This is simply one of the best fanfics I've ever read!!! I'm loving it! Loved the brotherhood, loved the demons, the feminine gang, everything! Excelent job!
Please update as soon as possible...this is really awesome!
Author's Response: Good to see that you enjoyed it so much. Unfortunately life has been a bit hectic for me so I haven't been able to update - I hope to rectify that soon.
This story is so good! I hope theres more draco/ginny action comming up!
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it. There is more Draco/Ginny action, however it'll take some time in coming.
I really enjoyed this fic, so please don't stop writing it. It's been a while since you updated, hope you will do it soon. It's my one and only favotite so I want to keep on reading.... Thanks
Author's Response: I haven't abandoned the story, I do plan on finishing it however I'm not quite sure how soon that will be. I'm glad you are enjoying it though.
This is a brilliant story! I hope it continues because I am hooked. It is very rare to find a fanfiction that actually uses literary devices. Your use of imagery and language is beautiful. I also adore you use of mythological folklore and demons! Please update soon.
I'm glad you liked the story so much, it's quite humbling. I haven't forgotten the story, nor do I plan on dropping it, suffice to say it will continue.
Thank you for your kind words :)
At first I was a little iffy about this story. It was a bit confusing during the first chapter, but I stuck with it as I am a fanatic for this type of AU story. The dynamic between Cass, Kiara and Ginny is a little unclear when you first introduce the three of them together, but that was cleared up a bit during the bar scene. Altogether, this is a really interesting plot line and your spelling/grammar is good. I hope to see you continue with this, because as much as I abandon stories halfway through, I can't stand to see other people do it. Besides, I'm not that great of a story-teller. Anyway, this is a comment full of rambling. Just know that I like the story and hope that it continues.
I'm glad you stuck with it. Also, thank you for your review, it is appreciated. I understand your concerns over the beginning, but I had my reasons. Had I revealed everything at the startup the story would've become incredibly redundant not to mention long. The story it self is already drafted up to being quite long and is seperated into three parts. The first is almost done, I have a few chapters to go and it'll move into the next which will be a year after where it ends in this one.
The only reason the spelling and grammar are good is because of my beta who has the painstaking task of clearing up after I butcher the English language.
Lastly, I don't plan on abandoning the story. It's been a while since I've updated and might even be a while before I do so again. I'm in my final year at Uni and have very little time to write. I'm picky and so is my beta so it takes us a while to come up with a draft we are both comfortable with posting.Once again thank you for the review!
Ooo can't wait for the next bit. Great so far.
Author's Response: Glad you like it so far. The next bit has been held up due to school and work, but worry not, the story will go on. :)
By the way I love the picture you posted on your page... they really look like Ron and Company....do you think that you will post one for the last generation of the Brotherhood?
Hope the next chapter is coming along okay....
Author's Response: I was fiddling around with Photoshop and came up with that, I'm glad you liked it. I don't know about posting one of the older generation, I might if I get the time to do it. The next chapter is coming along well, I just need to fix a couple of things and write a bit more - it should be up in about two weeks or less :)
Wow - I almost didn't click on this story... But it is rediculously engaging! I can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Well then, I'm glad you did and that you found it engaging. The next chapter is in the works. :)
Wow - great chapter! Update soon please!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it. Next chapter should be up shortly. :)
You are taking this story to interesting places.....very unusual storyline and I am really enjoying it!
please continue, I'll be waiting for your next update!
Author's Response: I'm taking it a chapter at a time to be honest. I have the general idea of where it's going, but plot bunnies keep jumping at me and it ends up going in a different direction. I'm glad you like the originality of it though.
wow...update fast please!! dont leave us hanging!
Author's Response: Sorry, didn't mean to leave you hanging, but there was too much going on in the next chapter for it to all be consolidated into one. Next chapter won't take so long, promise :)
Well. Those Death Eaters weren't so impressive! Sissies! They are going in to kill teenagers.... come on!
I can't wait for more=)
Author's Response: lol, they aren't meant to be impressive, anyone who hides behind a mask can't be all that scary. As for killing the teenagers, well, don't pass judgment on that yet. ;)
oooh! i want more!! that was awsome!!!!!! i can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it. :)
This is unbelievably amazing! I love all the detail that you have included, and all the character history, and especially all the sexual frissons that are flying about.
I cannot wait to see the rest!
