be with him, it was just not the right way. She's really struggling because her heart, head, and body are all telling her different things.
Thanks for the replying!
Maelyn reviewed Undone
on Jul 26, 2006 03:55 am
I hadn't read the last few chapters so I was glad to see an update... and now.... I cannot wait for another one! I really hope something happens in Crete- like a kiss or something. :)
on Jul 26, 2006 03:05 am
Oooh! I liked this one a lot. Crete should be fun with our weasel and ferret... ;) Looking forward to the next one!
cassie reviewed Undone
on Jul 25, 2006 09:24 pm
*that* was just a great humiliating disaster. all i can say is, poor harry, poor ginny, and ew.
Name: Cathryn Aeiran
on Jul 25, 2006 08:04 pm
Ewww... Harry is uber gross man