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it. It's actually a three part series so there is plenty more to come :)
I love this. I really really do! The amount of details you have laid down in this story, I'm wowed. As always I have to tell you how much I love your Ron. This is so exciting, I almost don't care about the romance. Almost wish it wasn't there. Almost! I can't wait for more. Update as soon as you can=)=)
Author's Response: Thank you :) Ron has become one of my favourite characters in this story, so there will be plenty more of him to come. As for the romance, there is some in it, I'm not terribly good at writing romance stories, but my beta will make sure I don't sound too horrid. The romance comes a bit later though because the plot revolves around the brotherhood and I need them sorted before I can concentrate on their love lives. The next chapter is almost done and should be up in a little while.
Just wanted to let you know I think your story is one of the most ingenious creations on this webpage! Hope you get enough support for all your hard work.
Author's Response: Aww, thanks I appreciate it, very humbling that, especially since the work on this website is absolutely brilliant.. I enjoy writing so it's more for me than anything else. I have a number of readers in this community and my beta is outstanding when it comes to supporting my work. Thank you for yours as well, I truly appreciate it.
*Update!!!Punches fist in the air, and looks like a monkey on caffeine*
*clears throat and attempts to behave*
It is updated!!! More of the brothers!!!
And it goes without saying ...fantastic chap...I absolutely love the dialogue you have between all the characters, especially the 4 'yummies' (sorry that was from the monkey). One of the main problems with some Fanfics, is that dialogue seems forced, regardless whether it is canon or not, but your fanfic does not contain any line that feels contrived. Which is why the story flows so naturally.
*Patiently waits for more*
Author's Response: Thank you :) I'm glad you liked the chapter. It's a relief that you don't think the dialogue is forced, especially since it's my weakest point. More of the four yummies in the next chapter as well as Lucius and Sage so your monkey should be happy. The next part should be up soon :)
Really enjoying this story with all the interactions between people and not just draco and ginny...
though on that note do you think you could envolve a bit more draco and ginny and the girls cause really want to know n=more about the reason ginny is with them...
please update soon... xoxox
I'm glad you are enjoying the story. There will be more Draco/Ginny, but you have to remember this isn't primarily a romance, it's more action and horror. Fear not though, there is romance :)
Ginny's reason for being with the girls is evolving, it started out as curiosity and led to friendship and will evolve more as the story goes on.
this was absolutely fantastic!
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it :)
Oh, thank you so much for continuing this! I cheered when I saw it post. I'm anxious to see how everything weaves together.
Author's Response: You're welcome, sorry it took me so long. You'll see the weaving soon enough :)
Don't want to be a pain , and rush you but please more!! The ships you have going on are the best I have read. Question, what gave you the inspiration to write Ron the way you did? More to the point do you have other Ron stories with the same characterisation? lol!!
You are not being a pain, glad to know the story is still being read. I've been hit up with some computer issues plus work which is why there hasn't been an update lately. I'm back now and my beta has the next chapter so it should be up soon. The story has not been abandoned, and will be completed.
I like Ron as a character in the books, and I think he gets the short straw in many of the stories out there. He is smart, and he has a lot of heart. He also has a lot of people in his life who are well known for one thing or another and he gets overlooked - I didn't want him overlooked.
Sorry, this is the only story I have written which is posted. Maybe one day I'll fix my older work and post it :)
Author's Response: Working on it :)
LOL Ginny yelling from atop a priceless Malfoy table is priceless! Along with the rest of the story. Can't wait to see where this is going. I noticed that Skye didn't get his little 'meet and greet' with his demon yet. Very interesting. It's all very interesting!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it. To be honest, it's going in places I didn't think it would when I started it out hence the major re-writes. No, Skye did not get his 'meet and greet' there is a reason for that, it'll surface within the next chapter or two. Good to see you still interested in it :)
Great chapter. I love the way u have built up the suspense. Looking forward to the next update!
Author's Response: The next chapter is almost done, and filled with a lot more action, plus a little surprise. Glad you enjoyed this chapter :)
I absolutely love it. I can't wait until you update again. This story is definitely going in my favorites, are you posting it on any other sites? Or is D&G.com the only one?
Author's Response: Thanks and it's good to see others enjoying it. I should be able update again soon. I used to post it on FF.net, but have since taken it down and changed it quite a bit. Only the skeleton of the story remains the same, the rest is pretty much re-written. D&G is the only place I plan on archiving it for the moment, I have one or two chapters posted at a community I belong to, but other than that no, it won't be archived anywhere else for the time being.